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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Moonks

Mohan ka sandesh hai yeh,

Haan geeta ka upadesh hai yeh.

Na tera jeevan hath mein tere,

Na hi mrityu hai vash mein,

Phir kyun tu yahan darta hai,

Jab nahi tu karta dharta hai,

Tere mere hai janma anek,

Bas yaad nahin tujhe koi bhi eik,

Nahi tera yaha koi bhi apna,

Ya phir hai shayad ye mera koi sapna ,

Nahi tu jeene maarne wala hai,

Nahi tu haar ya jeetne wala hai,

Tera moksh bhi mai tera arth bhi mai,

Tera karma bhi mai tera dharma bhi mai,

Na koi bhi yaha jeeta ya marta hai,

Ye to bas Manav deh ka karma hai jo wo karta hai,

Aatma manav ki yaha deh kai badalti hai,

Wo to mar kar bhi na marti hai,

Jo hona hai wo to hokar rahega,

Tere karne na karne se yaha na kuch badlega,

Phir tujhko yeh kaisa bhay hai,

Mann mein yeh kaisa sanchay hai,

Mai tere karmo ka fal hu mai to har pal hu,

Sarvatra hokar bhi mai kahi nahin hu,

Karma dharma mrityu moksha sab bhagwan hai,

Itna sa hi to bas geeta ka gyaan hai!!



I don’t know if I have shared it here or not, but this my personal favourite from all the poems I have ever writtensmiley9

Anything related to Krishna makes me soo Emotional ....

Then a writing piece like this that is written with sooo much love...& devotion..., Your love for Krishna shines in every word & line ....Divine ....smiley27

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Anything related to Krishna makes me soo Emotional ....

Then a writing piece like this that is written with sooo much love...& devotion..., Your love for Krishna shines in every word & line ....Divine ....smiley27

I have written most of poems on Krishna only, I thought you weren't interested that's why did not share them, will PM you those, don't want to bore otherssmiley39
Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Moonks

I have written most of poems on Krishna only, I thought you weren't interested that's why did not share them, will PM you those, don't want to bore otherssmiley39

This isn't boring at all , please share those poems over here smiley1

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: BeingBlunt

Want Episodes ? I have them. Sony can do all they want, there will always be options. smiley36

Forgot to reply to this , yes i want episodes can you please share the links? smiley1

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Moonks

Mohan ka sandesh hai yeh,

Haan geeta ka upadesh hai yeh.

Na tera jeevan hath mein tere,

Na hi mrityu hai vash mein,

Phir kyun tu yahan darta hai,

Jab nahi tu karta dharta hai,

Tere mere hai janma anek,

Bas yaad nahin tujhe koi bhi eik,

Nahi tera yaha koi bhi apna,

Ya phir hai shayad ye mera koi sapna ,

Nahi tu jeene maarne wala hai,

Nahi tu haar ya jeetne wala hai,

Tera moksh bhi mai tera arth bhi mai,

Tera karma bhi mai tera dharma bhi mai,

Na koi bhi yaha jeeta ya marta hai,

Ye to bas Manav deh ka karma hai jo wo karta hai,

Aatma manav ki yaha deh kai badalti hai,

Wo to mar kar bhi na marti hai,

Jo hona hai wo to hokar rahega,

Tere karne na karne se yaha na kuch badlega,

Phir tujhko yeh kaisa bhay hai,

Mann mein yeh kaisa sanchay hai,

Mai tere karmo ka fal hu mai to har pal hu,

Sarvatra hokar bhi mai kahi nahin hu,

Karma dharma mrityu moksha sab bhagwan hai,

Itna sa hi to bas geeta ka gyaan hai!!



I don’t know if I have shared it here or not, but this my personal favourite from all the poems I have ever writtensmiley9

so beautiful, so touching, your emotions and love and devotion shows in this poem
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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Moonks

Kaash ek baar toh tune aankhon meri jhaanka hota,

Jo sach tha unme kaash tune padha toh hota,

Tere liye hi jeete hai ab yeh jaan paate,

Mujhe shayad tum apne kaabil fir maan paate,

Tumse chaaha tha maine sirf ek yakeen,

Toh kyon tum hume woh de paaye nahin,

Jitna tere inkaar ne naa toda,

Utna tera yeh shaq tod gaya tha,

Maangi toh humne tumse wafa thi,

Phir kyun aaj mili hume yeh bewafai!!


Wrote this for TB

so emotional and deep again Kusum, u should put all this under fanfic section for everyone to readsmiley27
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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Moonks

I have written most of poems on Krishna only, I thought you weren't interested that's why did not share them, will PM you those, don't want to bore otherssmiley39

Nice

Mujhe bhi send kro yaar

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Posted: 1 years ago

People thinking our display name and our viewpoint is their business is so Funnysmiley39

Edited by Moonks - 1 years ago
Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Moonks

People thinking our display name and our viewpoint is their business is so Funnysmiley39

What happened?

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Posted: 1 years ago

Ignore

Edited by Moonks - 1 years ago

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