Soulful Poems - Page 4

omg love your tears poemm soo awesome...................

nice poem, 👏
liked this😳
what crypts agape on lips
what eternities erupt betwixt
the supple crush of lips,
the gentlest kiss inflicts
love's passive violence,

wow i just read the new update.. awesome yaar!! i liked the lips one 😃 wow i didnt know you was from spain.. there is another girl here from spain. shes active here.. her name is archana 😳 anyways please continue

Overall, ur poems are lovely and passion-filled (passion, means for me, when u feel two opposite or radically different feelings at the same time, or for the same reason)

my tears betray
fates and tears , for every
season of heart,

the fist four are the ones wich i could completely understand... 😊, i think i need more time to enjoy the rest of the poem... 😛 but no doubt, every line of it its beautiful 👏😊

Lips poem

ok now widout more delay... 😆 i end my long comment... sorry, if i bored u 😊 it was my fingers wich runned automatically on the keyboard actually..😛

@nish- thanks a lot 4 liking it it means a lot.. of course i ll try to do continue!!!😊

@archana - a big sorry 4 late replying dear!!actually had gotten busy in work..well yup!! i love beaches here n its a very peaceful place 4 poets though i m not a professional poet i write poem to subdue my temper & make my soul pure... yup!! i m fun loving n happy -go- lucky type person...wow!! u write poem too will love to read them plzz give me the link ..
well i have done my college frm Italy so i m apt in Italian...& only say hii n hello in spanish😆 ...i m a hybrid variety lol i mean i m frm INBA means India n Bangladesh... but i born in India( Hydrabad) ...btw where is u r hometown?

thanks a lot 4 parsing me n my poems truly its means a lot.. 🤗
i m glad u like it... will update one soon love ya ...

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

Overall, ur poems are lovely and passion-filled (passion, means for me, when u feel two opposite or radically different feelings at the same time, or for the same reason)

They describe things from different points, wid different ways: they criticize and praise at the same time. 😊, the contrast of words and its meaning in lyric texts is really beautiful and attracting.

And, they got a touch of fantasy and mystical things.

Your style of writting, makes us figure out, that u are a mature, well, a learned and wise man; of cold blood but wid a warm and sensitive heart.☺️🤗but u should write wise women of cold blood as i m a girl (don't mind)😆

And, not to forget, u have a splendid richness of vocabulary 😊👏thanks no one has ever given me this complement b4 ...😆😉
😉

The verses that i liked the most, (maybe coz i got to understand them easily aswell..😆😛,)are:

Love poem:

It daunts the destinies alike
Of heaven's gaudy angels and
Earthly creatures of the night

love torments itself..
This is love
Devious and divine
Such seditious love ,

Love is the hunter and the hunted
Love is the victim od its own crime
Dreamer and deceiver visionary
And evil-eyed love fulfills

Its sardonic
Self-destruction
But love never dies..

these lines, i agree fully wid them 😊, if im not wrong, they mean...

everybody gotta feel love, love is passion, its good and bad, it has light and shadows, it hurts others and hurts itself, its strong, has an immense power of destruction, and the last lines, 😛 i loved them, it kills itself but it doesnt die 👏yup u got those lines!😳

Tears poem:

It matters not how much
you weep or sigh,

the art of tears, lies
In the reason why.

And my eyes
are wellspring of reasons
for my sinful tears.

my tears betray
fates and tears , for every
season of heart,

the fist four are the ones wich i could completely understand... 😊, i think i need more time to enjoy the rest of the poem... 😛 but no doubt, every line of it its beautiful 👏😊😳

Lips poem

well, i loved everything of it 😛, or in other words, there is nothing particular or special to like there more than the other verses..

The lips poem, i think it might be the most romantic from all the three written there.. 😛

ok now widout more delay... 😆 i end my long comment... sorry, if i bored u 😊 it was my fingers wich runned automatically on the keyboard actually..😆no way first time got such a long n r illuminated comment n thanks a bunch 4 this🤗

again thanks archana😃