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Posted: 16 years ago
really interesting i love it.....................
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww.. thank u so much =) i'll try to update again within 2 days
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Posted: 16 years ago
So Nadia and Jo spend the rest of the evening looking into stores and book shops and stuff. Jo buys her lots of things and ice cream😳 He shows her around town and the best places to go for everything. They catch a few buses and continue just exploring the whole place. Soon being together isn't as weird and they can be more relxed. Nadia is amazed at the beauty of this place... the beautiful old houses and green grass and the mountains. The mountains are the best part. Jo seems to notice that she like them a lot. He had lived here all his life and never thought too much about it. But for Nadia, it seemed like the most interesting thing there was. Nadia's head was turning all sides to look at everything... 😲😆
Jo takes her to all of the places he can think of to show her. It felt so nice being around her. Maybe it was because she was new here. Someone different he could get to know better. She seemed sweet.. and fun. And innocent. Not like all those other immature girls at the school. Yeah, it was definately because she was new.
Nadia seemed to have forgotten all of the time too. Jo is too selfish.. he wanted these moments to last just a little but longer😆 "You know I've never seen such beauty in my life. I love it here so much😃" She told him licking her ice cream. "Haha.. I've lived here my whole life. I never really thought of it that way."
It is 10:00 PM. Nadia is 2 hours late from going home....
sorry for the bad updat... i had a really long day but I wanted to write atleast a little bit and let you guys know I haven't really disappearedd please comment/critisize 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

AWESOME update Nishi, and it's about time! LOL

This part was soooooooooooooooo cute, just loved it tooo much! Jo and Nadia are adorable, and I love how you put in the ice cream.
Keep up the amazing work, honestly!
Love,
Aish
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: MusicalAiswarya

AWESOME update Nishi, and it's about time! LOL

This part was soooooooooooooooo cute, just loved it tooo much! Jo and Nadia are adorable, and I love how you put in the ice cream.
Keep up the amazing work, honestly!
Love,
Aish

thanks so much aishwarya🤗 haha.. yes they are ver cute😆
thanks again
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Posted: 16 years ago

😆😆😆 and u telling me this is not gonna be a luv story?? HAAAAAA!!! 😆

THIS IS GONNA BE A LOVE STORY...: looooooooveeeeeeeeeee😃
coz u know, Nadu might not like him right now, but girls are very compassionate, if he starts to act nicel wiv her, and finally confesses, she wont be able to say "NO"... 😛 trust moi.
ok., kissies for Nishu... welcome back again! 😆😃 ... ***im happy today i think.. 😛😳
update soon.... 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

😆😆😆 and u telling me this is not gonna be a luv story?? HAAAAAA!!! 😆

THIS IS GONNA BE A LOVE STORY...: looooooooveeeeeeeeeee😃
coz u know, Nadu might not like him right now, but girls are very compassionate, if he starts to act nicel wiv her, and finally confesses, she wont be able to say "NO"... 😛 trust moi.
ok., kissies for Nishu... welcome back again! 😆😃 ... ***im happy today i think.. 😛😳
update soon.... 😃

omgg... its been so long i loooove and missed ur comments😆 am so glad we're both back haha. u really think so😲 i honestly have no clue where this story is going🤣 hahaha.. maybe it might end up being a love story haan...😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow, this is really good nishi lol x
i cnt believe i aden ad dahh toiim 2 read an post comments 2 ur story ??!!! :'( But yaaay im bak 2 start gettin on ur nerves if u dun update like now
i fiink dis iz turnin in2 a great hit lurveee storiieeeee (am craziiee) LMAO ...x
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: BabyLove96

wow, this is really good nishi lol x

i cnt believe i aden ad dahh toiim 2 read an post comments 2 ur story ??!!! :'( But yaaay im bak 2 start gettin on ur nerves if u dun update like now
i fiink dis iz turnin in2 a great hit lurveee storiieeeee (am craziiee) LMAO ...x

hahaa... selina😆 thanks so much for commenting. am so glad u like it too😃 the next update will be more detailed.. hehe
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Posted: 16 years ago
"Nadia where have you been???" Her mother asked as soon as Nadia walked through the door. "And why haven't you been picking up your cell!? You know we almost called the police😲😡" Her mom started yelling at her. Now she started feeling guilty. She should have expected this. Here she was, going out with some guy for 5 hours when her parents were worried that she might have gotten kid napped or something.... "Where were you Nadia?" her mom asked. Nadia couldn't think of an answer. There was a long.. silece. Nadia started to cry. "Uff now why are you cry😡" her sister jumped in. "Every time something happens to you you cry." That made Nadia cry harder. They didn't know what she had to go through already. Suddenly there was a knock at the door. Nadia turned to go get the door. She quietly wondered who it could be at this time of night. She opened the door to find Jo standing there😲 Nadia was shocked. "What are you doing here??" she whispered. "You forgot your bag 😆" he told her. He handed her the bag. "Ahhh... thank you. Well I'll see you tomorrow. Hehe.."
"No kiss good night "
"I would..." Nadia looked back at the kitchen. Her mom was still standing there. "But I've really gotta go now. I'm really sorry." "Are you serious. Would you seriously kiss me😲" Jo asked. "Ugh Jooooo... I can't I've never done it before" she smiled a little. "You... Okay well I'll leave now. Bye Nadia." Then he turned back and walked home. "Good night Jo." she whispered.
Nadia shut the door and sneaked to her bedroom. She could still hear her parents voices from downstairs. They were probably discussing ways they could ground her. Nadia sighed. She got into bed with everything still on. She sighed. "Rina Rina Rina..." Then she fell asleep.

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