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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi i am new to this forum, i liked how they portrayed fateh, jasmine, tejo and how there character graphs were going nut suddenly in recent episodes fateh character went down the drain. So here i wrote a small story feel free to comment.i already held umbrella for tamatar and andešŸ˜‰




Teja pov

Fateh jassuko utakar daud liya mera mann mein sirf jassu ke chinta mein thi. Kaisi hain jassu,who teek haina, who behosh kyu huyi, usko kuch chot nahi laga na, who kab utegi,,bas ini sawalo mein vulaj gayi mein. Jab doctor ake bola ā€œ she is fine ā€œ aisa laga jaise meri maan ko shanti milli , meri man ithna bagh daudne ke baad toda shanthise chalne lagi

firse jasu teek hain abh kuch nahi hoga vusko woh abh vutegi aur firse vuski shaadi .oh no shaadi gippy ke parents bhi wahi hain na who log kya sochenge vunke bare mein.kahi vunko bura laga jaise fateh jasu ko vutakar baga aur gippy.woh kya soch raha abh. Pehle se hi woh jasu aur fateh ka relation clear karna chahthatha .firse meri man daudna shuru ki , abh mein bhi dauda gippy ke paas agar kuch misunderstanding huyi , vusko clear out karne keliye. Gippy icu ke bahar kadahuva aur vuske aansu beh raha hain. I thought vusko jassy ke ye halath dekh kar dukh ho raha hoga . I went to him and touched his shoulder koi reaction hi nahi bus andhar dekh kar ro raha hain aur vuska haath darwaja mein hain. Meine bhi andar dheki yeh soch kar kya dekh raha hain gippy mera man aur mein dono ek dum rukh gaye. Aisa laga jaise mera poora duniya andhere mein chala jaraha hain joh dikh raha bus ek hi who hain fateh aur jasso , aur fateh vusko kiss karaha tha . Kuch dher baad woh bhi andhera mein chala gaya

Patha nahi kab lekin ankh dhere dhere khula bus gippy meri saath baita huva haina, meine vuse pucha kithne time tak mein behosh mein hun . Woh haskar bola poora ek din tejo jji.mein shock hokar vuske tarf mooda. Shock isliye nahi ki mein poora din behosh huyi, shock isliye meri gharwalo mein koi nahi aya mujhe dundne . Mujhe woh sab yaad aya joh pehle dekha aur gippy ka bhi

Gippy pov

Doctor ne bolaabh jasmine koh dekh sakthe .mein uske room ke bahar kade hokar darwaja kolne haath raka .lekin joh andar horaha hain, wo dekh kar mein bhul gaya kyu aya yaha .woh sare pal yaad aya joh jasmine ke saath meine bithaya . Jasmine pehli ladki nahithi jo mejne dekha. Vuse bhi kayi beautifull ladkiyo ke saath mein date kiya par jasmine alag thi. Vuske aankhe jab pehli baar mila aur meine bola ki that im from canada and I grew up there, I saw her eyes they twinkled with passion, happinessand dreams I fell for those eyes man . Vuske baad uske nakhre se mein tang achukahun, jab bhi who kuch vulta seedha nakre karthi thi I thought chalo abh aur nahi she is not the girl but I cannot forget those eyes. Vuske baad dhere dhere hum log engagement tak agaye .mein apne kayalo mein doob gaya achanak meri shoulder pe kisi ke haath tha mein dekha tab waha tejo ji khadi hain . Who kuch nahi boli. I thought she would slap fateh atleast confront him lekin who achanak gir gayi . Nurse vusko lekar gayi. I was sad I can understand her.mera aur jasmine ka engagement tak nahi huva aurmera yeh haal hain. Yaha toh tejo ji jiske ankho mein fateh keliye ithna pyar diktha hain aur un dono ka shadhi bhi hogaya toh its natural. I hope wo iss sadme se jaldi bahar ajaye.

Mein room mein khone mein kadi huyi vusko dekh kar doctor sab kuch check karke mere taraf muda aur bola"sir how can you be this irresponsible towards your wife when she is pregnant, look at her blood pressure it is too much . This is not good for the baby take care of herā€ dr yeh bolkar chali gayi. At that moment all the respect I had for fateh is lost, how can he cheat on his wife and he brought this sate of tejo ji. I went back to jasmines house to call someone to inform tejo ji condition lekin waha par koinahi. Mein wapas hospital aya with courage and for the sake of baby and tejo jiI went to jasmines room to see if any one was there . Everyone are there beforeI went near them to inform about tejo I heard jasmine’s mom saying she will talkto tejo for jasmine and fateh marriage. I laughed when the family could not care about tejo why would they care abou the baby at the present there only headache is jasmine marriage with fateh. I cameback to room.tejo ji was lying lifeless thee I knew she would fight for her babyand she would keep it safe lekjn jis halath mein who hain I pity her. Mere paas kam se kam mom dad hain mujhe sambalne keliye lekin vunke paas koi nahi uper se wo kudh ek chota baby ka kayal rakhna hain. I informed mom dad about the situation and told them that I will come after tejoji gained consciousness. After one wholeday she slowly opened her eyes, who poora room ek baar scan kiya aur poocha ki wo kithni der se so raha tha I thought she already knew she was pregnant so meine casually bola aap iss halath mein kyun ayi ho Yaha peh

Tejo pov:

Gippy ka wo questions mujhe kuch samaj mein nahi aya iss halath matlab who kehna kya chathe. Mujhe koi bimari hain kya isliye mein poocha ā€œ iss halath mathlab" vuske baad joh gippy ne bola vuske baad mujhe asisa laga koi mujhe tapad markar has rahatha , koi nahi balke fateh iska matlab wo vus rath chiii gin arahithi mujhe vus raath aur vus pal ko yaadh karke.mujhe apne app par meri degree par sab kuch waste laga mein kaise vus janwar par viswas kiya, kaise mein apne appko vusko soanpdiya , yeh janeh bagair who mujhse pyar kar raha yah bhi nahi. Kyun kiya mein .Mujhe patha bhi nahi kab meri ansu behne laga, gippy mujhe hug kiya

Gippy pov:

I thought vusko pata hain that she is pregnant lekin vusko bhi patha nahi I felt more bad for her.This was such a big thing in her life how the she came to know she is pregnant on a saddest day, how I was saying this to her instead of fateh and she should be smiling jumping with joy but she is crying like hell. If someone saw they would think she lost someone rather than she got to knowshe is becoming mother. I felt extremely sad for her none I mean none in her family knew she is lying in the same hospital the one where jasmine is lying. The storm dint end in her life she needed to face one more that is agreeing for her sisters marriage with her husband.

After sometime she got and requested me to take her home. I took her to virks house and left her.she asked me to leave her there and go . I left saying her to take care of herself and she could reach me anytime.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tejo pov:

Mein virk mansion mein apni kadam rakha iss baar hamesha keliye bahar jane keliye. Ghar ki har ek kone mein fateh aur meri yaadeh mujhe chida rahe te. Aisa laga jaise mein iss gharmein mahino nahi saalo reh chuka hun. Apni room gayi nahi nahi fateh ki room gayiek ek pal aisa laga jaise mein narak mein hun. Aisa laga mein kaanch ke tukde mein chal rahi thi. Fata fat mein apne sare saman baandh liya apni suit case mein aur hall mein agayi. Waha pe sab log kadi hokar mujhe dekh rahe the.

Gurpreet pov:

Mujhe tejo kabhi pasandh nahi thi. Kyun ki vuski behan ki wajeh se mere beta ka wo haal hogaya jo meine kabhi dekha nahi. Lekin jab who apni jindagi mein agey bad raha tha mujhe thasali mili, haan yeh ladki achi hain aur mere bete keliye sahi bhi hain

Lekin jab who boli ki who iss ghar se hamesha hameshakeliye jaa rahi thi aur fateh abhi bhi jasmine se pyar kar rahe hain meri perohke nee he jammen nikal gayi.mera beta keliye jasmine bilkul teek nahi hain aur who ladki barbad karke hi chadega mere bete koh. Isilye mein tejo koh rokne keliye kaha lekin tejo boliā€aauntyji woh meri saath aagebad kar aaj woh meri behen ke bahon mein apne aap ko samet liya" vuske baadmein apna haath chod diya aur apni sar jukh liya.

Who chaligayihamesha keliye. Hum sab mein koi himath raha hi nahi. Kushbeer ji toh neche girgaye bauji aur mahi vusko samhal rahe the.

Tejo pov:

Apna sara luggage lekhar apni ghar agayi . Mummy papa se bol rahi hainā€ hum tejo koh bina batha kepehla indhono ka shadi kar lete hain vuske baad tejo ko dhire se samjathe hain.Who meri samjadaar beti hain who turan maan jathi hain" mein shock hoke wahike wahi rukh gayi.papa mujhe dekha aur mere paas akar andar leke chala. Mujhe yehbhi poocha ki mein kaha gayi, kuch kayi ya nahi , par shadhi ke bare mein kuch nahibola. Mummy mujhe lasi diya aur apni haath mere sar par rak kar mujhe dekh rahithi. Vuski aankh mein gham thi, bhiji ki wor dekhi who dhukh se dekh rahi thi, adhiraj kuch bolne paas aya toh mummy vusko baga diya. Mein mummy ki kande par sar rakhkar apni anke bandh kar bola: mummy aap kuch bathana chathe ho please jhootmathbolo.

Mummy pov:

Tejo ka yehsunkar mujhe samaj mein agaya usko sab kuch patha hain. Ek maa hokar kya karu ekbeti apni behanka ghar tootna chahrahi hain. Agar vusko samjane ki koshish karu yeh bol rahi ki woh apne app koh nuksan pahunchna chahthi hain. Aur iss beti ko hum kya samjha the hain. Asal toh hum vuski layak hi nahi . Galthi toh hamari hain jab jasmine ne shadhi keliye mana kiya bina soche samje tejo ko jabardasthi ki.Ab vusi galthi ka saja mil rahe. Hum sabko nahi meri beti koh jiske koyi dosh nahi.Mein kya bolu vuso isliye joh hona hain hone doh yeh soch kar bol diya meine vuse"tejo jasmine bol rahi who apne app ko chot pahunchthi hain agar hum vuse fateh ke saath nahi shadi kiya aur fateh bhi yahi bol raha agar shadi keliye raaji nahi kiya toh who bhi atma hatya karega:

Tejo pov:

Mein maa kehaathokoh kiss kaeke apni pet par rakh diya. Apni ankhe band kar liye. Mein nahi chahthi mein apni aapa koh dun aur phir se apni bache ko nuksan ho isliye. Ek lambi saas lekhar mein vusko bola" maa mein maa banewali hoon.ā€ Maa apni muh ke upat haath rakh kar royi aur todi dher baad who dere se bola ā€œ tejo jasmine tumhari bache ko samhalne mein kaam ayegi, tum toh college jathi ho na toh" vuske asu nahi rukhraha hain. Mein chota se hasi aur boli" koi jaruri nahi mummy mein jarahi hun iss pind chod kar toh aap na fikar hokar undono ka shadhi kijiye. Aur mein fatehko divorce dethi hun.maa jor se rone lagi aur mujhe sorry bol rahi thi mein papake paas gayi joh apne room mein thi.mein vunko sari baath bataya aur yeh bhi bola ki mein abh iss gahr mein nahi rah sakthi. Papa ke aansu ruka nahi lekin mujhe kisi ki ansu ka koi parwa hi nahi lagi. Sarelog bus kudh keliye soch rahe the koi bhi ekbaar bhi nahi soch mujhe kithna nah insaffi horahi hain.mein apne luggage vutakar janewali tabhi jasmine aur fateh agaya aur fateh chilaya ki who mujhe divorce nahidega. Mein samaj gayi mummy vundono ko sab kuch patha diya

Fateh pov

nahimein tejo ko bina nahi reh saktha. Jab jasmine discharge hogayi tejo keliye dunda lekin who kahi dikhayi nahi diya, I wanted to clear things.I did not want to divorce her she can live in our house as my best friend, lekin jab auntyji mujhe tejo ki faisla bataya and wo pregnant bhi hain I have decided I will not divorce her . I shouted on her how she could divorce me when she is carrying my aulad she cannot keep me away from my child no I shouted on her

Tejo: chillomat mr fateh singh virk apko koi haq nahi hain yeh bolene keliye i cannot ask for divorce. Ek choti behan apnihi badi behan ka ghar barbadh kar sakthi hain, ek pathi apni hi sali se rishta rak sakta hain . Ek pariwar apni izzat keliye apni beti ka zindagi bali chada saktha hain, lekin ek aurat apni divorce nahi mang sakti just because she is pregnant with his child No it is my right to separate from you. aap ek baar apna dimag lagayi ye app kya bol rahi hain.Kis rishte se mein apkeghar mein rahu. Aap mujhe apna biwi nahi manthe lekin ek bacha hoga apke saath. kya bolu vusko jab who pochega maa massi kyun rehta hain papa keh saath,aap kyun nahi ho. Aur iss bache par hak jathane ki koshish bhi math karna apki ek raath ki move on ke bahana ko mein pita ka haak nahi dunga. Yeh apke auladnahi mera bacha hain mera.aur agar aap log koi bhi vulte sidhe kaam kiya mein tum aur tumhari ashiqui par extra marital affair ka case laga dungi

So chup chap divorce papers per sign karlo

Tejo pov:

How dare he shout on me when it was his mistake. I am not going to accept his presence in mychilds life not only his everyone from this house who is standing here I don’t want them in my life from here onwards I neither wanted to be tejo virk nor tejo sandhu.i wanted to be tejo just Dr Tejo. I shattered my dreams for this house many times so for this one time I will shatter my dream of being in moga and doing something great for moga this one time for my own good for the best of my child. I took my luggage, told fateh I will courier divore papers in courier and took the bus goingto punjab.

Divorce was finalized in a month I took my post graduation opportunity in london and moved away.inflight I understood everyones dreams were filled even mine , this might not be mydream from start but this is my new dream to make my own name in this world and make my child feel proud.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was so heart breaking

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