It's a Decade love Never Decayed & Adopted Completed - Page 3

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Sumi fab both parts are👏👏

Intrigue still there... very good... though the car accident throws some light😳

Waiting for raghav to meet chakor, their pent up feelings, reactions...

Frankly anjor I am not bothered though I would like chakor actually smacking the foster mother... 😡

God Sunday is pretty far😉 nonetheless waiting impatiently.

Originally posted by: Shar456

Awesome eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗🤗

what shall I say, I am very sad that your story will end in few parts. bcoz I am loving it to the core and I wanted to read more and more of your Chakor-Raghav version.

loved the flow, as always i love the aspect how you take care of all the areas we are concerned about and all those unfullfilled wishes of udaan is taken care of in your story.

Raghav slowly developing into a powerful businessman and he got back AZ from BPS.. too good.

I am waiting to see how chakor react to this action of him.

then their emotional parts As always bang on.. loved it again.

"Daddy I love mumma's eyes...

we love it more too..those eyes😳

Yes me too as in those eyes I loose myself, I forget the world and also forget to breathe myself...a tear blobbed"

we knew raghav babu how much you love her and how you got lost in her eyes. nostalgia of their scenes having that part.

Then, chakor despite her worries, working towards her duty what she is assigned for, and she is appointed to tk care ofstudents in camp, thinking how twins will react seeing their mom...

Anjor too knows the truth..so final meet and milan is remaining.

I am awaiting to read Chakor-Raghav meet..and you know we are concerned about that more😃😆

loved it dear.. awaiting next part.

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Raghav's story was nice, he got a new lease of life, feeling sad for Leela & Teju😭

AZ got free from BPS due to Raghav👏

Anjor is aware of the truth

Chakor is so dedicated to work

Waiting for next

PART IV

The kids packed their bags to set off for the trip...the trip which will bring a major turn of events.

They were excited but were given so many instructions by daddy to which they were nodding their heads. They were to leave by noon to reach by night stay behind in the dormitory in the College campus and start the day with the culturals and games to be followed by the cleanliness drive.

Raaghav instructed the school van driver to drive safe and also gave his number to be called and said that he will pick his sons after the cleanliness drive. Though he wanted to go with them he could not due to business meetings and parents were not allowed too.

With heavy heart he waved and kissed the boys good bye and waited till the van left his eyesight. He was feeling very very weird and could not sleep that night though the boys called him after reaching Delhi from the van driver's mobile.

Chakor looked over with her other staff to check the kids and as they were tired and sleepy ensured they were taken care off. The boys were sleeping as they were being lifted by the college hostel students. She told the staff that she will see them during the games session as she was not into the cultural side.

The boys were thrilled at the arrangements, Aayansh participated in the debate about how parents love is important to children's growth. He stood in the debate. Arjun was ready to go for his games session.

Chakor was in her tracks with her goggles and cap as it was hot and the children were given caps.

The children were made to stand in line in the auditorium after the culturals...their names were read out... When Chakor walked in she greeted the children and said that she is their event co-ordinator and said you all can call me mam and my name is Ch...by the time there was an announcement over the loudspeaker for the children to walk to the play ground. While Arjun and other eight kids were in the running race, Aayansh was sitting far away in the tent where the rest of the children were made to sit. Aayansh asked the one sitting beside him what was mam's name while the other said he couldnot hear as the loudspeaker was on. He was then busy cheering his bro...

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She held the paper with shock looking down just then Alok looked up and saw Anjor standing there totally shocked...

He too froze...

He walked in and tried to explain her but Anjor was totally shaken and she called the driver, asked him to handover the cover to her friend in the hostel and told that she will be coming late to the program tomorrow and to go ahead without her and to excuse the cultural while she will join the cleanliness drive...

She went shaking to her study room locked herself in while Alok was trying to talk to her. She asked him to leave her alone... She was numb, totally frozen...

The form was flashing in front of her... Husband ... Late Suraj Rajvanshi... the lawyers words were reverberating in her ears... Chakor was behind bars for ten years. Her foster parents kept her away though they took care of her like a princess... but...

What has she done...

She grew hating her own mother...

That soul who saved her when she was carried away by the goons, who fought for her even prior to knowing she was her daughter.

That soul who drowned herself to save her from the lake from the evil even prior to knowing she was her daughter.

That soul who was ready to take the false charge of kidnapping her parents on the threat of the evil even prior to knowing she was his daughter.

That soul who rose to kill those evils to save her daughter from the catastrophe and always thought about her welfare...

She sat in the corner unable to come to terms...

She hated her mother, she cant call her mother too, as what sort of daughter she is..

I saw Raaghav going to fill her maang... Yes going to but I did not wait to see if he filled her maang... God, I was young at that time, but as I grew why I could not try to analyse but instead watered and grew my hatred.

Raaghav, he came to act, save my life, but he never made me unhappy, I never looked at that, I tried to hurt him with those words...

They have not been together, where is he? So she was rotting in the jail, ten long years and I was happily living, breeding the hatred... and even when I came to face to face I did not have that thought to ask her why she left me???

Her head was pounding... She felt dry, ashamed, disgusted of herself. She walked out of the study room... She spoke to Alok... he was shocked hearing her words... She walked past Kavitha who was still on sedatives... She went into her room and locked herself with a decision for the dawn.

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Mr. Rathod was presiding the events and Chakor was with her other staff but was enquiring about Anika as she was nowhere to be seen.

The running session was to start but as the tracks were dusty with chalk laid tracks, the children and the organisers were made to wear masks.

Arjun was very smart and was helping others in tying the masks. He saw a boy hiding away another participants water bottle. He quickly went told the boy to give back the bottle. The boy was arrogant to him and lied that he did not take the bottle. Chakor was notified and she went to the boys and told the one that it is not good to hide and lie and that he must be friendly with all . She appreciated Arjun but told him that he should tell the organizers and not to ruffle himself. He said I donot fear when I see something wrong and I donot like people who lie. She was impressed and asked who taught him this and he said dad says not to fear as my mom is fearless and stands for right and does not lie and does not like those who lie too. She patted his cheek thought to give him a kiss removing her mask but by the time the race was about to start and she left him to go to the finishing line.

The race was on and Arjun came first in his event. AAyansh came running and hugged his bro...kissing him... Chakor was watching them as they stood out among the other kids... she was reminded of Anjor but she quickly shoved her thoughts to concentrate on the next work. She went by a car after ensuring instructing the staff that the kids should wear their masks, apron and gloves to the oncoming event which was scheduled within few hours.

The van left with the children and Arjun was telling AAyansh how mam appreciated him when Aayansh turned back to see the car. Chakor removed her mask and her goggles and got into the car...A quick glance of those eyes... Aayansh tried to see her through the window but Chakor went inside the car.

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Anjor started from her house along with Alok to the venue where the drive was on. Chakor reached the place well ahead as the kids would be coming after they have their refreshments. They were instructed to come fully covered as the dwelling was very dirty and cleanliness drive was primarily done by the college students while the kids would shadow and assist them.

Not the dwelling was to be cleaned but few hearts too...

Chakor found Alok at the venue, there was time, she told her support staff to manage while she will come back before the start.

She ran towards Alok, who was hanging his head down with eyes tearing. She asked

Sir, I was trying to reach you, calling your landline, please tell me who my daughter is, I will not come in front of her but please please show me. I will not do anything that will hamper your wife's health.

Alok was silent... he walked to a place where it was very quiet... he moved away ...

Chakor saw a girl stand turning her face away... She called is i...ttt... An...jooor... Is i..ttt... y...ouu... Please please turn to me, she cried...

Anjor turned around, her eyes were red. Chakor was shocked to see Anika... she said Anika... why are you here... I was expecting... To...

Yes to see your daughter... and I a..mmm Anjor, she cried... the daughter who hated you... for you left me for Raaghav... you married him...

Chakor was shocked... Anjor... Me left you for Raaghav?? What are you saying??? But I was framed??? I don't know who? for ten years and you thought I left you?? Married Raaghav... she was shocked... How can you think of me ??

She looked at Alok... whats happening...

Anjor told her, yes I thought you left me for Raaghav. I hated you... I did not want you back in my life at all...

But ... Please donot talk... I am wrong, I am ashamed, disgusted as small I did not understand but I did not try to understand you too after growing.

I feel guilty, but I donot want to be forgiven, Please donot forgive me...

Chakor ran to her but Anjor... No ...Anjor said...she crossed her fingers behind... I cannot call you as mumma as I am not fit for that... I cannot come with you too as the more I see you I will feel disgusted of myself, I will want to hurt myself for hurting you. And I cannot leave my mother Kavitha who knew nothing other than my happiness. She may have wronged you but they treated me like their princess... Sorry I cannot come with you... if I come with you she will die...

Chakor and Alok were shocked...Chakor was completely plain faced... She wiped her tears... she turned Anjor... yes you are right... I know the pain of loosing a daughter, I know the pain of living without my daughter... I can sacrifice myself but I will not allow others to suffer what I suffered and I donot want to force you if you donot want to live with me...

She wanted to hug her but Anjor turned around and asked her to leave her. Chakor looked at Alok and said while I cannot forgive you for what you have done to me but still I thank you for taking care of my daughter... I have nothing to live for and look forward to...Chakor got a call from her support staff stating they were waiting for her. She wiped her tears and turned back to the drive...

Mr Rathod was waiting there with a paper in his hands. Chakor went up to him... He said Chakor I have got you a posting in Shimla in one of the prestigious schools as a PT instructor and Coach... She took the papers and smiled thank you sir, but I would like to return to AZ after this drive and thank you for helping me out.

He asked did you find your daughter... She smiled dry... I have lost my daughter... forever... The sun shined and she looked above, I lost your pearl Suraj, sorry...she cried her heart out...but wherever she is I will pray for her but I am proud of her in a way as she felt bad and worried about that mother's health who took care of her though she was wrong!

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Anjor was completely shaken, she walked towards her car... to go the drive for one last time as along with the dwelling she wanted to clean her heart too.

Alok was there. Kavitha was standing there with eyes full of tears. She said Anjor I am... Anjor said... please don't say sorry for I have to forgive you but I will not be able to for what you have done to me, separating from my mother for your selfishness for your obsessiveness, yet I am thankful as you have showered your love to me.

She said thank you... please come home... Anjor extended her hand to Alok who handed over her a file alongwith air tickets.

She said... am not coming with you nor going to stay here in Delhi. For I cannot forgive myself, while she was suffering alone in jail, I was enjoying with you all. I have decided to go away from her .. far away out of the country to live alone.

Kavitha asked are you punishing us? She said no I am punishing myself. I want to be alone, go through that pain of loneliness for what I have done but only for one thing which I will try to do before leaving... She went to the temple nearby and prayed Burkiji please help me...

She got into her car and drove to the drive...

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The drive was on full swing with all going around cleaning. Chakor was streamlining things and was having eyes on the kids as it was getting crowded and also it was becoming too dusty. She was having the loudspeaker and was shouting them to ensure the masks are on and the gloves are not removed.

Arjun and Aayansh were with the their school team helping the other big students and Chakor was watching them always being together and helping others. She liked them and asked their names from the staff. Arjun and Aayansh she smiled with her goggles and mask on... Lovely kids, bless their mom who has taught them good values... she teared herself...

Chakor addressed the kids and awarded them the certificates. Shook hands with all. the van driver told the boys that their father was coming... They were excited waiting for him...All other kids boarded the bus to return to the dormitory.. Chakor returned back to her car, removing her goggles, with her mask still on while Raaghav got down off the car.

Dadddyyy, shouted the boys in sync running towards him... Arjun... Aayansh, my boys he shouted and both clungg on to his biceps swirling around. They hugged him and kissed him all over... They were showing him their certificates...Thank you bajrangbali my boys are safe and wow you won certificates.

Chakor turned around to see them... Hearing the boys excitement and that voice...that voice was familiar...

She was behind a tree, she saw HIM, HIM... she was happy ...eyes were tearing. This is Raaghav... My god is it he... varied emotions... she wanted to run to him, she kept her foot ... but stopped... with held herself...

The boys... Raaghav's sons... she cried with happiness... He has his family... He is happy... Hey Daak baba I am happy... to see him atlast ... I saw him... she fell down on her knees, witnessing the happy trio...

The kids hugged him and saw her. They smiled... waved... her mask fell down while getting up... both were hugging closing their eyes... Aayansh opened and saw ...

Those eyes...

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She turned back quickly got into the car... went to her outhouse gathered her things which was just two dresses, took leave and went to the bus stop..

A ticket to AZ please... She was crying, cursing herself at the same time thanking God Raaghav that pure soul is happy with his family... I am happy... I donot want to come in front of him as I donot want to hamper his happiness... those kids flashed in front of her...She loved them...and smiled... he indeed got a good wife for the kids have good values... She smiled.

She asked the passenger, which is the bus to AZ... he said there are two buses... one to Shimla and the other one is to AZ...

She boarded the bus...

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Aayansh opened his eyes... hugging his daddy...

Those eyes... He crushed his brain... he shouted...

Daddy... that's Mummy... that Mummy... Those eyes... I saw her...the little one ran... clueless while a car came speeding and halted slamming the brakes...

(girls... i know we are not able to digest the lame reason of the MU of Anjor, not able to connect but somewhere in my last little corner of my heart i have the feel that she is my dude's pearl so tried to make it bit logical... please feel free to comment/share your views especially in this part. yes she is wrong and like my dude she does not shy to accept her mistake and not want to be forgiven. Hope I make sense)

Shall update the next soon...