General Discussion Thread #5 - Page 105

Originally posted by: Moonks

Rishton ki Mahabharat ka chakravyuh Aisa tha,

Kisiko pyaar paana tha toh kisi ko paisa,

Koi dhundh Raha tha wajood apna,

Kisi ke liye yeh duniya thi uska har sapna,

Koi jhuth ko sach Maan kar jeeta raha,

Koi sach ko jhuth Maan mann behlaraha,

Sab Paane ki iss daud mein khota Raha har rishta,

Vanshaj ki khoj mein hi buna Gaya har chakravyuh tha!!

Wrote this a month ago or so, for timepass, sharing it now

Wow Kusum di! These could be the PERFECT lyrics of this show!

(Lekin Swastik ko show barbaad karne se fursat kahan, jo iske soundtrack pe focus kare )

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

Beautiful

Have you written more???

Please do share more ...it is soo good...

Originally posted by: RainOfDew

Thanks

Told ya vibing on it currently🤭

Ab RajTilak hoga, utsav yeh bada hoga,

Saara Bharat Mera Ayodhya mein Khada Hoga,

Ayodhya ke Raja Bharat hai Aapka,

Mehlon mein aaye swagat hai aapka

Originally posted by: Moonks

Rishton ki Mahabharat ka chakravyuh Aisa tha,

Kisiko pyaar paana tha toh kisi ko paisa,

Koi dhundh Raha tha wajood apna,

Kisi ke liye yeh duniya thi uska har sapna,

Koi jhuth ko sach Maan kar jeeta raha,

Koi sach ko jhuth Maan mann behlaraha,

Sab Paane ki iss daud mein khota Raha har rishta,

Vanshaj ki khoj mein hi buna Gaya har chakravyuh tha!!

Wrote this a month ago or so, for timepass, sharing it now

Such beautiful lines , if you write more please do post it over here

Originally posted by: RainOfDew

I will take as MB rather than Vanshaj It doesnt deserve this masterpeice

Originally posted by: Moonks

I am vibing on

Ab RajTilak hoga, utsav yeh bada hoga,

Saara Bharat Mera Ayodhya mein Khada Hoga,

Ayodhya ke Raja Bharat hai Aapka,

Mehlon mein aaye swagat hai aapka

Mohan ka sandesh hai yeh,

Haan geeta ka upadesh hai yeh.

Na tera jeevan hath mein tere,

Na hi mrityu hai vash mein,

Phir kyun tu yahan darta hai,

Jab nahi tu karta dharta hai,

Tere mere hai janma anek,

Bas yaad nahin tujhe koi bhi eik,

Nahi tera yaha koi bhi apna,

Ya phir hai shayad ye mera koi sapna ,

Nahi tu jeene maarne wala hai,

Nahi tu haar ya jeetne wala hai,

Tera moksh bhi mai tera arth bhi mai,

Tera karma bhi mai tera dharma bhi mai,

Na koi bhi yaha jeeta ya marta hai,

Ye to bas Manav deh ka karma hai jo wo karta hai,

Aatma manav ki yaha deh kai badalti hai,

Wo to mar kar bhi na marti hai,

Jo hona hai wo to hokar rahega,

Tere karne na karne se yaha na kuch badlega,

Phir tujhko yeh kaisa bhay hai,

Mann mein yeh kaisa sanchay hai,

Mai tere karmo ka fal hu mai to har pal hu,

Sarvatra hokar bhi mai kahi nahin hu,

Karma dharma mrityu moksha sab bhagwan hai,

Itna sa hi to bas geeta ka gyaan hai!!

I don’t know if I have shared it here or not, but this my personal favourite from all the poems I have ever written

Kaash ek baar toh tune aankhon meri jhaanka hota,

Jo sach tha unme kaash tune padha toh hota,

Tere liye hi jeete hai ab yeh jaan paate,

Mujhe shayad tum apne kaabil fir maan paate,

Tumse chaaha tha maine sirf ek yakeen,

Toh kyon tum hume woh de paaye nahin,

Jitna tere inkaar ne naa toda,

Utna tera yeh shaq tod gaya tha,

Maangi toh humne tumse wafa thi,

Phir kyun aaj mili hume yeh bewafai!!

Wrote this for TB

Originally posted by: Moonks

Kaash ek baar toh tune aankhon meri jhaanka hota,

Jo sach tha unme kaash tune padha toh hota,

Tere liye hi jeete hai ab yeh jaan paate,

Mujhe shayad tum apne kaabil fir maan paate,

Tumse chaaha tha maine sirf ek yakeen,

Toh kyon tum hume woh de paaye nahin,

Jitna tere inkaar ne naa toda,

Utna tera yeh shaq tod gaya tha,

Maangi toh humne tumse wafa thi,

Phir kyun aaj mili hume yeh bewafai!!

Wrote this for TB

I got goosebumps.....

Kitna Dard hai har Ekk lafzon mein...

I loved it soooo much....

& Now I am greedy.....aur dikhao

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty

.wow...sooo deep..

I got goosebumps.....

Kitna Dard hai har Ekk lafzon mein...

I loved it soooo much....

& Now I am greedy.....aur dikhao

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159587207

Check this thread out, few are here also, and some other masterpieces by some amazing members also