The current events in the show( the flaws in writing)

The flaws in writing.

The current events were unexpected. The turnaround of characters for the past few weeks.

Jasmin

Being very unrealistic blaming tejo all the time for every reasons since she married fateh. Initially these reasons were justified as fateh hid the canada facts from her and she didn't get the news. After that her stalking him etc trying to get him back for her own ego battle with her sister was also acceptable owing to her selfish nature portrayed since the inception of the show. On top of that she managed to snatch him successfully under her sister's nose . From then on her insecurity was shown. Even that was acceptable as she knew he had a soft corner for tejo.

But him ditching her at the last minute and the fake marriage thing, still she blames tejo , that was very very

Unacceptable!!!

When she very well knew that her sister did the fake engagement just for her happiness.

The puzzling fact.

Everyone understands tejo including those who just knew her like virks and got attached to her. Then how come a blood related sister cant understand her sibling.

Why do they still keep her going behind fateh and tejo when she is getting money for her fraud business and can make way to canada herself.

She can always return to take revenge

Puzzling fact

Is canada her dream or has her dreams changed?? Why waste time taking revenge when u can try other opportunities . U can trap a rich guy to take u to ur dream destination. Or trap a canada wala. After all she was glorified as a beauty queen all the while.

Writing flaw

This is where writers made a blunder. They should take a break from the monotonous revenge game since the EMA and give jasmin a solo journey a while bringing in a cameo role whom she wants to trap for canada. Her intriguing journey showed separately where she becomes independent and stronger.

Fateh

His solo journey was acceptable and well executed but after he joined Sharma's mansion instead of a driver's occupation he could have been offered a white collar job in Sharma's office especially after he saved his life. Why show him suffering just to gain sympathy from viewers . Some finds it artificial and not acceptable.

Show him having a career performing his duties diligently stepping up on his career path successfully. Becoming a stronger and independent individual.

Tejo

The lesser said the better. Overall 360degree character turnaround after the EMA exposure.

Flaw in writing

After jasfa EMA exposure should show her moving on picking up the bits of life not looking back instead of bouncing her back to virks all the time. Viewers were keen to see her struggles after the betrayal

Angad

Was not required at all that soon. They could have brought him a little later .

Biggest flaw

monotonous tracks since EMA exposure

All three leads solo journeys not written well .

Trp

.Trps high due to conspiracy with voot not airing episodes before tv .

But still it went down despite all the conspiracy theory from 3.1 to 2.8.

Meaning - if voot didn't help them , then they were not eligible in top five any longer by now.

Despite conspiracy trp still soaring.

Some blame on angad's entry . He came in between fatejo.

I blame the useless lazy writers for not being able to utilize the characters to their maximum potential.

Its not the actors but writers to be blamed.

Trp is necessary for survival but not to the extend that u write illogical writing fooling the viewers. Only drama and plotting alone doesn't help in trps. Entertainment is also required.

Viewers get bored with monotonous tracks prolonged

Shows like tarak mehta ka ulta chasmah did wonders in trps for a decade.

When can these itv writers learn their lesson

ITV female leads are ever forgiving and soo unrealistic, i just get annoyed, this is my second ITV show and maybe last 😩😂😂

I wonder at what was the priginal concept of the show? like what name it UD even

Everyone has forgotten their dreams. I dont understand jasmin at all these days. but thats understandable because we can say she is mental

but Tejo like WTH is wrong with her.gone all the thoughts of phd, being independent, doing stuff for Punjab and all, she just loves nanny roles doesnt she?

Fateh--i was interested in his solo journey but they abruptly (like always) changed tracks and now we are expected to laugh at the cringe harrassment of him be mrs,. sharma

Angad - i dunno whats the point of this character even. he is supposed to be multimillionaire. why is he even staying at one place so long playing round robin with these crazies

This is my second itv show and its my biggest mistake of 2021👎👎 they ruined every character.

Right now tejo's character disappointed me the most.Makers are ruining her character for FaTejo reunion. If makers wanted to show Fatejo as endgame they shouldn't bring EMA track

Fateh was brutally butchered by makers and suddenly they are repairing him in 360 degree which is looking forced.

This is a great analysis, and you are correct the show is poorly written right now, they had an opportunity to dive into the three main leads but are instead giving the run around.

More butchering in the name of writing