i m reading ur story from the beginning i may not comment much ... but you are really talented ... i can imagine the characters thoughts and action while reading your story ... dont be disappointed that you are not getting much response ... the problem might be that there are many icha fans and you writing concentrates more on tapu so maybe people might not be reading them or reading it but not commenting ... i have never read fan fantic but since i like tapu i have started reading '. the characters on tv also influence our choices rather to comment it or not and many people don't like tapu and your way of looking tapu is different then others so pls don't be discouraged ... because of you i have started reading a fan fantic on diya aur baati forum... i do really appreciate your time and your writing ... whenever u get chance to write the next part do write it continue with the story or at least give us good ending thank you for your time
Thank you for the substantive comment..I will try to make it up to the mark..😆