Fatejo - THE MAKEOVER

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This is a continuous of fatejo - the three musketeers


11am at the university campus

Mam the stage work is completed . Just a little of decorations left to do !

A female student's voice startled tejo who was sitting on a chair deep in her own thoughts about her husband fateh singh virk who had been acting like a weirdo past 24 hrs throwing his tantrums in front of her student the day before and behaving rudely with her colleagues

Irrrk ,,, complete the rest after lunch,!

She left for her classroom to continue with the lessons for the day, still not being able to concentrate fully , worried about her husbands behaviour lately


11 am at the salon

Sounds of machinery all around him for a make over. Took buzo's advise,

sir which hair style ? The hairdresser asked politely,

he replied excitedly , varun dhawan wala style in the movie DILWALE

Sir manicure peddycure also ?

I want a total make over !

He replied with a wide smile

Facial , peddycure manicure , waxing , new hairstyle and finally clean shaven


4pm

She was waiting anxiously at the front gate of the campus for her husband who is an hour late,

Acting like a weirdo and now not picking her up

Frustrated she called for a taxi


5pm

He came out of the salon and held up his arms taking in a deep breath for the new journey of fateh singh virk

One more decision made with the new look,

speak in english

There were many miscalls from his wife .

And a text message i am taking taxi home

Oh god ! I forgot to inform her that buzo will pick her up, he called buzo and the latter gave an excuse he was tied up with some personal work


5. 30 pm

Fateh singh virks walks into his residence smiling , virks were shocked except gurpreet who liked his new look and complimented as well as hugged him


Mahi was taken by surprise and worried how tejo would react, Babuji and kushberr were upset of him being clean shaven giving excuse moustache and beard are a pride of being a male , dadi smiled and said u look like a film actor and kissed his forehead


Now the bomb drops!

Tejo came out of the kitchen holding a tray of tea cups

And stopped midway

Totally shocked , unbelievable

A look at her husband who was smiling at her

She screamed fateh !

Dropped the tray on the marble floor and fall to the ground unconscious!


Water sprinkled

She opened her eyes

His face close to hers

Tejo madam ap thik ho ! He asked anxiously

Thought she will be happy but she fainted that shook him all over.

Apko mera new look nehin acha lega ?

Mahi helped her to sit up and interrupted before tejo could reply

Kaisey acha legeyga? Wife hai vo apki , kam sey kam betana toh chahiye?

Fateh angry ,

meri body meri marzi ? Mey jo karun so karun!

Mahi upset , bhai ab apki shadi ho geyi hai , toh apki body pey bhabhi ka pehla haq benta hai

All virks were shocked including tejo and fateh

Arey yeh kya bol rehi hai ! Everyone thinking the same

Mahi realised the looks given to her

Irrr ,,, mera matlab bhabhi sey puchna chahiye pehle

Ab ap betau bhai

bhabhi agar salon jati hay hair bhi cut karney key liye aur bina ap ko betaye kya apko acha legeyga?

Nehin na Toh phir

Tejo interrupted advising mahi to be silent , koi baat nehin , i dont mind , fateh ko agar acha legta hai i have no problem , she said pretend to smile a little

Deep inside she was upset , he never said anything about makeover , first throwing tantrums and now this , next what ? More surprises ?

Little did she realise that her thoughts are going to change into a reality for her, a better word

A nightmare!


8 pm

All virks seated at the dining table having dinner ; for the first time total silence , thanks to fatehs makeover that shook everyone hard from head to toe especially tejo who could barely eat her food


11pm

He walked towards his room happily returning from 2 hours outing after dinner with buzo and friends who wanted to see his new looks, all compliments and even snaps taken as well as uploaded them on his instagram

Written beneath

THE NEW LOOK@ THE NEW JOURNEY!

He frowned as he stepped into his room

Tejo sleeping on the couch i

Red signal

I AM UPSET !

He sighed and closed his heavy eyd lids


7 am

She sat quietly feeling the fresh breeze as he drove his jeep towards the university ,

She didnt utter a single word since morning

He parked his jeep and to her surprise he didnt leave as usual after dropping her instead walked along with her till the entrance of the campus smiling walking stylishly like a model practically showing off to all the male categories watching him be it students co workers office staffs and even the labour class the gardeners as well as security guards indicating

HEY LOOK ! I AM HANDSOME HOT CHARMING AND MUSCULAR!

SO BUZZ OFF DUDES !

MY WIFE IS ONLY ATTRACTED TO ME !

DONT U DARE COME CLOSER !

U WILL FACE THE WRATH OF THE GREAT BOXER FATEH SINGH VIRK!


All heads turned towards this new hot guy as he escorted his beloved wife pretend to be her body guard right till her classroom and waited till the bell of the first class rang refused to leave even when she persuaded him to go , feeling embarassed with his behaviour, what will people say ? The chipku husband !


12pm staff room

U better be aware tejo !

Mrs shukla sat beside her to mark her students work sheets, tejo was confused

She continued

I mean ur husband , isnt that weird , like u guys just got married,

Tejo realised truth in her words, he was acting in such a manner,

She continued

U know girl u are young and not experienced like most of us who had tolerated husbands' insanities throughout our marriage lives !

Mrs tejvinder sitting nearby interrupted

Tell me about it ! Been dealing for 30 yrs now!

Wished i was never married!

Tejo never knew shadi key side effects would be so strong , effect can already be seen , only married hardly few weeks

Mrs khanna interrupted

Tejo better becareful dear , tera husband phisel chuka hai

Tejo asked confused and nervous at the same time

Irrrk ,,, matlab !

Mrs shukla replied instead

When husband does total makeover it hints something is wrong somewhere ,

Tejo was still confused

Mrs tejvinder interrupted

Matlab he might be seeing someone behind ur back!

Aur nehin to kya ! Mrs shukla interrupted angrily

My husband did a makeover just few weeks after i got married to him and found out he was having an affair with next door aunties daughter , and u know what tejo my marriage was a majburi wali shadi like urs , he had to marry me coz my older sister who was supposed to be the bride eloped with her lover on the wedding day !

Then after a year i divorced him ,!

The same happened in my second marriage !

Then i decided its better to stay single again !


Tejo was so upset and nervous , decided to take the day off and go home , she called fateh ; a female answered ,

Tejo was surprised

It was a hotel assistant voice over his phone , fateh left his phone accidentally at the information counter and was talking to someone in the hotel room

The women answered fateh is in the room with someone , pls call later and then disconnected


Fateh was planning his marriage reception at a five star hotel , a surprise for tejo and both families, well marriage taken place in a way that everyone was hurt and couldnt enjoy fully, So the wedding reception will be a treat for all, mend bitter relationships between both families ; And the main important reason

Indirectly indicating to all punjab male population that beware ! Tejo is my wife now! Keep ur distance! An official announcement

Made guest list

The three musketerrs on top of all

College male population overall the good looking hot ones

Female population only good friends of tejo

Small numbers

Families and close relatives

friends especially males the good looking ones

Total population = 2800

Male = 2200

Female = 600

Venue - grand ball room with occupancy of 3000 peple

Invitatiom cards to be given only written

SURPRISE PARTY BY FATEH SINGH VIRK

Date time and venue given

Fateh got buzo and two friends on board to assist him but on condition its a secret


1pm

Tears in her eyes sitting at the taxi stand in front of the campus

He 's having an affair ! Oh god !

Why didnt i see it coming !

Jasu ka bhoot utar chuka ab hotel wali ka bhoot ched geya!

Fateh ! How could u !

She didnt know whom to speak to , shall i call sneha

her good friend and colleague who always give her good advises but she's away for her cousin's marriage

Cant tell families they will be upset after all humiliation they went through

She tried to console herself

Fateh is not wrong, after jasmin's betrayal he needed attention , and i belong into the good friend category only, i cant fulfill his desires , perhaps he's flirting so he could forget jasu and please himself

The taxi came finally and she text fateh that she took off early as she was tired , so no need to fetch her


As she reached her room and laid on the bed his reply came in

Sorry i am busy , its good u took a taxi home , and dont wait for me for dinner; i will be late,

Tejo started crying again

Who am i going to share my sorrow , then decided to call another close friend as sneha was not picking up, her friend advised her to stay calm , this happens in majbori wali shadi especially if husband is heartbroken, he will do all kinds of funny things for a little while, so just be patient; he will eventually bounce back to u only


Fateh spent the rest of the evening at buzo' s place to discuss about the preparations for the grand event he was planning as a surprise, lots of work to be done, they refused to get hotel assisstance and take over the workload on their own shoulder as hotel was charging a penny for each and everything , the total expenses will be about 25 lakhs : but they could save some on the decorations , do it themselves:

Fateh decided to break two of his fixed deposits , refused to ask kushbeer worry the latter will not permit,

He would spend 25 lakhs to warn the male population to stay away from his precious wife; buzo thought to himself tejo bhabhi is so lucky

little did he know that tejo bhabhi was heartbroken that his friend is having an affair, a big misunderstanding on the way for husband and wife


News of fatehs makeover reached sandhus, they were shocked and confused, the whole society of their village were talking about fateh , Viraj decided to call tejo

Tejo sounded low on the phone and lied the reason behind that he wanted to try a new look and i didnt object to it; thats all

Hearing her viraj felt something was wrong somewhere but was silent about it, perhaps will pay a visit later on,


11pm

Fateh was shocked, tejo was not in the room , neither was the couch , where have they both gone ?

Panicked

searched the whole hse

Found finally , sleeping on the same coach but venue changed to roof top, he frowned itna gussa!

Virks were aware when tejo requested mahi to help her to shift the coach to the roof, babuji warned no one to interfere , let husband wife resolve their issues, punishment for fateh for not getting his wife permission first before taking such a big step; let him learn his lesson, he will be more careful in future,

With a heavy heart fateh walked to his room

Now he has to sleep alone, never mind after the party she will bounce back to the room , just be patient


A week passed

Tejo and fateh barely spoke , a misunderstanding between both. , he thought she was unhappy with the makeover and she thought he was having an affair

Fateh drops her in the mornings walks her to her classroom and then leaves happily , buzo picks her up in the afternoons giving excuses fateh is busy ,

He comes home late daily , missing in action the whole day,


Tejo spent most of the time in her room crying, little did she know that her possessive husband was planning a grand party to warn all male population in the society to stay away from his precious sweet innocent wife

Viraj was busy with rupi and harman on their new business venture , a retail shop, so he forgot to pay a visit to tejo despite knowing something was bothering her,


The bomb dropped

The invitation to the SURPRISE PARTY BY FATEH SINGH WEEK distibuted

The talk of the town, majority male population invited

Everyone wondering for the reason


Tejo was sitting in the staff room looking at the invitation, found out from the teachers that majority male population of the university invited ! Is he dating !

Oh no !

A GAY !

A male from the college she works !

Thats why the makeover and he even walks her to her classroom!

Why did i not notice !

She ran to the washroom crying loudly, he is frustrated with loving a woman so now decided to flirt with a guy instead

I never knew fateh u will go to such extend !

Mrs tejvinder and others consoled her,


Tejo took the day off

Packed her bags and went over to sandhus who were shocked to hear the reason of her leaving fateh and his family

Viraj was furious

How dare he ! Biji advised everyone to stay calm

Perhaps it could be a misunderstanding , jasmin was happy to see tejo fateh parting ways, little did she know that she was going to get the biggest blow of her life,

Her sisters grand wedding reception


Virks were sitting in the living room annoyed with tejo's action, fateh was not picking up his phone; what happened that she left suddenly?

Fateh reached home almost midnight , virks confronted him, he advised them to be calm coz after the party she will be fine and walked away quietly to his room

The virks were confused but decided to wait for 2 more days since the occasion was just around the corner


He was missing her badly and the same was on her side as well , he thought to himself as he rested his head on the pillow tejo madam two more days and then u will be back on this bed again


She was lying on her bed thinking what shall i do now ?shall i go to the party? Well need to see what he has planned


The day of the party

10am

A beautiful red gold embroided saree was delivered to sandhus residense from a designer outlet for tejo singh virk from husband fateh singh virk to be worn for the party

Dolly shocked to see the tag

2 lakh rupees saree

Sandhus were puzzled, jasmin was at preetos place and decided not to attend the party, fateh will miss her

Biji then explained perhaps we misunderstood fateh , we need to attend the party to find out


12pm3

Fateh texted tejo to wear the saree, he will be waiting for her at the party

Tejo was confused , Biji advised her just do as he says

Stay calm, dont make conclusions without knowing the truth


5pm

A hairdresser and beautician sent by fateh to sandhus residence who were getting more puzzled with SIL actions but decided to play along


7pm

Tejo singh virk looked so gorgeous in the red saree with its sleeveless blouse that he could hardly take away his eyes from her, dressed in a black pant suit he was handsome and dashing as always

Tejo gasped as she saw the signboard at the entrance of the ball room

GRAND WEDDING RECEPTION OF MR AND MRS FATEH SINGH VIRK

Tears rolled down her cheeks

Oh god! What was i thinking, he was planning all this all the while !

A feeling of guilt that she couldnt hold any longer and ran into fatehs's arms

Virks and sandhus sighed a huge relief

Finally ! Misunderstanding cleared


They walked hand in hand into the ballroom cheered by all seated guests ; virks were proud of fateh , sandhus cried with joy for having such a wonderful SIL, little did they realise he was a possessive husband to their beloved daughter

There was music and gaana bejana !

Tejo was swept into her husbands arms flowing with the music who didnt allow any other male to come near her to dance with her, being the chipku husband throughout the event hinting indirectly to the male crowd

She s mine so u buzz off

The whole lot of 2800 people enjoyed the party especialy the bride and her family


Tejo finally was back to her room , both were exhausted and apologised to one another, then hugged each other to their deep slumber

With one question that still puzzled her to which he didnt provide a clear answer


WHY MAJORITY GUESTS WERE OF MALE POPULATION!












































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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am starting to love this chipku husband Fateh. he is slowly turning into my new favourite replacing Virat 😊 . Please tag me in your stories, so that I get a notification when you post. Still new to this forum so do not know how to search. ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Gosh this was so cute😆 Thank you for sharing!

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Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

Gosh this was so cute😆 Thank you for sharing!


They should bring a wedding reception on screen

A slap for jasmin

A treat for tejo

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Tq for reading and appreciating

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Originally posted by: Dee10

I am starting to love this chipku husband Fateh. he is slowly turning into my new favourite replacing Virat 😊 . Please tag me in your stories, so that I get a notification when you post. Still new to this forum so do not know how to search. ❤️


Tq dear for apprecoting ny work

I didnt tag anyone so far

Post it for anyone to read as they wish

But if u request to tag then the next whenever i write i will tag u

For the other stories u can find then in pg 3, 4 and 5 of the forum

Fatejo honeymoon - padosan

Fatejo - the first move

Fatejo - meri pyari tejo

Fatejo - the bare back pt 1 to 6

And some fun post

Fateh ki pitaai pt 1 to 4

Fatejo - secondhand

Fatejo - hum apkey hain kaun

Edited by Aniash - 4 years ago

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