I am on a break for few days as my students are on exam leave. Revision break for a week before exams
Lockdown restrictions of covid so cant go out anywhere
Staying at home only. Apart from.hse works just looking at the walls. Family members control the tv fighting for the remote. Sat in my room to kill some time to pen this
A very interesting plot that makers could take for upcoming.I am tagging few tejorians and apologise for not able to tag all. Pls feel free to read and i would like to know ur comments as well. For those tagged u dont have to rush to reply as life is busy. Do it when u are free
Can understand and tq to all for ur time. Really appreciate. You can even give suggestions on how to make the plot better
THE DUPLICATE!
She was in tears as she scrolled her phone recalling her bitter past viewing his pictures
Fateh singh virk
Her ex husband who betrayed her and now is married to her sister right after their divorce. Jasmin was his first love and he just couldnt get over her. She decided to leave everything behind and reside far away at the neighbouring state Haryana with her childhood friend Harpreet who gave her shelter and support after ditching her own family
She was better off without them and no one knew her whereabouts . She kept herself busy to refrain from their memories by taking up a career in one of the local universities of that state. Thanks to her for being the best teacher award obtained during her former employment that she received many wonderful offers at present and she picked the best with better salary and perks
After two months she moved nto a small apartment. She decided to rent it for her own privacy as she didnt want to burden Harpreet any longer as the latter had family commitments as well. The good soul paid her visits on and off to accompany her and then one fine day she received her frantic call middle of the night
Tejo!
So geyi kya!
Harpreet shaky voice on the phone. She sounded nervous
Kya hua !
She replied sleepily
Yaar meney fateh ko dekha aaj mall mey!
Lekin no moustache and beard!
Cleanshaven!
Alone and jasmin not with him!
Harpreet spilled her the facts
Kya!
Are you sure!
Tejo sat up straight at once
shocked
Yaar very sure . He was happily shopping at the mall and he told the shop assistant he is a bachelor and runs a clinic nearby . I spied on him!
Harpreet continued puzzled
Kya! A bachelor!
Tejo was shocked and confused
Yaar pictures dekhley. I am sending u now!
She gasped as she received his snaps on her phone
It was him!
Oh! He found out where i live!
Coming to torture me!
She was upset as she needed peace and no more sorrows of the past. She decided to find out
This gentleman came yesterday and he purchased some items from us. !
The retail assistent confirmed to her quiery showing his photo on her phone
He called just now saying he wants to replace one item!
The assistant continued calmly . She decided to wait
He walked into the boutique after an hour and she was terrified
The same looks except he was clean shaven
As he spoke to the assistant at the cashier , she ambushed him
A slap!
What are u doing here!
U betrayed me and married my sister!
Why cant u let me be in peace!
He was taken aback and held her hand tightly as she was coming up with the next slap
Hei lady i dont know u!
Just back off!
He shoved her away
Oh! Now u have memory loss!
Just wait!
She stormed angrily to the supermarket next door and snatched a few eggs and tomatoes rushing towards him for the second ambush
Eggs and tomatoes flying one after the other as he ran around the boutique for shelter with her following close behind with all sorts of fabulous galiyaan. He finally made it to his car and drove off speedily as she was screaming on top of her lungs
U just wait!
Teri nani yaad na dilayi toh mera naam bhi tejo sandhu nehi!
Tejo sandhu!
Who the hell is she!
He was struggling to remove the smashed tomatoes and eggs from his body in the shower as soon as he reached home
Kya hua!
U look disturbed!
His mamu enquired anxiously as he was not eating his lunch at the dining table. Both nephew and uncle resided alone with seven servants in that giant 9000 sq ft blue bungalow. He was an orphan who lost his parents in a car accident when he was hardly eight and his uncle who never had any kids adopted him then and raised him dearly . He was.fortunate for the uncle and wife that after his adoption they prosper in their business and had their own son as well. His half younger brother Rahul the spoilt brat who resided in london running his own art gallery after the brawl of the father son duo upon the death of his aunt due to heart disease five years ago
Rahul was close to his mother and was devastated after her death . He couldnt get along with his dad since young and took offshore to have his life his way. He tried numerous time to bring them closer but failed as they were both adamant and egostic that he finally gave up
His uncle was more fond of him as he was wiser and decided to leave the business and assests in his name . The will clearly read
Dr Vishal chowdary older son
80 percent shares
Rahul chowdary younger son
20 percent shares
Dr Vishal chowdary !
That was his full name .He was a psychiatrist
He had two jobs . One was running his family business and the other his personal passion.
A psychiatrist
to help those with emotional and mental traumas. Get their lives straight
She was one of them . She needed help.
Vishal kya hua beta u are not eating!
His mamu"s voice interrupted his thoughts
He naratted the details of the mall incident to his uncle who replied anxiously
U better help her. She's in a mess!
He nodded in agreement and returned to the mall to get her details .
She was very annoyed
Why did he come!
I will not spare him!
The clinic!
Yes!
She rushed to the mall location the next morning searching for the clinic. What is he doing in a clinic!
After an hour of asking around showing his snap on her phone she found her destination
The duplicate!
Unfortunately she was not aware of the fact that he was not her ex but a stranger.
Yes mam how can i help u !
The nurse at the reception enquired politely.
Tell this man to see me now! She showed his picture
Dr vishal is with a patient. Pls wait
The nurse continued calmly but puzzled with tejo's behaviour
A doctor!
No ! He's a boxer! She screamed loudly
It was her!
He heard her loud voice as his patient left the cabin
He was about to walk towards the door to meet her to find out her despaired state that she barged in falling into his arms
The eyelocks
His dark eyes were calm and soothing. She explored their details
He was not fateh!
The duplicate!
She recognised him now
He searched her as well and knew she was in tremendous pain
She needed help!
Pls seat down a while. Let me explain. He pulled her to the chair and sat opposite
Look i am dr vishal chowdary
I resemble ur ex but i am not him!
She started crying . He stood up and sat close to her for support
It's ok . I am here to help u!
U are in pain and u need to release it
U will feel better!
Nurse get me a glass of water!
After a few minutes she gathered herself and spoke the details of her past to which he listened to attentively and advised her to pay few more visits as he really wanted to help her
She was touched
He was different
Sensible , wise and a gentleman
He only resembled physically
Days passed and she found comfort in him during their sesions
She was starting to fall for him but struggled to control her feelings as he was already seeing someone
Shereen gupta !
The daughter of his uncle's friend . It was a fixed arranged marriage
He was too be engaged soon
He was restless as the hours passed deep in his thoughts about her
Tejo!
Damn!
That innocence that killed him to the core
He knew he was falling hard for her. Shereen and he had just met through their families but they were not in love
She was still in love with her ex bf who cheated on her
She was shattered as she saw his invitation to the engagement party
True love never exist in her dictionary of sorrows but she had to go as he helped her released her pain to a joyful life and now that he became a good friend as well
All guests were impatient. Shereen didnt turn up but his eyes were still set on her
She was goegeous in that pink saree
Minutes later the bride to be message came
Sorry vishal i cant do this
I am not ready
He was excited and walked towards her as he announced engagement was still on as guests started to take a leave
He kneeled in front of her showing off the ring
Will u be my fiance!
I love u !
I dont know if u love me!
But i know u like me!
Coz i resemble him!
Ur lunatic ex!
Before she could reply he placed the exclusive diamond beauty into her ring finger and hugged her tightly whispering into her ears
I wont be like him!
I promise!
I never loved sheeren!
And she doesnt love me either!
We just wanted to pls our elders!
U are my first and last love!
She was touched with his confession and gave in to his warm hug
The twist of her destiny yet once again
They were married off with full rituals a week later with his family and relatives. His masi and mosa did her kanya daan and vidaai as they didnt have a daughter and was fond of her. Her family was not aware and she decided.to keep it that way to be in peace
After their first nite he surprised her with their honeymoon package the very next morning
Canada!
Meanwhile fateh and virks were getting annoyed with jasmin's tantrums that he repented losing tejo forever
Amrik was also in love with jasmin and was interferring in his married life
He was shattered and started drinking
He was missing her
Tejo!
She ventured into a new life with a new partner drifting away from her sorrows . He resembled her ex but way different in personality
He was sincere
The duplicate
Vishal!
Ps
Bringing in a.new male lead could be cost factor for PH
So a duplicate of the ML at least who is way better and keeps tejo happy
At least no jasfa amrik crap
They can bring two parallel track
Jasfa and amrik
Tejo and the duplicate
With his family
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
