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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

so here is the first chapter... first of all i wanna say..as i'm a keralite..i'm very weak in hindi yet i would love to add more hindi.. so bear wit ma hindi n if i had any mistake u r free to tell me...

chapter-1

It was a bright day. A beautiful girl was sleeping on her large bed peacefully, hugging teddy ,,sunrises from outside hit on her face making disturbance for her beautiful sleep.. suddenly someone poured cold water straight on her face'. She got up from her bed with a jerk.

Girl: what the hell??

Opening her eyes, she found the little devil infront of her..

Girl: Sunny''.. tum yeh kya kar diya?

And started running behind him

Sunny: (in his kiddish voice) Sanju di , catch me if you can''. N he runs too fast

Yes dat was our dear sanju

Their chasing game was interrupted when sanju's dad came..

Sanju's dad : yeh kya ho raha hai?? Subah subah start kar diya tum dono?

Sanju: Dad, dekho na.. yeh sunny ne kya kar diya?He poured cold water on ma face'

dad glared at sunny'

sunny: dad, meine kya kar diya? Yeh sanju di na.. kumbhakarn jaise so rahi thi'

Dad see the time, it was 10 am..

Now sanju's dad glared at her..

Sanju: sorry dad (making a puppy face)..last night I slept very late dad'.

S'dad:its ok beta.. now no more fights.. sunny,, say sorry to ur di..

Sunny: sowie di'

She couldn't help bt smile at his childishness'.

Sanju: ok.. n he smiled widely n she kissed him on his cheek..

Den she went upstairs to freshen up herself..

SANYAL HOUSE

A guy is sitting infront of his laptop n doing something very seriously'.. A lady of late 45 came to him..

Lady: Prithvi beta.. come breakfast karo'.

Prithvi: ha mom,, thodi der ke baad..

She went to him n closed the laptop.

Mom: No way..u have to cum now'

Prithvi: mom, Yeh aap kya kar diya??

Mujhe bahut kaam hai'

Mom: yeh kaam ki vajah se tumhe kisi aur ki parwa bhi nai aur aaj Sunday hai phir bhi tumhe mere saath spend karne keliye bhi time nai hai' n she started making tears..

Prithvi: mom abh rone keliye kya hua'? Mei aapke saath breakfast karne keliye aungi ok'.. aur pure din aapke saath spend karoongi.. abh happy'.

N they both smiled.

Sanju's house

They r having their breakfast

Dad: Sanju beta' u know Mr. Sanyal??? Dad ki purani dost'

Sanju: ha dad.. he's in Delhi..right? toda yaad hai..

Dad: usko ek beta hai..

Sanju: toh kya dad.. apko ek beti bhi hai' THE SMART N BEAUTIFUL SANJANA ROY'..

Dad: ha, dat what I'm going to say.. usko ek beta hai aur meri ek beti hai..toh

She looked up

Sanju(with a confusion): Toh kya dad?

Dad: Toh humne socha'vo..voh actually'ek proposal.. voh..

He is a bit nervous'.becoz he knows sanju's reaction after knowing dis..

Sanju: dad pls make it clear.. I didn't get anything..😕

Dad: voh humne socha tum dono ki shaa'..aaa..

He couldn't complete..before dat sanju yelled at him..

Sanju 😡: dad''..how could u do dis to me?? Mujhe shaadi nai karna..

Prithvi:what' marriage??? Mom meine aapse kahi bar batahai ki mein shaadi kabhi nai karoongi'

Mom: kyun? Kyun beta tumhe shaadi se kya problem hai?

Prithvi: mom, it'll affect my carrier..mei bade buisness man banna chahta hu,, aur yeh shaadi vaadi hai naa ek successful carrier mei barrier banungi..

Mom: bt mei ek mom hoon.. aur mei apne bacha ki shaadi dekhna chahta hoon aur uska bachon ko dekna chahta hoon'prithvi apna mom keliye itna bhi kar nai sakta tumhe..

San'dad: sanju,,u know wat tumhari mom bhi yhi chahti hai..

Sanju: dad, aap yeh kya keh rahi hai.. mom is no more(having tears in her eyes)

Dad: ha isliye keh rahi hoon beta,, uski bhi ichcha yhi hogi.. pls beta no mat batao(with a pleading eyes)

Both the parents started deir emotional drama😭😭😭.. finally'getting irritated😡

Sanju n pritvi: okkk''.mein iss shaadi keliye ready hai..

Their parents became so happy..😃

Sanju:bt dad usse pehle..

Pritvi: mujhe ek shart hai..

Sanju:mujhe usse shaadi ke pehle

Pritvi: ek bar milna hoga'

Parents: ha voh toh teek hai.. agreed..

Pritvi n sanju: akele mein..

Parents: akele???

Sanvi: akele mein..its final'

Parents:okkk''.

precap: sanvi meeting

reviews, comments n likes pls...n sorry for the typo error

Edited by sanju_arsha - 13 years ago

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moumita

@sumimita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow...sanvi meeting... update it soon

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

note:

once again i'm telling u... if i had any mistakes pls tell me...

n i won't be able to update the nxt part so soon as ma exams r on its way...

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jaskiran kaur

@AnkitGuptaKiAC

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

nice update sanjana...

precap is just wowww... sanvi meeting

thanx fr PM dear...

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: kiranjas
nice update sanjana...

precap is just wowww... sanvi meeting

thanx fr PM dear...

thank u dear

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-Drama_Queen-

@-Drama_Queen-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Awesome start!! 😛👏👏

Just loved it 😃

Your name is Sanjana??

Im Kiran 😊

Update soon will be waiting 😛

Can You please PM me? 😊

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Komal1004
Awesome start!! 😛👏👏
Just loved it 😃
Your name is Sanjana??
Im Kiran 😊
Update soon will be waiting 😛
Can You please PM me?😊

thank u kiran.. I'll pm u 4 sure..

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Anisha Singhal

@AnnyLaughaholic

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

nice.. vaise ur hindi is understandable so no probs.

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Anila

@Anilaa

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Nice concept... :)

& Great start..

Really looking forward to the next part. .

Update soon.. & PM me when you update please :)

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Chapter 2

Sanju, Ela n Vinnie entered the mall' Tomorrow is the day..sanju is going to meet her princecharming..he n his family would cum at her house'

So now the threesome are here to do some shopping for sanju..

"Sanju.. Try this.. yeh pehenkar u will look damn hawt" Ela said holding a cocktail pink dress..

" No sanju.. u r not gonna wear that.. we r not going for a party.. ladke wale tumhe dekhne aa rehi hai..yeh pehanlo" she said carrying a beautiful purple colour saree..

"No way Vinnie.. sanju is wearing dis dress"ela told

"dis dress"

" no dis"

Ela n Vinnie started fighting like kids..they infact forgot about the surroundings.. mean while sanju saw a beautiful salwar..with violet flowers in it n took it n she liked it

" guys guys pls stop it..ela mein tumhari yeh wali dress nai pehan sakti" ela looked down while Vinnie smiled like a winner

"And Vinnie na mei tumhari saree bhi pehnewali hun" Vinnie became shocked n this time its ela's chance to make fun of Vinnie..

"toh sanju tum kya pehanewale hai" both of them asked

Sanju showed them the salwar

" wow sanju.. its beautiful"

"ha sanju.. tum yehi pehanlo.. ismei tumhe dekhkar jiju will gaga over you..i'm sure" ela told

" what ela jiju???"

"ha jiju.. tut oh meri sister hai na toh voh meri jiju" eventhought sanju was against this marriage she blushed at the name of jiju..

"ha ha someone is blushing"

"stop it ela n Vinnie"..they were pulling each others legs when sanju bumped into someone'(guess')

Her eyes closed because she felt that she would fall anytime but before that a strong pair of arms caugt her.. she slowly opened her eyes only to see a twinkling brown eyes looking at her(m not sure kaisa eyes hai uska)' They shared an eyelock.. it was him who come out from the llhh first..

Boy: hello madame..jaldi karo..mujhe jaana hai

Sanju:toh main thodi bola ha mujhe pakad ke rakho.. chod do

Boy: ha ha.. ab help karna voh bhi mistake ho gayi.. waise bhi tum girls aise hi hai

Sanju: oh.. what do you mean by " girls aise hi hai" girls ke bharein mein

Before she could complete ela entered in between them.

Ela: guys calm down.. sanju.. let it voh bechara tumhe help kar rahi thi..hai na hotty? With a sexy smile..

Boy: whateva'n he left from there..

Vinnie n sanju giggled at ela..n hi-fived..

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At sanju's room

Ela n Vinnie were taking sanju's different photos.. when they heard sunny shouting..groom aa gayi.. sanju di ko dekhne voh aa gayi..

Vinnie: sanju u wanna see him now itself..

Sanju: mujhe nai dekhna..

Ela: nai dekhna toh.. okk hum use dekhne jaa rehi hai..n they left from there..

Soon sanju too got out from the room.. slowly she peeped into the huge wall from above.. There she saw a man neatly dressed n he is doing something in his phone..but she couldn't see his face

She peeped even more to see him..

He felt someone is looking at him and he looked up but she immediately pulled back and hid behind the wall..

After sometimes sanju came down along with ela n Vinnie.. now he was reading a newspaper

Ela whispers in sanju's ear: yeh kya sanju lagta hai voh tumhari nai news paper ko dekhne aayi hai..

Sanju looked at ela in a "I will kill you look"

Prithvi's mom:beta sara sanjana ki face ko bhi dekh lo.. don't forget kit um use dekhne aayi hun"

Then the elders started laughing' this is when prithvi looked at her n at the same time sanju also looked at him..

"TUM" both of them said in unison'''.

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hope u liked it guys n sorry for the typo error

Edited by sanju_arsha - 13 years ago