fatejo os : meri biwi Ab kisi aur ki.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am soo stooooo done with that fateh and that Jasmin. God I mean if my ex was like that witch Jasmin I'd move on faster than the rajdhani express but there's not u can expect from a douchebag with a low self esteem, I wont say characterless but really a dense man who gives no fck for the fact he'd have lost his self respect by being a gulam to a God save me witchfaced hag like Jasmin. Hence I'm shipping Tejo with another guy.

Even though I love fatejo but Tejo has my heart and that's the only reason I bear fateh but I'm done with his kabhie iss paar toh kabhie USs par dhela character. So all the die hard fatejo shippers beware and don't read if u have a weak heart.


Fateh looked on hurt trying to control his tears as he saw her smiling in his embrace. He regretted how he had lost a gem like Tejo because of his indesiciveness . He had thought that Jasmin was the love of his life so when he saw her with gippy he went berserk. He used every mean to get her back. He even stooped to a level where he used his best friend cum wife Tejo to get back at her without thinking of its repacussions.

He even succeed in it and finally won her over divorcing Tejo as he had been blinded with his ibadat crap for Jasmin.

He as time passed began to realise jasmines true colors. To her he was only an commodity. He began missing tejos love and care. How she had stood by him through his thick and thin. How she always cooked him his favorite meals, their midnight chats, oh God he felt weak in the pit, he felt suffocated now looking at her now to be wedded of to somebody else.

His sisters Simran and mahi ,his grandparents ,his father had all cursed him that he would never be happy for hurting Tejo and now their words had come true. Karma was really a bitch who had come biting back.He could still remember his sister Simrans words tu isi layak hain fateh, Pata nahi tune USS bhootni Jasmin main kya dekha. sach kehta hain log pyar andha hota hain kyuki aankhe hoti toh Assa na hota. Teri akaal Tera ghutno main aur samajdaari Tera adiyo main hain. Bhagwan Kare tu aur Teri woh Kaamini voti tume duniya bhar ki baddua lag jaye. Tumhare akaal main pathar, aur muh main gobbar pad jaye. Tum dono sir sa takle aur aankho na bhenga Ho Jao. Tumhari shakal ganda jaise aur haath pair ghade jaise ho Jain. Log tumhe dekhkar itna dar jaye ki woh paathar maar maar ke Tumhare haath pair tod de .tum don Bheekh mangne ka bhi layak na baacho.ek din bhookh ke maara raaste kinnare maar Jao aur kaava toh kya chuha bhi tumhare badan ko noch ka na khay. Tumhari aatma asantusht hokar Daar ke maare agle saato janam phir punar janam Lena sa ghabray.

Today it seemed like all of that was one day going to come true even Buzzo who had been his childhood friend had spat at him and left him to suffer. His end was near he could see yamraj walking towards him......

Tejo on the other hand felt like she was on the seventh heaven. She felt blessed to have a man like Arijit bajwa. He had come into her life like an angel and had pulled her out of her darnkess. For the first time she felt what it meant to be truly loved unconditionally without having to be somebodies revenge toy or sacrificial lamb. It had taken her months to come out of her depression to trust and love again. Her soul had been wounded beyond repair by both her family, Jasmin and the man she thought she had loved. Today she had seen him looking at her with teary eyes but she didn't give a f*** anymore .Had it been several months back she would have trembled at just the mere mention of his name but today she didn't care in which pit he and her backstabber sister curled up and died. She had been hesitant at first to invite the virks her ex in laws but arijit had convinced her to call them to let both the sandhus and the virks know what they had lost.

She missed some of them her father in law who had loved and supported her unconditionally and had been her anchor who had helped her move on. And how could she forget simran Didi and mahi. Who were now her soul sisters who had stood by her when her own blood plotted and deceived her.

Arijit looked at his beautiful wife as her put her head on his chest as they slow danced to some Bollywood romantic track. What it is that's troubling my love. Why are their creases on ur forehead and tears in urs eyes. U now how I hate that and would kill anyone who would dare try to bring tears in ur eyes.

Nothing heart just thanking lord for being kind and having mercy on me and after all that pain gifting me with u. Who stood like a shield and tackled every arrow and insult thrown at me. Only u could look par my grief ,pull me out of my darkness and think of marrying a girl like me who was twice married. U could have easily married anybody but u choose me and I will always be grateful for that.

Stop right there Tejo he said, I did u no favour.Ur truly a gem and it's their fault they couldn't value u and I know I'm being ridiculous but thankful to God both ur exes turned out to be idiots and me the lucky one that I get to keep u. I wish u could see ur self through my eyes and what u mean to me and how I'll feel like I've conquered the world even if u feel even an once of the love my heart holds for you .i can't change ur past but will promise to make ur future beautiful. Ur the most important to me and if there is anything that will last forever that's that. Even if there comes a day when u don't love me anymore and walk away and we separate barely talk or rarely meet, u'll be that little someone I'd love to death till my last breath and whom for I'd sacrifice anything to keep safe.

Tejo looked at him with wonder and said how could any one love someone so much and pulled him in for a kiss. As during the entire wedding she had seen women drooling over her man for truly he was the best. She knew he was all hers but didnt want to take the risk and decided to kiss him and mark him hers.


Don't hate me but I'm done with fateh the ghadge. 😁😁😁

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

I am soo stooooo done with that fateh and that Jasmin. God I mean if my ex was like that witch Jasmin I'd move on faster than the rajdhani express but there's not u can expect from a douchebag with a low self esteem, I wont say characterless but really a dense man who gives no fck for the fact he'd have lost his self respect by being a gulam to a God save me witchfaced hag like Jasmin. Hence I'm shipping Tejo with another guy.

Even though I love fatejo but Tejo has my heart and that's the only reason I bear fateh but I'm done with his kabhie iss paar toh kabhie USs par dhela character. So all the die hard fatejo shippers beware and don't read if u have a weak heart.


Fateh looked on hurt trying to control his tears as he saw her smiling in his embrace. He regretted how he had lost a gem like Tejo because of his indesiciveness . He had thought that Jasmin was the love of his life so when he saw her with gippy he went berserk. He used every mean to get her back. He even stooped to a level where he used his best friend cum wife Tejo to get back at her without thinking of its repacussions.

He even succeed in it and finally won her over divorcing Tejo as he had been blinded with his ibadat crap for Jasmin.

He as time passed began to realise jasmines true colors. To her he was only an commodity. He began missing tejos love and care. How she had stood by him through his thick and thin. How she always cooked him his favorite meals, their midnight chats, oh God he felt weak in the pit, he felt suffocated now looking at her now to be wedded of to somebody else.

His sisters Simran and mahi ,his grandparents ,his father had all cursed him that he would never be happy for hurting Tejo and now their words had come true. Karma was really a bitch who had come biting back.He could still remember his sister Simrans words tu isi layak hain fateh, Pata nahi tune USS bhootni Jasmin main kya dekha. sach kehta hain log pyar andha hota hain kyuki aankhe hoti toh Assa na hota. Teri akaal Tera ghutno main aur samajdaari Tera adiyo main hain. Bhagwan Kare tu aur Teri woh Kaamini voti tume duniya bhar ki baddua lag jaye. Tumhare akaal main pathar, aur muh main gobbar pad jaye. Tum dono sir sa takle aur aankho na bhenga Ho Jao. Tumhari shakal ganda jaise aur haath pair ghade jaise ho Jain. Log tumhe dekhkar itna dar jaye ki woh paathar maar maar ke Tumhare haath pair tod de .tum don Bheekh mangne ka bhi layak na baacho.ek din bhookh ke maara raaste kinnare maar Jao aur kaava toh kya chuha bhi tumhare badan ko noch ka na khay. Tumhari aatma asantusht hokar Daar ke maare agle saato janam phir punar janam Lena sa ghabray.

Today it seemed like all of that was one day going to come true even Buzzo who had been his childhood friend had spat at him and left him to suffer. His end was near he could see yamraj walking towards him......

Tejo on the other hand felt like she was on the seventh heaven. She felt blessed to have a man like Arijit bajwa. He had come into her life like an angel and had pulled her out of her darnkess. For the first time she felt what it meant to be truly loved unconditionally without having to be somebodies revenge toy or sacrificial lamb. It had taken her months to come out of her depression to trust and love again. Her soul had been wounded beyond repair by both her family, Jasmin and the man she thought she had loved. Today she had seen him looking at her with teary eyes but she didn't give a f*** anymore .Had it been several months back she would have trembled at just the mere mention of his name but today she didn't care in which pit he and her backstabber sister curled up and died. She had been hesitant at first to invite the virks her ex in laws but arijit had convinced her to call them to let both the sandhus and the virks know what they had lost.

She missed some of them her father in law who had loved and supported her unconditionally and had been her anchor who had helped her move on. And how could she forget simran Didi and mahi. Who were now her soul sisters who had stood by her when her own blood plotted and deceived her.

Arijit looked at his beautiful wife as her put her head on his chest as they slow danced to some Bollywood romantic track. What it is that's troubling my love. Why are their creases on ur forehead and tears in urs eyes. U now how I hate that and would kill anyone who would dare try to bring tears in ur eyes.

Nothing heart just thanking lord for being kind and having mercy on me and after all that pain gifting me with u. Who stood like a shield and tackled every arrow and insult thrown at me. Only u could look par my grief ,pull me out of my darkness and think of marrying a girl like me who was twice married. U could have easily married anybody but u choose me and I will always be grateful for that.

Stop right there Tejo he said, I did u no favour.Ur truly a gem and it's their fault they couldn't value u and I know I'm being ridiculous but thankful to God both ur exes turned out to be idiots and me the lucky one that I get to keep u. I wish u could see ur self through my eyes and what u mean to me and how I'll feel like I've conquered the world even if u feel even an once of the love my heart holds for you .i can't change ur past but will promise to make ur future beautiful. Ur the most important to me and if there is anything that will last forever that's that. Even if there comes a day when u don't love me anymore and walk away and we separate barely talk or rarely meet, u'll be that little someone I'd love to death till my last breath and whom for I'd sacrifice anything to keep safe.

Tejo looked at him with wonder and said how could any one love someone so much and pulled him in for a kiss. As during the entire wedding she had seen women drooling over her man for truly he was the best. She knew he was all hers but didnt want to take the risk and decided to kiss him and mark him hers.


Don't hate me but I'm done with fateh the ghadge. 😁😁😁


Understand ur disappointment

U write good stories

I read all but didnt get time to reply as i was busy writing mine

I want to share my story with u

The latest one that i wrote on

Fatejo - who are u

Tejo loses her memory

Forgotten him as her husband

To me that is the biggest end to jasfa

Once and for all

U know why

Coz fateh wont be able bear the fact that she has forgotten him as the husband

The male ego

Keep writing

I am taking a break from the show and stories

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I've read all of urs and the one ur latest one as well. I love ur comic sense and ur writing style. God u really make all off us laugh ur too good with ur stories. Plz get back as soon as possible as I used to wait for ur posts everyday. I'd check and recheck everyday at least a dozen times to see if I'd write any new ones. Will be waiting to read ur next one plzzzz come back as soonn as possible. I mean if ur in the headspace to write more.

A true ardent fan of ur work

Shraddha.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Tq dear

If u want u can also rewrite my latest one in ur own version

I wrote it hurriedly

It could be seggregated into parts

U can take over

The problem for me is time

We are all having busy lives

Writing requires the right mind set

And space

Tc

Have a nice day

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you would love too if u will allow, I too had thought of something like that but was working on some other story related to udaariyan that I was working on which I have put aside but I'll trying posting one in a day or two after which I too will probably lessen my stories until the end of July as my exams are just around the corner.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi there! 👀

I saw you pm but then I forgot to respond 🤦🏽‍♀️ because same as Aniash, I was working on my own fic. I’m really sorry 🥲 I am not as active on IF as I once used to be

I’m really happy to joined your forum and that you’re bringing these pieces to us! I understand your disappointment at Fateh 🙁

I haven’t watched the episode yet and not sure if I will.
I liked this piece, it’s bittersweet. I love that Tejo is happy and that Fateh is really given what his actions made him deserve!

Thank you for writing this! 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I'm writing kismat connection currently which I u must have read and it just like ur os revolves around memory loss but mine unlike urs is intense. I am not good at humour and admire people who are. In that story too she has forgotten about their marriage and love but I have reveled their marriage yet was going to in the upcoming chapters but I guess I just gave spoilers but please read my work and keep giving feedback so that I keep improving.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you for responding to my os. I have been following ur work as well and love ur posts. Plz write more on fatejo if u can. Would love to read it. And continue giving me feedback so that I improve.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved It! Simran's curses were epic 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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loved it. Keep writing amazing stuffs 😊

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