advice to writers from a (somewhat) neutral viewer - Page 8

Originally posted by: kiransgirl

There was a trigger warning attached to the post. Clearly if you were going to be so bothered, you were advised to move on. I didn't claim to be a neutral viewer; I claimed to be a somewhat neutral viewer. The advice isn't for you, it's for non-rabid fans who can get the incessant bashing of Jasmine in every other thread. The thread did specifically state it is for those who are thinking about the show seriously.

I suggest you re-read what I wrote..slowly. There was never a justification of an ema. As I clearly stated, Fateh should stay with Tejo, as punishment. I said the heart wants what it wants but Jasmine should move on. I said, maybe, the show could leap 20 years ahead (as many shows do). Then perhaps, Fateh can be with Jasmine, if they do the right thing and not have an ema. Comprehension is fundamental to reading, even for the triggered.

All your replies are same just like *This is that- That is this*. People are just discussing about the Jasmine's character in the show they are not bashing the actress. So stop calling them rabid-fans when you yourself are rabid-fan who can get the incessant bashing of tejo in every other post.

@bold tweet your wonderful suggestion to makers. Maybe soon you can witness your favourite jasmine in fateh's arms after leap.

By no means you seem to be a neutral fan 😳.

On top of that you seem to have some real issue with Tejo 😕

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I said I was a somewhat neutral fan. You are correct. I dislike all 3 characters but loathe Tejo the most. My original post has touched on the valid reasons I have for feeling as such. Luckily, loving Tejo is not necessary for giving an opinion on this board.

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

nice to see you here active again😃

but you are late now it was good at start

i would have beautiful siggies and avies from you then

this is decline phase of show😔

loved all your yasharan/shanak rbo work👍🏼

I wanted to make gifs and siggies too..But this EMA totally made me not!!! 😑

If I had known they gonna take this serial this way I would have not touched it and binged someother!!! 🤦🏻‍♀️

Originally posted by: lovereading14

There are no rabid fans here. If you expect respectful responses you must be respectful while expressing your opinions as well. It is not a one way street.

A difference in opinion is not disrespectful, this forum is meant for discussion, so polite disagreements are a given. If you cannot handle different views, this place is not for you. If you are genuinely looking for a discussion please have an open mind.

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polite yet to the point!

Originally posted by: kiransgirl

By no means you seem to be a neutral fan 😳.

On top of that you seem to have some real issue with Tejo 😕

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I said I was a somewhat neutral fan. You are correct. I dislike all 3 characters but loathe Tejo the most. My original post has touched on the valid reasons I have for feeling as such. Luckily, loving Tejo is not necessary for giving an opinion on this board.

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Same goes for others too. loving jasmine is not necessary for giving an opinion on this board.

Originally posted by: Euphoria_V

@bold ok👍🏼

@italic now this is what makes you biased. If the husband is playing nice game with his wife being lovey-dovey, praising her etc. Then no wife can doubt his intentions. Dumbness is irritating but you can't blame her. She is not aware of her husband's real intentions. You are targeting tejo's character most. I don't see you using single harsh words for jasmine. That's the reality you are blind follower of this character so you don't find faults in her.

She's sneaky and whiny person not tejo.

Jasmine herself cancelled the wedding because of her dreams right. Then she should follow her dreams not fateh. What is she doing now betraying her sister and loving the thrills she is getting from chupan chupayi prem with fateh. Don't forget she's the one who pushed her sister to marry her ex.

And what's your obsession with 20 years leap- death blah blah.

If leap is going to happen then I wish to see tejo completing her PhD and well settled in her life.

And jasmine this velli married to fateh .where Fateh is having affair with another woman behind her back.

Karma

@red :- of all the things i want answer for this too.. lol

why so strong claim that Tejo will be dead after 20yrs

Your last line 👍🏼👍🏼

Once a cheater , always a cheater 😆

Originally posted by: hapc

Once again, I don't believe you are being objective or even somewhat neutral. You may dislike all characters but you have a bias against Tejo. You've stated it quite clearly. There's another post by @tejaswiniwenham where she's also been very objective and pointed out that you are just biased as the rest of us only difference being that your bias is against Tejo and ours is towards.

Coming to the rest of your post. I agree that Tejo is being very dumb. We've also discussed that it makes no sense for a psychology professor to be so naive. I also agree that all the characters have been very poorly written and I find none of the leads likeable and believable. The only characters I truly like and find relatable are side characters.

Most of us, I believe, agree with us. I do agree the whole show is badly written, the leads have no individuality and are dependent on eo.

Side characters are pretty non existent. Tejo is being really dumb. I get that but she is still more believable than the 2 ibadaati ishq obsessed couple. Atleast till now.

Originally posted by: poo_j

I just binged this drama this month..Also returned to Hindi serial after 7 years..But look what I landed..In such a mess!!! 🤣

I wanted to make gifs and siggies too..But this EMA totally made me not!!! 😑

If I had known they gonna take this serial this way I would have not touched it and binged someother!!! 🤦🏻‍♀️

you can watch old epi's before this damage is done

those are fine

Comments by the neutral viewer reeks of arrogance.

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

why would fateh living with tejo will be punishment for him?

he is in profit living with her!

He is enjoying his success in career and establishing financially and getting husbands rights like care and s*x then why it will be punishment for him?

He is enjoying both wife and half wife

He wins in all situation. 🤔

Getting Jasso, Tejo leaving

Living with Tejo, secretly meeting with Jasso