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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 6 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: 77nikita
SUMI you are becoming naughty day by day...
And I am loving it 😳😳

Read the updated 8B...me blushing blushing...

Loved the bold chakor...

We hardly had her like this in the serial... refreshing change...

Thank you for spicing up our Sunday evening. 😉

Enjoying raghav and dessert demand😆

How I wish they and we had found this solace in the serial!!!!

Thank you once again for your lovely story and the added up spice of course.

Ps... loving the thought that RAGKOR are still discovering each other... Even after the twins... Very important

Thanks Nikki

Thanks for liking and also understanding the crux.

When few asked me on insta and twitter to go bold. So taking this post to explain why i had tweeked, reworded and highlighted.

Firstly I couldnot go bold with Ragkor as I had already mentioned I could go with SuKor but get withheld with Raaghav though he is pure and his love towards Chakor is unadulterated, but he is loving but not much of lust. Though I penned few intimate but it was out of situation and not induced...

Even Chakor we all know is a different kind and opens that too only very few times with Suraj so making her go bold... I had many inhibilitions.

Their journey was rushed terribly but for VJ as Raaghav and the way he portrayed it to the Tee i would not even think of seeing the show post Nov 19 intermittently too but Raaghav indeed won me but Ragkor took time ...

So to make them bold I had to bring myself out of the comfort zone and also bring Rag-Kor out of comfort zone to discover themselves, to ensure that past indelible love is becoming a memory and not a fresh imprint... So I wrote few lines and actions to bring Rag-Kor to RagKor.

So true Nikki as you rightly understood they have their family, their kids and love but they are still in the beautiful journey of unearthing themselves.

i hope it is not squirmy and vulgar.

Thanks all.

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 6 years ago

#152

Beautiful ending Sumi🤗

No words for it

Wished this would have happened in the show

It was very refreshing story

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 6 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: katheriene
Beautiful ending Sumi🤗
No words for it
Wished this would have happened in the show
It was very refreshing story

HI Sonali

Thanks so much dear for your words

Means a lot

Yes we wish so much. suddenly life has become colorless na.

Thanks to note that this story brought some solace.

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umayal

@LuvSSever

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Posted: 6 years ago

#154

Sumi dear🤗

8th partB:

Boys are smart and too good,had to be,bcoz who has brought them up😃

When read Raghav declaration, how when he failed to do his duties, when the boys feels so, he will withdraw himself from their lives and signed it as failed father...aww.. Raghav babu..the pure soul

Then the decision by Arjun. everything belongs to all of them , document of 'Love' and his words about Raghav

" Yes, He did not shed his blood to father us but he bled through his heart and soul and indeed always kept us gathered close to him."

Then their family moment telling they are strong like dad but smart like mom, running around and finally all four hugging each other, that family moment

then shyam laal cleared everything to raaghav..

then came the statement 'read at your own risk.'

and I went like, yes ready dear😆

then their moment before the hot dessert is ❤️

chakor holding him, resting on his chest, telling he did best , comforting him and reminiscing her past ,then he comforting her back telling not to think of it when he is there.

aww thats

then came the scene ,I made me prepared to read.

reading a too bold scene on Ragkor, not ready first to visualise..

then peeked in like this 😆

right from the salty tears, to the end scene ..

naughty raghav babu and chakor too not bad😃...

Good sumi dear, intially , as you said, its little difficult to imagine or visualise them too bold but you have wrote it nicely meeting the norms for Ragkor and yet bold making us go

.. good one 👏

then, yes we closed our dropped jaws

😆

doors were closed and we waited to hear your lulaby if roses gotup..

then the peaceful sleep, morning , family moments, pooja, all were heartwarming ,feel good moments.

then Raghav-chakor at terrace, the position of them, she resting on his heart and he holding them, the ever loved position if them, i could visualise and its a complete bliss..

perfect way to end RagKor, wish we had got one such to see for real.

then finally the cutiepies calling them mumma-dad and ending on happy Note with happy family bliss ..good one.

sumi dear,

for these beautiful stories on Sukor and Ragkor. we enjoyed reading and visualising it.

All were

thanks for this solace. you indeed paved a path to see the story end in a way we wanted to see.:)

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 6 years ago

#155

Thanks Uma thats a beautiful one for me .

Happy tears with smiles

yes you again caught it right. Love document...👍🏼

Awwwhh you peeked through, even me too but then I thought they had to live their life, discovering each other so thought it was right to start now.

I am liking the jaws dropped , sumi to felt tooo shy😳😳 initially but then was taken away myself then I realised my jaws were opened 😉

He He lullaby thank god, the roses knew what a terrible singer I am so they took no risk so you all were spared😆😆

Terrace scene the tranquility we all wanted and I just sublimed in that very much.

roses and their cute mumma - pappa chwweet na❤️

thanks Uma for the lovely beary and the rosy heart.

Thanks so so much..

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umayal

@LuvSSever

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Posted: 6 years ago

#156

Sumi dear 🤗

tried a small emojirarry for your part7 where boys give back Karan, saying they knew the truth and that raghav bled his heart and soul though he hasnt related to them by blood.

first Karan was going on and on...how bad Raghav was and how he cheated the boys..

I was like