Death Talkies: Wheel of Time [Apr/04 P66] - Page 31

Originally posted by: Pebblez

@ The Good Wives Club: I just read it today, i know, been pretty long and I dont know why I dreaded it so much :D perhaps my intuition told me about the morbid stuff it would hold, not that any of your posts in this thread have been delightedly cheerful ;) but this was....for some reason, I saw a guy in place of the girl doing the narration...and that suited my pattern of thought better than a girl...dont know why! :D screwed in the head, like you said the other day...it was a good read..sometimes, just not crediting the fact that we know or notice something so visibly staring us in the face can be highly comforting, sometimes, not. Im getting back to the other ones too :D

Originally posted by: Pebblez

even though I gave quite a 'I am speechless' kind comment on this one before too, I think Untouchable remains to be one of your best...a) because it had less morbidity, more retrospection for the reader, b) the flow was DAMN amazing! I think I read it thrice this time..just cuz the thought process was put down so well, c) Stuff written in it, couldnt necessarily be associated to the readers reading it or they perhaps wouldnt connect to it..but someone, i think, everyone who has read this agreed with SOME line or the other in it :D as i said, though process was amazing!

That one line about inspiration being not a person...it was HIS point of view, cuz for some, people turn to be the sole motive of everything they do...for some, like him, other things matter more! you know, this guy reminded me of Roark in some way, due to the dedication, perhaps, he showed to the one thing he did and did his way! :)

Originally posted by: Pebblez

What is this? I distinctly remember commenting on Bete Noir but i cant find it ANYWHERE now...oh well, you are getting another comment then! I remember reading somewhere, long time back...that human beings are the most vicious species...the venom in them is so strong that if their hands and feet are tied and their tongues cut and no form of communication is open to them, they would still be able to kill off each other just with the poison they hold inside, they'd make the whole atmosphere full off it...I agree, we just cant bear the fact that someone out there is unusual, different to what could be the usual norm...any thing DIFFERENT sends out a red alarm and instead of just help, we turn the person insane...

I believe, no one is born insane...and no human is born human..both are nurtured,not innate and thus...we have learnt to live with insanity rather than humanity...the title was SO apt and the whole shot :D touching!

Originally posted by: Pebblez

So reality is basically an alternative, a getaway from fantasies, because the latter are too vague for us to believe in? Hmmm, that was pretty interesting to read, especially coming from you...I think I'd be one of the ignorant ones in your shot, because I believe in facts and our perception of reality...the fact that nature converses would be something I'd laugh out at...thus making me the part of a vast majority...but then again, who knows the true nature of the hidden secrets of univers? maybe reality IS the right perception, and we have been believing in fantasies all along? Isnt the thought of us leading our lives OUR way a fantasy too? That was pretty, pretty interesting to read, and not morbid *thank God for that* :D

Um making commenting a serious business, see?

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey sookie

just discovered this section a few hours ago, nd spent them reading Death Talkies. i dont need 2 say that they all are simply amazing. even if they are a liitle hard 2 understand in one reading, i feel like reading them just for the language and expression. its fantastic. today i have resolved to read all your works before i go to bed (as you might have guessed i am hopelessly vain)

but that doesnt reduce the beauty of your creations

please pm me when you start a new series

edit

i have read all of them. 2 gud

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

reserved for now. this time pucca promise to be back by evening.

edit:

Here I am!

That was a very sad and painful one. Their heart can only wish but cannot realise. Hmmm.I liked his demands and her answer for them. Thanks for the pm!

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Sookie*

That was amazing...2 underdogs loving each other with an unnamed passion...beautifully written....

those lines when she asks him 2 sing a song and when he tells her what he wants in return are my favourite....

U know this might sound a little strange but I have saved ur stories from death talkies in my pc....they are too good....

And the end was too tragic

thanku for the pm

Sur

Originally posted by: spln

aite, possibly a tough statement, even unfair - but i have to say, do u recall the word cliche precisely? - there's a thing about cliche and cynics - they want to call everything usual cliche, but thats what they think... if being 'norma' is cliche and expected - when u expect only cynical stuff (read never meeting to meet but to part alone) i suppose that becomes about the same .. ?

to be honest, i didn't not like the writing of it in general - it was just the knowing -ness about it, that sort of lessened my intrigue - i think u'd know what i mean...

technically, sweetcheeks, even morbid stuff should vary its trend, should it not? just an observation at that, and u can come hit me on the chat if get all mad reading the comment :P ...

that said - i like the irony of her opening phrase - my body is a temple - not the further explanation on it, but just that ... quirky and ironic!

cheers,
nj

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey sookie*
aha..so u atlast updated😆

thats so different again,,,i said that hundred times but will say again....
i could actually feel the pain she was going through...she was fed up of her life n he always made cheer...he protected her,,,i feel...he wanted to make her happy n feel alive but she was already dead,,somewhere...


What does that make your heart then?"
"Pretty much useless"

"Tell your heart to always remember the fiddler who made these demands."
"It already does."

These two show a connection for me...a heart which she thought was pretty useless now wants remember him,,his demands....!!!

great!!
thanks for PM!!!
sri:-)

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey sookie..nice story..

she was prostitute..but she did'nt necessary have to be cheap..n she was caught in something maybe she did'nt wanna do..

he met her n sang songs about her..n they knew each other more than anyone had ever known them..

she did'nt wanna leave him..so she slapped the person n sent him away..n they shared the night..

his proposal style was cute..but she did'nt accept it..n had to go..but was she returning to her normal life?

thnx 4 d PM

do write more

-aish