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Posted: 15 years ago
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I think we all HAVE to discover that one way or the other...no matter when!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aaditee

I think we all HAVE to discover that one way or the other...no matter when!!

interesting....😉

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4. The Performance

Black jeans, a black t-shirt with silver grafitti...A black bandanna with white spots....A violin in my hand....

I swallowed. I was standing on the dias in the largest hall of the farmhouse. Towards left, Aadi was on the synth, Sphurti held the dhol, Varsha the tasha.....

Towards my right, Geeta lazily held a flute between her fingers and Zoya was standing clutching the mic.

Aadi's hand moved on the synthesizer.....

The soft notes reverbated in the air and a hush spread over the crowd. Initially, many had raise eyebrows at our 'venture' as I would call it, and by now, I was feeling extremely tensed.....

The note reached a high level...That was my cue....The bow flew over the srtings......Geeta's flute sounded silently, as I and Aadi stopped for her little solo....

Aadi smiled, truly relaxed, her hands on the black and white keys, truly in her element....


Walking under the sun

Laughing and shouting having fun

The sweetness of the first rain on our cheeks

And standing still looking at distant misty peaks

The long trudge through the grass and reed

And ways through dangers lead

Bending over in the paddy fields

And pushing each other in the mud

Theflute did a small double take.....



Sailing lamps on the river

Bobbing up and down…..

So much fun we had together

None of us will forget it ever…



But now



But time has spilt through our hands

Like the golden sands

Care for the remaining

For it will pass like before



Now is the time …this is the place

To recognize ourselves, who are we..

To see potential

And our future



Make way for us

We now come to rise above all

With the same thirst of knowledge

And desire to prove…



Yes we will

We will

Yes we will…

Yes we will


Aadi crooned the last "Yes...we....will....."

There was a stunned dilence in the hall....

And then applause............


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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow..so the crowd liked their performance..!..nice..!..the song was good..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aish_punk

wow..so the crowd liked their performance..!..nice..!..the song was good..



thanx ash (is it okay if i call u ash?😉)
i had really written the song for our reunion!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aaditee

I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗


dont worry, me 2! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yeah u can call me aish :)..oh u wrote it?..wow thats nice!
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Part 5



I breathed a sigh of relief.....Welll........It had not been that hard......

But the butterflies hovering nervously in my stomach seemed to suggest otherwise.......I studiously ignored the queasy feeling in the pit of my stomach, and proceeded to face the comments..........

Surprisingly, most people loved it.........

Ramona clutched my arm in a vice grip with her yellow painted talons and said, "Awesome brilliant!"

That was enough for me. Ramona rarely praised anyone, and she was honest in her reviews. If she had liked it, well, then, that, in itself was worth the butterflies.

I smiled at her, and said with genuine warmth, "Thanks Ramona.........."

After the avalanche of observations, some filled with true affection and honesty, others amiable and a few surprisingly snide, I made my way towards the water cooler.

I lifted a plastic cup and filled it to the brim with cool, crystal water. A took a deep sip, and felt relaxed instantly........

Then I turned around, finally at peace....... For the first time, I saw someone; I did not recognize........I knew every one of my classmates, their full name, siblings if any, and the professions of their parents, if not names........

Hey! I was the head prefect! And knowing such sort of things helps, it gives just the right amount of personal touch.....

The one person I did not recognize was standing in the middle of the room, surrounded by a excited girls, who were needless to say, flirting with him.........

Looking around I noticed Imran and Abhimanyu standing near a window, chatting......The glass of water still in my hand, I sauntered towards them............

"Hey! Nice song! You wrote it?" Imran said, noticing my presence.........

I smiled at him, nodding....... The talk drifted off to the choice of colleges and subjects.........After a few moments, Abhimanyu asked Imran, "Have you seen Aaryan anywhere?"

I asked him, curious, "Who is Aaryan?"

Abhimanyu smirked as he noticed the elusive Aaryan......He pointed out the tall lanky guy..........

Who was precisely the guy standing in the middle of the room, with a hoard of girls surrounding him......

"Wow! Elusive Aaryan surrounded by gaggle of giggling girls!" I exclaimed.

"Nice alliteration!" Imran said appreciatively.

His face suddenly acquired a pasty hue, turning paler by every passing second. This phenomenon was suitably explained by the appearance of she-devil herself, Avni.

She immediately snuggled herself close at Imran and glared at me. I just smiled back innocently........

"Were you speaking about Aaryan ?" she asked, the question targeted at Imran.

He managed to smile at her.

She trilled, "Isn't he cute?" She continued without waiting for my reply, "He is my Abhimanyu's cousin......"

My eyebrows shot upwards before I could control myself...... 'My Abhimanyu'.....How very convenient........

We were spared from her further remarks by Janice, her sidekick, who had very important news to relate to her......

I grinned at Abhimanyu who was recovering from his blush, and opened my mouth to ask him about Aaryan.

But my further queries were interrupted for the announcement for dinner. So, without any further distractions, we started towards the dining room, listening to Abhimanyu.

Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago

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