Originally posted by: FIREMYSOUL
Makers have these two who can create this moment with that much distance and all they are obsessed is horn blowing mujra karti faltu dialogues of J which can be wrapped in 2 min but no that they will drag on and on but when it comes to these two scenes are done in a jiffy.
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Rather than that taunt fest of J they cud have showed fatejo enjoying some light moments post victory and the rassi nikalo tamasha SS cud have been cut down. Post that the JF thing was not needed at this point there's time for her to manipulate patidev later. They cud have given tejo entry with fateh admiring her and probably a cute scene with the two. But they ended up ruining watever victory happiness the match and fateh getting job back by plastering J everwhere. Even the victory moment she was there with useless expressions like wat for🤢 It just ruins the feel of the episode for gods sake balance karna seekh jao.
They rushed the whole celebration scene with just dialogues from FaTejo and we were tormented with another mujra, another plan and what’s most fascinating is we get to know vamp self talk as well so that no perspective of her is uncleared. Then, they immediately rushed to mehendi scene where vamp comes dancing along and male lead has close confrontation with her which was so out of place that I was seething throughout the scene.
The screenplay and dialogue writing is so amateurish. The same scene could have been shown from different perspective. It was so easy to show FaTejo having their own moment together, Tejo is getting ready when Jasmeen interrupts them and start with her ranting. This would have gone with the flow of the story and previous scenes of FaTejo but instead we get angst between Fateh and Jasmeen and another trip and fall with Tejo and Angad is awaiting for us. They are blessed with insanely awesome leads but they show hardly any intimacy between them.
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
