Smita the lovely one whom i befriend through twitter.. Thank you so much
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Part 4A :
Beautiful updates. While I read your story, it seems to be real, I forget that it's a story.
I loved the portion when they all slept in a bed but Raghav ensured that he always held her hand.
I'm so happy that you bring bhuka back to their lives. Finally Mai bapu came out of trauma, got discharged & came home. Girija gave bhuka a full narration of the last 10 yrs of their life. They are happy for Chakor but kasturi is a bit confused about Raghav, perhaps they are not aware of his goodness & couldn't realize his pure and unadulterated love for Chakor, so skeptical about him but I loved the way Chakor explained them about Raghav's genuinity, his pure, unconditional love for her, his awaiting for her without knowing whether she would return to him or not, his place in her heart, her life, her mind, then Mai's all confusion was clear . I loved the entire conversation between Chakor & Mai. It's better to keep some memories deep in the heart. They causes sadness while digging them. It would have been better if bhuka would stay with them for a few days, but I respect their decision as I can understand that no-one wants to stay in their daughter's house & liked that Raghav too stood silently while they were going to AZ as he knew that was Chakor's decision. You wrote the entire scene so beautifully, in such a realistic way.
Then the guilt and punishment part was amazing. Chakor felt guilty, wanted Raghav to punish her and the way both of them comforting and soothing each other was just 🔥🔥 . It's too good to see that Raghav also felt guilty for not being able to understand her that he loved her most. The proficiency of your writing has made this part look even more beautiful & exciting.The entire scene was too fiery, too 🔥🔥 but the phone call, the sudden interruption made them more craving for each other.
Reading the precap , it seems the part B is going to be more hot & provocative.
Part 4B:
Omg Sumi what a wonderful part. I just loved Ad & her cute tappal tap,😍😍 so she too became rowdy like her dadda and bro. She even doesn't tolerate any wrongdoing like her mummy, & An too supported her, good going princes😘😘...loved the portion when Ar said Ad became SB like Mom and both Ragkor startled😳😳😳, just imagining their facial expressions. Couldn't control my laughter😂😂😂.
I loved that in front of AB, the Lion became cat. But finally he handled the situation and made AB to his SB😝😝.
Then the hot, sizzling, ragkor romance, What can I say Sumi, you did masters in writing such scenes, made me speechless. It was too hot to handle. I enjoyed the entire romantic part right from the gym session ,the seductive gestures, the aroma oil, the massage (loved you always go into the detailing) to the Jacuzzi tub and finally to the bed, under the quilt. Just imagining meejay I feel shy & blushing 🙈🙈🙈throughout reading. Loved bold Chakor and her cutely asking for once more like quickly made fast food😍😍. You wrote many Ragkor hot and bold scenes, but it's your legerity of writing & unique style that make all the scenes diversified & different from each other. In your story you always keep all the ingredients, that make it bold, beautiful, peaceful, fantastic, outstanding👌👌👌👏👏. There is no shortage of any ingredients in this case too, be it suspense, thrill (you have started with it), the action, emotions, light moments, finally hot, steamy romance (always finished with it).
Thank you again for the fantastic story 🙏🙏make all of us happy , tranquil & increasing my appetite for meejay even more. Lots of love ❤❤❤😍😍😍. Take care. Keep writing while you'll free.
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