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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavi.Gollapudi

Sumi dear🤗 another interesting update ...

Aww poor raghav everyone against him 😂 😂 even nature also 😉

So AA missing 😊..can't wait to see raghav angry n action performance ..,I like raghav angry avatar ..ohooo raghav angry on chakor also.😊but no prblm we know after that we will get something hehee😜😜 😂 😃

Love the suspense more thrilling n interesting

Precap 😃eagarly waiting waiting👁👁

Thanks for the liking

@bold what something.. Dhating dhating nothing... 😆 enuf lot of demos done

Let them get on with some action 😜

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Smita for your lovely words on twitter


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Part 1:

It's great to know that Aditi is like her father & Arjun, even she learned to fight for others in this childhood age, whereas Ananya is like Aayansh, her affinity towards different arts like drawing, singing, dancing, & their fav, hugging & kissing mummy. It's nice to see that Ar would like to serve for Army & wants to dedicate few years of his life to the Country, his patriotism is like his mom, and Chakor & Kaka have found the quality of the future leader in Ar, seeing his maturity in such a young age.

Loved Ragkor massage session, his pleads for joint Jacuzzi like a quick made fast food 😍😍, but missed the chance 😛😛 due to rose's waking up.

Loved Aa for his fraternity, never leaves Ar alone, despite being height phobia, he is ready to go with his brother. Loved Ar tried to convince his daddy in the intellectual way with logic, he failed but Chakor did never failed , how cutely she convinced her Lion. He agreed to send the kids to the expedition but doesn't leave any chance to romance.

There is no limit of anxiety of parents for their offspring. They were so much worried for the kids. The roses were too angry with their bother for leaving them.

Precap is full of thrill. I look forward to seeing how the mystery will be unveiled & about the person, kidnapped the boys & knows Chakor.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Sukor123 for the lovely words

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Another fantastic update full of suspence & drama 👌👌👌

Haha bichara Raghav can,t do anything because of roses 😀😀😀 Liked the way Aa ready to go with Ar just because of he never leave Ar alone When the roses angry with her bros it was too cute 😍😍😍 We saw angry Raghav even that he is angry with Chakor also but we know when all things settled Raghav babu settled everything with his own way 🙈🙈🙈 Hope mystery solved soon and eagarly waiting for next part that is full of intriguing


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear🤗

what is this surprise❤️, yesterday I opened Nikki's post thinking yours and today opened yours thinking its hers😆

I read the intriguing teaser and went. Missed the first part.😔

omg.❤️...loved the family moments, small light RagKor moments and the suspense..uff...I take back my request to Nikki on your vacation😆...please update soon. we were on edge of seats on the teaser and last lines of chakor..what she saw and where are the boys...want to know soon.😎😊

Liked how Arjun grows up and shaped too, he wants to serve army and going on with mumma's traits👍🏼. and on other hand Aa is into music but loves mumma way too much and still teases his daddy ..lovely and Aa wanted to accompany Ar though he is scared of heights, he is another sweetu after raghav.

boys making mumma to recommend to their dad, finally birdie making her RR accept it and roses sending off bros ,all cute.

the small moment between Ragkor before roses call is also lovely one.

I am liking the realistic flow with all details explained.

So coming back to the tragic part , what happened to boys, angry raghav and his anger on hers inevitable. lets see how lion and eagle tackle it. Awaiting.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗

what is this surprise❤️, yesterday I opened Nikki's post thinking yours and today opened yours thinking its hers😆

I read the intriguing teaser and went. Missed the first part.😔

omg.❤️...loved the family moments, small light RagKor moments and the suspense..uff...I take back my request to Nikki on your vacation😆...please update soon. we were on edge of seats on the teaser and last lines of chakor..what she saw and where are the boys...want to know soon.😎😊

Liked how Arjun grows up and shaped too, he wants to serve army and going on with mumma's traits👍🏼. and on other hand Aa is into music but loves mumma way too much and still teases his daddy ..lovely and Aa wanted to accompany Ar though he is scared of heights, he is another sweetu after raghav.

boys making mumma to recommend to their dad, finally birdie making her RR accept it and roses sending off bros ,all cute.

the small moment between Ragkor before roses call is also lovely one.

I am liking the realistic flow with all details explained.

So coming back to the tragic part , what happened to boys, angry raghav and his anger on hers inevitable. lets see how lion and eagle tackle it. Awaiting.


Thanks so much Uma

Well confused about my bossy post 😉😉😉

Proved she is na 👍🏼

Thanks so much yes aa my chweeto is next to Raaghav will not leave his bro ever... 😘

Last line yes yes even I want to know where are they and who is in dark

Any guessess🤔

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part II

Expedition

The bus with the children left for the trip. RagKor waited till the bus was out of their sight. The children were from different classes. Chakor went to the parents and checked if their children had gone earlier. Few said yes while many said it was their first too.

RagKor had a talk with the Principal. Chakor got the organizers details and called them to check where the boys will be staying. She was told that they would stay at the foothills of the Himalayan Region few Kms away from Shimla but with limited network coverage so sometimes they may not get signals. The area is very hilly with very very less habitat. She was assured that the organizers have taken full care of the whole program and safety of the children

She crossed by the peon Karnad who was talking to someone on phone about Purnima day and smiled. The breeze was good and the moon was shining and it was nearing full moon day. She was smiling at her Chanduji. Chanduji please guard my children she said. Raaghav spoke to the kids on phone and both left for the Mansion.

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The camp was at the foothills of the Himalayas which had the serene beauty with a deep valley one side. They had camp games, born fires and few group events along with meeting with the locals who were mostly tribal and spoke their language. The trekking was organized for the final day and it was near the valley which had dense forest and signals were not working.

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Are you sure my wishes will be fulfilled asked the middle aged man sitting near the tantric. He was tall with thick hair with ashes smeared over him. He spoke in the tribal language and the translator was telling him. Don’t worry everything is organized. You will acquire more power and wealth once this is done and you are lucky as after so long and as per your astrological predictions we will get what we wanted. Will anyone find it??? No None can even reach here and no one even know this exits and those come here cannot leave and dies and get buried there said the tantric… He gave him box full of currency… He laughed and said he will take the rest once the job is done….

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The children were enjoying their stay and Arjun was excelling in all and Aa was managing himself though he would stay behind some of the adventurous games and will be sketching the scenic beauty and playing his flute… They were made to cook themselves. When there was signal they would send the pics to RagKor and also speak to them. But as they proceeded there was hardly any network. Raaghav ensured they wore their bands with Swastik on it.

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It was the final day it was cloudy and the boys set with their backpack and set for the trekking. The bus took them to a certain point and from there they were to trek and go to a particular point. It was dense forest. Ar was motivating Aa who was bit scared to climb up and the ropes were helping them. It was evening they were returning when Arjun asked the guide showing the valley as it is so dense will anyone live here? are there any villages?. He said he has not been to the villages but heard few villages were forbidden to reach too but has little habitats mostly tribals. Aa held Ar hands tightly.

It was night and the children were waiting to alight the bus back to Shimla and Ar and Aa were made to stand last by the guide. Arjun’s band fell down. He went to pick it when the wind started to blow heavy. Ar went behind it and Aa also started running behind and then it started to pour heavy.. it was pouring heavy so the guide got into the bus and closed the door asking the driver to go ahead.. The boys looked at the bus leaving when they started to shout but were pulled back by strong arms and nose closed with a hanky. Aa fainted. Ar quickly closed his nostrils but was fighting it out.

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In the mansion RagKor and children were sleeping… Raaghav and the roses were restless. They had to pick the boys early morning so they went to bed early.

Arjun….. Aayansh….. Raaghav woke up from sleep shouting aloud… panting… sweating….. he could not breath… Chakor he shouted…. She woke up with the sudden noise… Raaghav what happened…. I am feeling choked… Call the boys..some thing is wrong with my boys…..Holding his chest…. Excruciating pain…

At the same time Bhaaai…. The roses cried together uncontrollable as though they had a nightmare…

Chakor palpitated….she tried calling the boys but were not reachable.. What’s happening… she could not run to him nor them… Hey Daak Baba….. Giriji Mausi…. Kaaaka….. some one please come. She called on the house intercom. She hugged the roses carried them to him placing them on the bed she quickly gave water to Raaghav. Calm down Raaghav … No No call the school, call the organizers he was restless. She called the organisers who said that the children have started and they will be reaching within an hour.

He jumped lets go but Raaghav, he said lets go NOW…. She gave the girls to Girija and asked the staff to take care who were crying inconsolable. She said to them we are going to bring bhaai when they calmed down but was still whining.

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The boys were carried through the bushes blindfolded… Aa completely fainted but Ar managed to stay awake but was posing as though fainted to listen whats happening.. since their hands were tied together he seeped through that Aa is beside him. He could hear a very very loud noise of a fan … Mumma Daddy…. he said to himself….

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The bus reached the school and only Raaghav and Chakor were there while the other parents were coming slowly…

The boys came down but Ar and Aa were not to be seen. Raaghav shouted for his cubs.. searched the bus… Held the guide.. where are my boys… He said all got in as it was raining heavy and dark he could not check but thought they had boarded the bus.

Principal had come and also the poen Karnad.

Where are my boys….raged the Lion holding the Principal’s collars. I will burn your school down….. it is your responsibility…. How can you be careless. His eyes was on fire…the Principal was trembling in fear. Sir!!! One of the parents called the Police and the organisers . The Police commissioner was there. They were enquiring the guide…

He was in rage. Running madly into the bus, searching below the seat, climbing on the top. How can you be irresponsible. Chakor was tearing up inconsolable. My boys where are you… Raaghav… she called him…. please calm…..

I told you I did not want to send them…. He could not control his anger on her too. Chakor I need our boys…..I will die without them…. I need them he shook her..

Raaghav nothing will happen…. We will get them…. She spoke to commissioner who said he will get his team to help out. He loved the boys too and said they are smart they will be safe wherever they are. He was interrogating the organizers about the trekking route.

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The whole mansion was in tension. The Lion was raging with anger. Trying to track the boys on his system. He called Govind and his technical guy but due to network they could not locate the band.

Chakor ran to Arjun’s computer…. The computer guy was there….

She tried to login when it asked for password… She asked Raaghav.. as there were only three tries.

Calm down Raaghav we will find them. She felt terribly guilty too. She was praying all gods.

Nothing will befall on our children…

Tell me the password…. Try his name. No Raaghav Ar is very smart he will not keep his name…

Raaghav said he likes aditi so try aditi… Nope it did not unlock…

Try Aayansh no that too did not work. He was a geek that he had made it in such a way that the computer would crash if all three passwords failed. Many of Raaghav’s files were there on his system so he was smart.

Raaghav said try my name. No… Chakor said. Think calm he will not keep any thing so straightforward… its last try… He said he has written details about the trip…about the location etc. so we donot have another chance. What could it be she tried various permutations and combinations….

She prayed hard and entered RagKor and with lots of hesitation and hit the enter button… the computer opened… she teared as to how much he loved them….. Raaghav was shattering… I did not want to send them…. Where are you my boys??? Bajrangbali please help me..

She looked into Arjun’s computer….she checked the few photos that Aa had sent on their phone and also the sketches of the terrain. Her eyes grew in shock!!! It showed the forbidden land…the less habitats which were in the middle of the dense forest as per the topographical maps.

She checked the organizers website and found the last gone trips and the people who had travelled… Out of many years and close to three hundreds of children three had indeed reported missing due to accident…..but could not be found. who are the missing children???

How are they missed? She told the commissioner and asked for the details of the missing children and when they were missed. All three were boys.

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The boys were in a small hut tied and the tall black man spoke to them in tribal language while another man spoke to them in Hindi translating.

You are too brave he said!!! Yes I fear none… said he ….though tied…. If you have courage free me he said. Yes we will free you as you cannot run anywhere from here and you can be free till evening…

You don’t know about my parents he said…. They freed them, gave them food…. but locked inside the hut which had no windows only a door and a very small opening in the ceiling. It was dark inside and they could not see but sensed someone dark in the corner.

Bhaiii , I am scared said Aa will we see our mummy and daddy he asked…..

NOOO came a very very feeble voice from the corner… did not see…. Its now over ten years.

Who is it there asked Ar……You know hindi????

Bhaaai Aa was palpitating in fear…..

Kaun hai thera baapu …… Raaghav Kumar

Kaun hai thera Maai……… CHAKOR……

Chhh…aaa…kkkooooor the feeble voice trembled…… the eyes glow in the dark…

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He played humko manki sakthi dena….

It was very very feeble …. Very mild…. Extremely dark….. it was raining…….She heard…. She smiled… Raaghav we will get them …our cubs…..

Chanduji please please donot come out till I reach my cubs she said….. she set her foot in the hanging bridge…… the bridge which was made out of planks and connected two hills….with deep valley down…..

That bridge which will bridge to the world the dark secrets behind still at large..

The bells at the Kaal Bhairav temple rang!!!

The lion and the Eagle were together!

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Bring them they are the rareest……. hold them tight, pour the ghee…. Ignite them…. shouted the old man in an unknown language…

They are rare….. ….hara gobla hokabla gleemm gleeemmmmm he shouted in glee

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Omgg sumi diii interesting update

👏👏👏👏 ?? ?? ??

Just loved it....

Ohh godddd too much tension suspence &thrilling &mysterious update...

Ragkor back in action 😛

Arjun is strong n brave like chakor 👍🏼

Who is the mysterious person ??😔 ok ok im guessing 😃

Uffffff can't wait for another update .

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I am falling short of nails to bite now sumi!!!!

Fab fab story flow..... loving the intrigue... eager to know who the middle aged man is! Who is in the room since 10 years! Too many questions... phew!!! Better keep writing...

And ofcourse angry raghav🥰🥰 treat to imagine VJ...Arjun as usual is fantastic.

Let it keep coming...asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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PART III

EXCAVATION.. OF TRUTH…OF RELATIONS

Where are they? Are the kidnapped? Who is behind it? How does anybody know they are in the trekking? Why only them? Any personal enemity? Does Laal has hands in this? Too many thoughts

Chakor was going through the list from the organisers and found that three boys were missing and declared not found and assumed dead. All the three boys were only child for their parents. Their parents were still not able to come to terms. All the three were missing and were in the age group of eight and at the same place of trekking where the boys have gone missing. The police were also working with the Forest Department to find out if they can seek permission and start search.

Too many questions were looked at by the Police and RagKor. He lost patience, he got up… ok I am going to go that place where they were to be picked…. He rose…. I don’t care…If its dense forest then lets hire a Chopper and go about searching….

She knew he is too anxious and said yes we will go there to the place … She went through the notes written by Arjun…. there are very few habitats and mostly tribal not connected to the outside world. Inaccessible. She glanced the note book of the Police which had the dates of the children missing…somewhat similar dates. she checked and found around the mid month during Purnima… she just stood up… something was bothering…. Purnima somebody spoke about it…. who who?? she was scrunching her brain.

Chakor…. Raagahv called, what is it…. every minute we delay is danger to our children….. Lets go…. She said yes Raaghav, Purnima somebody spoke…. The p..oen Karnad but why …has it got something to do with the trekking.

Raaghav eyes was red…. He had always been a mischief maker… the police immediately cornered Karnad and was interrogating. He said he knew nothing about the boys but yes he was being called by his folks to attend for the Purnima special function that night in his native…It doesnot happen regularly… But he was not going…

Chakor thought of something… Commissioner saab lets go….

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The boys were brought through bushes and were placed inside a hut …. They were brought to senses… it was dark and it was very quiet.. Aayansh opened his and started to panic looking at the weird faces that was seen amidst the fire torches. Ar he called…. He started to panic when they started to make noises. They were four dressed in tribal dress and very harsh and weird looking.

Arjun asked them who are you, why have you brought us, what place is this. Walked the tantric with ashes smeared on them… along with another guy who was in normal dress. He was translating what tantric was saying. You You Ar said you were in one of the trekking spot na he asked.. why have you brought us here…

You both are going to be blessed by the gods he said.

Ar scrunched his eyes. What do you mean and leave my brother.

Your brother is afraid but you are brave..

I donot fear anyone he said, let us go. What do you want? What place is this?. Remove the rope he said. The tantric infact was surprised at Arjun’s boldness. Yes we will set you free. You can eat and stay happy. Donot try to run as you cannot run anywhere. This is a very very remote village and there is only a way to come not to go.

They set their ropes free. They gave them food. The kids refused to eat. Aa was crying and shaking in fear. Arjun hugged him… Bhai donot worry…

The tantric said you are very rare children so be happy as in the evening you will be taken and blessed by the gods.

What do you mean? You donot know my parents?? They will come here.

He laughed not even the gods can take you from here. The tantric laughed and went away.

Aayansh was crying terribly, palpitating bhai we should not have come… daddy was right. I think they are going to kill us. Will we see our daddy and mummy ?? he asked crying.

Nooo you will not….. we did not …………came a very very feeble voice from the corner of the room.

Bhaaai sure there is a ghost here, he started to cry aloud. Ar calmed him… shhhh looked sharply holding the little flame torch …

The voice was feeble very very slow … the figure was crawling slowly they could hear chains tied…. Nooo you will not see anybody….. Who are you Ar asked….

There were two coiled in the corner while one was lying the other one tried to crawl towards them… he saw in the flame torch… the face was very haggered, dirty, hair knotted up…

Who are you? Do you speak Hindi??? Please tell.

Haaaannnn. Kaun hai thera baapu……. Raaghav Kumar

Kaun hai therea maai….. Chakor.

Ch..aaa…kkk….ooo…rrr the voice trembled…. The otherwise dead eyes brightened… thera maaai ch.aa..kk .. ooo the light revealed the face of an old lady… She could not speak… the one who was lying shook with that name….it was a man full of beard, un shaven haggered….

Please tell us how to get out of here…. How did you come here Ar asked ..

She spoke her horror very very slowly…. We came ten years back for teerthyatra when we missed the bus and fell into a ditch the ditch which brought us to this forbidden land. We tried to escape but then found there was no way to escape. The tribals here were angry that we tried to escape, they are ruthless, they beat us. They will not kill us, as per their tribal rule they are not supposed to kill anyone who donot harm but will be beaten daily after they make us do their menial jobs. We lost our hopes and were waiting for death…. The man feebly called oh.. kissey baath karath hai…..

Don’t worry we will save you said Ar…. She smiled….they heard some voice…. They kept quiet and the old lady crawled back

Look here, they gave them a tribal dress with head gear and accessories. Wear this we will come again to take you…. What are you going to do with us… shouted Ar… the man in normal dress caught hold of him … donot shout… tell us if you are bold, shouted Arjun…he pushed Arjun and went….Aa was crying….They are going to kill us… No we will not die Arjun said. Stay bold. Play the flute…. I cant… We are lions, we are not cowards, we have fought Karan, we have our mumma and daddy who will do everything to save yes. They will not be sitting idle.

We should not accept defeat he said. Evil will not survive, only Good will win.

Haan Haar math maaan… Chakoriaya the old women mumbled.. smiling…

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They reached the place where the boys were dropped. There was Forest checkpost. The police sought the permission of the Forest Department to go into the forest but as it was dark they could not get into. They also shared the information that there were two habitats but very very remote and interior and with very few tribal people who does black magic and none dare to go there as they were ruthless, no one ever returned. They had infact marked it as forbidden land, they were cut off but only one man the Raawat the powerful guy who is now in shambles would very very rarely go to meet them in a chopper… there is no accessibility and there was only one hanging bridge from the chopper landing spot but any chopper other than his will be pulled down by the tribals.

Raaghav said, Chakor the kids went with two guides but only one came back where is the other one?? .. the commissioner and the squad immediately tried tracing the guide but he could not be reached. The Forest department was also trying to get information through the local people who were in the upper land.

Chakor was thinking…. The Raawat…. The police had the information that he was very influential person politically and had communal strength but had had a downfall so was trying all means to get back to power. Communal background… Purnima… the missing boys.. all the earlier boys she looked at the dates they were missing and found it to be during Purnima days.. aged around 8… her eyes was growing in shock…. The ugly truth was coming in front of her. Her spine was chilling…..She jittered…. She was joining the dots. Is it that her boys are ………… NOOOO!!! Raaaghav she shouted!!! Lets go…. They boarded the forest chopper and got dropped well before the hanging bridge… She explained what she felt which made Raaghav and the police squad spine chills… I will not spare them if they even try to touch my boys he raged….. But today???… she said yes today is Purnima…..she prayed Chanduji please hamara madhadh kardhijiyey. Jai bajrangbali…. Protect my boys. they covered themselves with the bushes and the branches and walked through the hanging bridge… very very carefully for a single misfoot will make them see the valley down….

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The middle aged Raawat was boarding the chopper… Today is my day. Wickedly laughing . Kaal Bhairav will be appeased and I will be blessed he said. I will get back everything, all my power, wealth, fame….. The tantric words were flowing as grapes in his ears….

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Raawat saab you have a very very rare kundali and this is your downtime. But this can be changed by appeasing the Kaal Bhairav.. said the translator with the tantric.

What should be done.?? Balidhaaan he said…. Not one but according to your astrological calculations, we should appease the god with a twin sacrifice. They should be young boys but not identical. They should have just completed their eighth birthday. They should not have their biological parents. They should be from a very good well-to-do family. And they should be sacrificed during the oncoming Pournima day when the moon shines full during the midnight.

Where can we get such rare boys… Don’t worry… we will wait … we have waited long…very long…We did this with the earlier boys for Mr. X.. Mr Y and Mr. Z see they have got the power though Mr. X and Y died due to accident. My boy,… looking at the translator will find the rare species.

The translator laughed.. yes that’s why I am in that trekking organizing company. When we register we get the details of the children and their family also. Also some of the school peons help with more details when money is thrown at them. We never tell them the reason nor they want to know either.

So we have got our rare species…..

No one can stop me from getting the blessings of Kaal Bhairav. I will get my power, he laughed..

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Arjun was looking around there was oil . He lighted the fire torch and kept below the hole of the ceiling…. It was like a ray shining through. He saw some bottles with liquid and small spikes. He soaked them in that and kept them in his belt.

He said AA to be bold and play the flute nonstop… Not to think of anything. What to play…. Hamko Manki Shakthi dena….

The old lady and the man said…… Haar math maan.. Haan Chakoriyaaa ….. Bachuwaa thu aaayegaaaa zarur aayegaaa…. Daak baba yeh dono ko rakhsakar. Arjun asked do you know my mumma??? She was about to say something when the men came in.

They forced them to wear the tribal dress. One stayed behind…

He played humko manki sakthi dena….

The others said we will come and take you when the moon comes. Arjun was shocked. Why to take them during the moon… He kept quiet not to scare Aa. He realized the danger that was impeding. Bhai why moon?? Nothing…. you play the flute.

Aa was playing the flute….it was calm everywhere the light streak was shining through

The music from the flute was very very feeble …. Very mild…. Extremely dark….. it was drizzling…….

They walked through the thick forest without making noise. Raaghav … what… shhhh… listen…..She heard…. She smiled… Raaghav we will get them …our cubs….they are bold. She walked through holding his hand… His eyes were scanning around. The boys…he said…. don’t worry nothing will happen till the moon does not come out she said. He was amazed looking at her. She walked firm holding his hands tight.

The sky was dark. The tantric with the few men was waiting at the place where there was a big altar in front of the big Kaal Bhairav…. The men were playing dol. Looking up to the sky.

The tantric was chanting mantras…. With a big fire place. He was also looking at the sky… restless…. How is that the moon has not yet come….

She smiled…looking up. The police squad were far behind them as they did not want to make noise..

Chanduji please please donot come out till I reach my cubs she prayed

The bells at the Kaal Bhairav rang!!!

The lion and the Eagle were together! She was going slowly hearing the music . it was becoming difficult as the dol was loud. Chakor dek Raaghav showed the sky…. The ray of light was beaming through the darkness. They went close the hut when the clouds were clearing and the moon was coming out. They stopped saw the tribal men going in . They hid themselves.

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Bring them they are the rarest……. The boys were brought out of the hut. Ragkor saw them, Raaghav just could not control his anger… Raaghav please hold yourself.

They were taken to the altar…. Arjun looked up while AA kept quiet…

What are you looking …. You are very bold but now the god is going to bless you .

No… Arjun was bold he said no the gods will not bless us and will not make you happy. You are doing wrong. Raawat spoke hey you are not afraid… you are going to be sacrificed and god will be pleased to bestow me with power. Arjun sensed… Daddy, Mumma …he saw in the dark the branches moving…

He said in which century you are in, if you kill us how will you get power. How can you be so stupid. Aayansh realized the danger but supported Arjun to divert them. Listen… my daddy and mummy has lots of money they will give you if you want.

You don’t know about our daddy and mummy they will not leave you he said.

Raawat and the tantric was angry. You little devils shut up they shouted. Hold them tight, pour the ghee…. Ignite them…. shouted the old man in an unknown language…

They are rare….. ….hara gobla hokabla gleemm gleeemmmmm he shouted in glee…

The men came to pour the ghee when Arjun quickly threw the spikes filled with the poisonous liquid the men fell down holding their cheeks and face. Aayansh quickly pulled the other guy who was holding the torch and threw it down. He poured the ghee at them so they were slipping and falling down. Ar quickly hit one in his groins using his power of martial arts. Come to me he pulled Aa.

What are you looking lynch them said the tantric to the few men standing shocked.

Ar…. Aa …. hugged….and ducked down… When the tribal man came near them rose the lion in full force and thumped the man with his elbow. He saw stars. He kicked the other with his left and throttled the other with his hands…. He raged his eyes was on fire. Dare touch my sons….. Dadddy shouted the cubs. They clung to his biceps… the tribal men did not anticipate this… he quickly swirled them and they hit them. Chakor quickly held Raawat and tantric on gun point. Don’t dare take a step the tigress roared…. How dare you try to harm my sons… She was carrying a gun with her. Who are you??… By the time the police force came in along with the forest officials. The tribals were running with their sharp spike but they were easily overpowered by the police who had their guns.

The tantric grew mad and so was Raawat … Who are you how did you come???…

You did wrong in touching my boys…. I am Chakor she said… Will not hesitate to kill you if you touch my boys. How can you even think of such a thing. Sacrificing the young kids. Who gave you the rights? And lalla you touched the wrong kids said Raaghav. Iski sasa moth he gave one hard punch in Raawat and Tantric’s face. the police held him. They surrounded them and took them into custody….

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It was a very very emotional moment for the kids… Ar and AA hugged them.. Mumma and daddy were kissing them all over… My Lions… I am proud of you… tears falling. I am sorry, its my mistake she said to them…. They hugged her back, mumma please no. Raaghav did not react but was hugging all of them. The police got a bigger chopper when Ar said daddy we cannot leave them and go.

Who RagKor asked. Come they pulled them to the hut… Torches were shown when they saw two people come out shaking….. Chakor was surprised…. Mummaa she knows your name Ar said…. Knows me…. Chakor was trying to see her in the dark the face was covered with the hair which was knotted The police held the old man….

Chakor held her hand and saw the mud smeared bandhuva stamp…her heart palpitated who is this…. Who are you…. How do you have this stamp.. she cried… Chaa…kkooo…riiiyaaaa bachwa…… that voice Chakoooriyaa bitiyaaa his voice… she trembled who is this… Raaghav came behind holding Chakor… Maaai……. She shouted Baapu…. She cried…. Oh god Is it you both….. in which state I am seeing you. God what has happened how did you both get here… I thought you stayed behind in one of the holy places. The police helped them… she hugged them both…..Ar and Aa were held by Raaghav… daddy…. yes they are mumma’s parents he said.

They took them back….. BhuKa had beenso traumatized, they were directly admitted to the hospital. Raaghav was holding Chakor while she was crying incessant….hearing to Ar as he narrated bhuka story

Girija stayed with BhuKa in the hospital…..

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It was too emotional for the Ra4gKor … Kaaka had a great relief he hugged the boys and thanked the gods. Raamu kaaka and Govind were there at the mansion.. The police were appreciating RagKor for their guts and were telling if they had not got into this this heartrending massacre would have been continued thus killing numerous kids in the name of appeasing gods. The roses were just stuck to their bros. The boys were with Raaghav….. on their big bed…Daddy they were explaining…. While Chakor was crying feeling guilty in the corner of the bed… The boys and the girls slept on the massive bed… the boys on both his sides while the roses were on his chest. She coiled herself beside Aayansh turning the other side, crying… I am feeling guilty…. It was because of me that they went to the expedition.. What would have happened if we did not go… She shuddered crying…. He could not turn with the roses on him but extended his arms patting her head… she turned… he looked at her with tears in eyes… held her hand with his left.…. He said I love you please don’t think much. Sleep… Raaghav…. Shhhh….

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Chakoria …. Maai Baapu please donot excavate what is buried… My life are they.

Thum teek bolath hai bitiya…. They packed their bags.

I am sorry….. its my mistake , you were right we should not have sent them. She was on and on. He was looking at her, and she was not stopping either. He …………………..

If the boys had not gone…..


I am guilty..... he sucked her lips...

Raaghav…hmmmm. They were working out in sync at the gym.. she in her track and sleevles half slip..he in his shorts…. The pushups were rhythmic….

The oil was cold but turned warm with their massage… she was shining in the oil.. she was on the bathroom floor with her hands up..her left leg half bent.. eyes closed… his toned torso was shining in oil… placing her right leg on his shoulders………….

His eyes were………

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Sumi dii👏👏👏take a bow🙇 🙇 🙏

amazing !! amazing !! amazing !! Wonderful update👏

Ohhh god so much twists n turns ....finally mistery revealed 🤗

So mysterious persons are bhuka...what an emotional update...finally chakor reunited with bhuka😭so emotional 😭

Loved the suspence you maintainedd it Prfectly 👏 👏 ..too much interesting suspence tension update Ufff had all the Flavourss Lovedd it...

Precap ::::😉😉so chakor feels guilty n n emotional breakdown hehehee after that we know aready I told we will get something 😉😂 😂 😜

Waiting waiting for 🔥 🔥 🔥 update 😃

thank you so much sumi dear lots of love 🤗🤗

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