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minuu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Woooooooooooooow Sharona Dee! Awesome Part, Please continue Soon.

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Sharona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Part 2

Tanya is in the kitchen and trishna comes there
tanya : di, meri help karo please
Trishna looks at her and remembers the time she was mad at her for stealing yuvraj and then she remembers when she found out the truth about everything. she looks at tanya and has tears in her eyes.
tanya : di? are you ok?
Trishna wipes her tears and goes to tanya. she hugs tanya
trishna : i'm fine...what do you need help with?
tanya : everything....
trishna : tanya....your so old and married and you still need my help
Tanya shakes her head like a little girl and both of them laugh.
trishna : accha mein tumhari madat karti hoon
They are cooking when suddenly they hear a vase break. Trishna & tanya come running out of the kitchen.
trishna : kya hua?
They see rajdeep standing next to the table
tanya : jiju? aap?
trishna : rajdeep tumne vase tor diya?
rajdeep : nahi tho maine kuch nahi kiya
Trishna & Tanya look at eachother and then look at rajdeep
tanya : jiju aggar aapne vase nahi tora....tho kisne kiya?
Rajdeep looks around
rajdeep : hawa
He smiles and looks at trishna. she looks a him angry.
trishna : tho tumne vase tori
rajdeep : maine abhi kaha na ke maine nahi tori...woh hawa aya aur use giradiya
trishna doesn't look convinced. rajdeep sees that. he walks towards her and grabs his ears.
rajdeep : sorry, mujhe maaf kardo
trishna : ok ok maaf kar diya
they both smile
trishna : lekin mujhe yeh bata ke tum ghar par kya kar rahi ho?
rajdeep : tumhara matlab kya hai? yeh mera ghar hain
trishna : mujhe pata hai ke yeh tumhara ghar hain, lekin tumhe to office mein hona......
rajdeep looks shocked
rajdeep : office? time kya hai?
trishna : 11 : 00
rajdeep : oh no....aaj mein mar gayi
trishna : kyun?
rajdeep : can't talk right now...bye
he gives trishna a kiss and runs out the door
trishna : what happend?
tanya : pata nahi
they go back to the kitchen
Rajdeep is in his car and is driving fast
rajdeep : bhagwan meri help karo
Rajdeep stops in front of his office and goes inside
He goes to his cabin and opens the door and someone is sitting on his chair. the person turns around and rajdeep is shocked

Edited by Candylover - 17 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

OMG!! FInally a FF...loveee it..it's awesomee...plzz continue soon!!

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Shaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Wow loved da parts!!!
Plzz cont. soon😊

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Great part Sharona 😳

This Deep is too good, hawa ne vase tora? 😆

Who's the person in the office? 😲

Continue soon 😊

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minuu

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Awesome Part 2 Dee, Hmmm we getting some Mystery in the story..
Please continue soon 😊

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Sharona

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Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

sooo happythat you guys love my FF..will try to write the next part soon 😊

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Sonia

@sonikudi1

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

love it Sharona! really want to know who the person is!

oo is it Yuv? lol curiouss!

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Sej

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

hey just caight up with ur ff and i really like it plz write more soon =)

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Sharona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#20

Part 3

Rajdeep is shocked
yuvraj : phir se late...
rajdeep : woh meri galti nahi....woh traffick....uhm
yuvraj : traffick? really? should i call trishna and ask her what time you left?
rajdeep : why....why would you do that?
yurvaj : hmmm..why? because i have a feeling that you are lying
rajdeep : me? i would never
yuvraj : hmmm i know but still i'm calling trishna
Yuvraj picks up the phone
rajdeep : arre yaar please don't...aggar use pata chal gaya ki mein aaj phir se late hoon tho wo mujhe maar dale gi...i saw her this morning and she was already angry at me this morning
yuvraj : kyon? what did you do again?
rajdeep : vase tori
yuvraj : phir se? you know these days you are making a habit of breaking them
rajdeep : not my fault again..there are to many vases in that house
Yuvraj laughs and puts the phone down
yuvraj : ok i won't call trishna but you lost the bet
rajdeep : yeah yeah i know. you know one thing i just don't get
yuvraj : kya?
rajdeep : mein hamesha tumhari saath bet kyun karti hoon?
Yuvraj laughs
yuvraj : luck....mein lucky hoon
rajdeep : ek din yeh luck meri saath hoga
They both laugh
rajdeep : mujhe tumse ek aur baath karni hain
yuvraj : kya baath hain?
rajdeep : mom ne mujhe aaj kuch bataya tha..tumhari aur tanya ki bari
Yuvraj looks at rajdeep
yuvraj : kya?...kya bataya?
rajdeep : acting kar rahe ho? this morning....you & tanya....mom
Yuvraj looks embarssed
rajdeep : arre it's ok. it happens to everyone...she caught me and trishna too...leking living room mein nahi ...kitchen mein
They both laugh and talks some more

** Scene goes to trishna & tanya **

tanya : di, mujhe aap se kuch kehna hai
trishna : kya baath hai?
tanya : uhm....after cooking i will tell you
trishna is confused
trishna : ok
They finish cooking and go to the living room. there sitting on the sofa. tanya is finding a way to tell trishna something
tanya : di....uhm i don't feel so good these days
trishna : kyun? kya hua? are you sick?
tanya : i feel sick aur mujhe aaj kal kache aam khane ki man kar raha hai
trishna : kachne aam?
She looks confused and is thinking. tanya is trying to control her self from smiling
trishna : kache aam?......sick?...uhm
tanya : diii!! you are still thinking
trishna : tanya...mein....uhm...i don't know what your trying to saying
Trishna thinks some more and then he eyes get big
trishna : tanya? tum...tum maa ban ne wali ho?
Tanya nods her head
trishna : oh my god...i'm so happy for you
She hugs tanya
trishna : tumne raj ko bataya?
tanya : no, i will tell him tonight...i want to give him a surprise
yuvraj : suprise? what surprise?
Trishna and tanya look at the door and see yuvraj & rajdeep standing by the door.
yuvraj : what suprise?
Tanya looks at yuvraj and he looks at her

ok that's it...school is starting monday so i might not update for a while but i will try to update in the weekend..hope you guys like this part 😊

Edited by Candylover - 16 years ago

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