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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part II

He opened the doors and asked her to get in... that opening of the doors opened doors for her.

Mr. Rathod, ex Officer of SAoI, he has retired but is retained as an Advisor. He was infact the officer who banned Chakor on drug charges based on the false reports submitted by KN.

He brought Chakor to his home, Chakor told the happenings in her life... he was shocked, surprised, though it was not his mistake, still felt guilt as he had banned her on the false reports. He wanted to help her out as a redressal for his unintentional mistake.

He was indeed awed at her, her innumerable fights she has put through. He offered her to stay in his house but she politely refused as that would provide hindrance to his advisory capacity, but he was very firm and said that he has his outhouse where she can stay along with his other support staffs.

He said he will try to retrieve her old records and place her as a co-ordinator for the upcoming Sports Authority environment event. She thanked him.

Most importantly asked him if he knows Mr. Alok Sinha, for which he replied affirmative and said he is a very very famous business Tycoon who has Anika Group of businesses and the one who is sponsoring the environment event too and he does not publicize the sponsoring. He said she will need to meet him as the co-ordinator of the event too..

She prepared herself to meet Mr. Alok Sinha.. She went to the outhouse and was happily welcomed by the staffs there.

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Daddy we are ready!!! Cominggg!!!

He dropped them at the school. The school principal saw him and signed him to stop.

He got out of the car, the boys waved him bye, kissed him and ran to their classes..

Mr. Raaghav good to see you... can you please come to my office said the Principal..

Your boys are good, in studies, in morals and in sports too... we have identified them to be part of the group of ten kids who will be representing our school in the oncoming environment event in Delhi. Need your consent letter please.

He said he will think and get back...thanking him.. He never sent the boys alone anywhere outside Shimla and he does not go out except for a yearly visit to ...

He was driving back to his office...The biggest tea estate in Shimla...He was greeted by an old man Mr. Shyam Lal... who was his everything for the past nine years.

Life has taken so many twists in his life...He signed the documents shown by Lal. He then changed into the uniform and went into the tea gardens along with the workers...

The workmen / women gathered around him and said Bhai why you want to work with us. You take care of us so well, we will do the work, while you may sit and relax. He said no I am one among you and will be always among you... He looked from the highest point to see the green tea gardens, the tea estate, The Rishab Tea Plantations, one of the best and successful tea brands in India and has international presence too. It was beautiful with the smoky clouds and near the valley which had the beautiful yellow bougainvillea trees which he planted in special...

Rishab Tea Plantations... the old man... the car wreckage the young couple all flashed in him...

He closed his eyes and tears were flowing indeed...

Should I send the boys to Delhi or should I go with them.

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Anika walked in to the Principal's office.

The Principal told her about the cultural program where she can participate in the debate and dance and also to work along with the environment drive coordinator as they will be visiting a particular area in Delhi with regards to the clean environment on the final day of the program.

She was happy that she was enrolling in a debate which spoke about women empowerment.

She was surprised that normally she used to co-ordinate various programs but suddenly this time it has been another person too.

The principal told her that this year it is specifically done by the Sports Authority and they have their person there and she will be meeting that person soon.

She went back to her class not realizing that meeting will bring about so many realities in front of her...

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Two days later, Chakor was appointed as the event co-ordinator and she sought appointment with Alok. But somewhere within him he was restless eversince he got Chakor released as he could not take the guilt of framing an innocent anymore.

I am sorry Chakor, as I feel the guilt of taking away those precious ten years of your life, your daughter, but now I feel bit relieved as you will be going to AZ to start your new life there.

Anjor thinks you have married and gone with Raaghav while you were behind bars all because of my wife Kavita who is childless and has become obsessively attached to Anjor. I know god will not forgive me but I was and am helpless as I too love my wife too much. He reminisced the day they brought Anjor and also framed her in the case.

"May I come in please, came the voice...

Yes please... He came to the present and stood straight to receive the co-ordinator.

She walked in, looking at her he stood up freezing...

Hello Mr. Sinha, she smiled...

You... Ms... Chak...orji... you here...

He ran and closed the door, trembling, shaking...

Chakor was surprised, she asked what happened to you, are you ok.

She gave water to him... sir please calm down.

I was expecting the co-ordinator... Yes I am the co-ordinator and thank god, it is such a pleasant surprise that I met you as I was told that you will know about the person who has taken my daughter.

He calmed... So she does not know that I took her daughter...

She spoke to him... did you meet my daughter that day? I was told that my family was burnt alive? Were you able to see anybody? I was framed by someone to be behind the bars? I donot know who did it and what benefit they got out it?

All I wanted to know where my daughter is please... She cried folding her hands...

His heart cringed, he could not bear it anymore... he was blaming the gods in bringing her to him.

He said can we go out please as this is my office. She said fine and they both went to the temple nearby which was quite calm.

He went down on his knees pleading forgiveness...

He confessed that he and his wife took Anjor away as the whole house was burnt. They could not return to stand witness as Kavitha fell very sick and had to return to Delhi. He went ahead and told that his wife being childless grew obsessively attached to Anjor like her own daughter that he did not have the heart to separate as she would die without Anjor as she had a weak heart too. The doctors were worried of her health.

Chakor choked... You had separated my daughter from me!!! She felt numb and dry. I lost my life but thank you that you took care of her atleast. I want to see her she cried.

He said I will show you her but promise me that you will not come in front of her or tell her you were jailed. She is not in Delhi, she is travelling and will be coming only next month. I will show her... he tried to get interim time to plan and sort with kavitha. He quickly left her and went away.

She lost herself completely and walked lifeless, Anjor where are you, how will you be looking...

Why am I cursed, I lost my friend, my life, my love, my family and now my daughter... why should I live...

Came the priest...he gave her Prasad... Everything will be fine.. he said... the temple bell rang.

She walked aimless and hit against someone...

Sorry!! She said, its ok, the other person said who was crossing the parking lot to get into the car without looking at her.

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Mr. Rathod saw Chakor walking along the road who was coming after finishing a meeting. He called out and picked Chakor. He said that he had a very very bad meeting with the Sports Minister. She did not cry but was completely pale. He asked about the meeting and she did not say much as she did not want to share her problems with him who was already upset about the bureaucracy.

He said tomorrow you need to meet the youth wing representative who will assist you in the drive.

She nodded ok.

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Chakor called Alok's office landline as she did not take have visiting card and the operator refused to share his mobile on confidentiality grounds, only to know that Alok has gone to Malaysia on a business visit and will be returning after a week.

She reached the college to meet the youth representative...

Walked in Anika... her smile turned pale looking at Chakor... No no it just can't be... she told herself... No No... why did she come now? Where was she ? Just those words of Raaghav flashed again.

Chakor concealing her pain, said hi to Anika... and handed over the cover which was asked to be given to her by the SPoI,

She did not say anything but was frozen...

She did not say anything but ran away from there taking the cover from Chakor.

Chakor was taken aback. What happened to this girl? Why is she running??

She went back home cursing herself as the day has been quite bad.

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Anjor just could not control herself.

She went on...raging, crying, threw the cover to a corner

Why did she come? Where was she so long? Why she came after ten years? I just donot want to see her...

She was uncontrollable shouting, which made Kavitha scared her wits. She asked what happened? Why is she so upset? She called out for Alok...

Alok came running (he did not go to office and also informed and left an instruction to say anyone who asked about him that he was away in Malaysia)

He held Anjor asked her what was bothering her...

She shouted... the one whom I did not want to see has come... the one who chose him over me has come... Why did she come she shrieked...

That Chakor...Chakor why why???

Alok and Kavitha were shocked... Alok calmed her down. He did say anything about his meeting with Chakor for the fear of Kavitha.

He said he will take care of her and said to be bold and calm in front of Chakor. Kavitha got perplexed, she started to fear that Anjor will leave her and go...

It was hell that day at the Sinha's house. Alok asked Kavitha to take Anjor to her room. Kavitha took Anjor to her room and the cover too as it had the SPoI symbol on it.

It was dark at the Sinha's house

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Share your views please...


the final part on Sunday...



Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Sumi fab both parts are👏👏
Intrigue still there... very good... though the car accident throws some light😳

Waiting for raghav to meet chakor, their pent up feelings, reactions...

Frankly anjor I am not bothered though I would like chakor actually smacking the foster mother... 😡

God Sunday is pretty far😉 nonetheless waiting impatiently.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Beautiful story👏
No words for it
Read all the parts
The current track of Udaan should have progressed like this
Waiting for next

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear 🤗 👏

Loved this one too..

Much things happened in one part and just final part remaining😔..this story will end soon..I am sad, I wanted to read more from you

coming to this part, though revelations happened and all people ended up in delhi in one part, I loved the flow and pace,and the length it had.

And as usual that accidental hit in temple caught the eye.😳..

eager again to read whats next..

I am sure we will be in for bigger treat in next part ,with emotions overflowing..Raghav-Chakor reunion.

waiting for Sunday:)



Edited by LuvSSever - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Love how the story is progressing. Wish it was longer.
Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome plPleaseee update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part III

He closed his eyes and tears were flowing indeed...

Raaghav please I cannot come along with you... I need to go to Anjor... She ran ran leaving him there stranded... For he was speechless... tears rolled his eyes as he saw his soul ripping apart from him running away to the perils...

He could not leave from there, he did not know how long he was standing there frozen, when suddenly he shook himself, ran towards AZ... only to be shocked to see the whole village was in chaos and Mai's house on fire, fully doused... Anjor hamara beti... he ran... towards the house... only to see an old figure crawling slowly...very slowly with burns while the house burst in flames...

He shouted Anjor, Amma and came down on knees... Maidam...

He quickly went to the one crawling... it was Girija... while destiny had decided otherwise for Leela and Amma... He called out Mausi , she opened her eyes Raaghav bhabu, everything is over...

He rushed her to the local hospital... She was treated... it was pouring raining heavily as the nature was furious of what was happening in AZ...his heart ripped apart...

He was walking down the road clueless not knowing what to do, he asked few there about Chakor and Anjor but none could answer him.

He came by the river side and the roads were so bad and dark. He heard suddenly a thunderous noise a car was hit by a speeding lorry and had toppled and wrecked. He ran there towards only to see a young couple who were in the front seats completely crushed... he called the passerby to help who called the police and the police came in to take charge. When looking through the wreckage he found an old man in his 60's whimpering in the back seat. They cut open the car and lifted him to the hospital.

He could not get any details, could not leave him, the police were from another town so they did not have any clue about the happenings in AZ.

He stayed in the hospital for a week till Girija was fine and in the meantime the old man was getting back to his consciousness.

He cried to hear about his son and daughter in law death and was told that Raaghav was the one who saved him.

He met Raaghav... He said beta thank you so much... We came here from Shimla as we had a pilgrimage only to quickly return back, but I never knew this would happen to me. Its my only son and my daughter in law he cried his heart out. He requested Raghav to accompany him to Shimla as he is totally shaken. Raaghav was completely dazed and he could not leave Girija too.

Girija told Raaghav that Chakor did not come home and the blaze was on but someone took Anjor but she could not say who it was... Leela pushed her while she was trying to help Maalkin but... she sobbed...

Raaghav was completely broken not able to understand what was happening to him

The trio together went to a new destiny... A new destiny...a new life...a new role...

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Chakor was taken aback... She was not able to react at the happenings.

Her daughter is there but she is unable to know who it is, the man who said he has the daughter is not in town.

She did not know whats gods plan.

Mr. Rathod called Chakor and asked about her meeting with Anika, but Chakor said it was suprising that she ran off looking at her.

He said to carry on with her environment work activities as she had to identify an area in Delhi which needs cleanliness drive and also to create awareness about pollution. He said there will be around twentyfive school children along with twenty five college students and she should identify an area along with his other staff. She kept aside her woe and set off to see the place and also to prepare the list of the participants. The whole program was for one day starting from cultural activities in the college campus and then post from 3 5:30 pm in cleanliness drive and then disbursal. Chakor was mainly incharge of manning the school children who will be coming from Delhi, Chandigarh and Shimla.

She had to co-ordinate with the local civic bodies and also prepare for a skit and also to organize for aprons, gloves and mask as Delhi was under severe air pollution.

Being quite busy with the organizers, she forget about Anika and went ahead with the co-ordination work.

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Anjor was crying profusely, she could not control herseslf...

Kavitha tried to calm her. She was scared that if Anjor finds about the framing of Chakor how will she react? Will she understand that she did this because of being childless and also she loved her? Will that be enough for her not to start hating Kavitha??

Too many thoughts in her mind, fear was gripping her and that made her have a chest pain and palpitation. She fainted. Anika called the doctor who advised about Kavitha's condition and not to give her any stress...

Anjor kept the cover on the table... the cover slid and the papers fell...

She took the papers which had the details of the organisers for the event along with the participating schools names.

She was in her room near the window which was facing the drawing room downstairs being a bungalow...

Anjor tried to set the papers when one paper caught her attention

Name of the co-ordinator: Ms. Chakor

Place of origin : Azadgunj

Husbands name : Late Suraj Rajvanshi

Just at that time came a fragile lawyer running inside calling out for Alok. He was completely shaken,

Anjor's eyes glazed...Husbands name Suraj...???? meaning????

What about Raaghav???? I saw him fill the maang?????

He called saab I am sorry, I am sorry, I freed Chakor and told her that you will know where her daughter is,

Freed Chakor???? Where was she then??? her head started to ache?

Saab forgive me Saab...he cried...but I did not tell that you framed her in the case and you took her daughter.

Whaat?? she was framed in case??? What case????

Saab, but saab I am also a paapi, god has punished me as I lost my daughter...My daughter died today saab... God has punished me for supporting a lie and keeping her behind the bars for ten years.

She was kept behind bars??? Her eyes froze...

Shock after shock hit her... She was completely numb, she turned to look at Kavitha who was unconscious

She held the paper with shock looking down just then Alok looked up and saw Anjor standing there totally shocked...

He too froze...

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The trio together went to a new destiny... A new destiny...a new life...a new role...

They reached Shimla...

They reached Rishab Mansion...

Came running was Shyam Lal to the old man who was wheel chaired by Raaghav and Girija

Saab what happened?? What happened to chota maalik and bahurani... Bache ro raha hai...

They heard the crying of the small babies... there were two nurses who came with the two months old babies...two boys...twins...

The old man cried his heart out... How will I take care of the children, aren't they unlucky they lost their parents... Shyam Lal was shocked. He was the main support of the old man who was none other than the owner of Rishab Tea Estate and Plantations.

Raaghav was shocked to see the twin babies... tears rolled... He asked himself... Bajranbali whats your game... Girija went and took the babies with love held them very securely... they felt secured.. calm but was still weaning... She quickly went inside and prepared milk for the young ones...

The old man looked at Raaghav... Beta I am the owner of the most renowned tea estate, these kids were born two months back, I wanted my son to take care of my business so that I could rest, but god has been very unkind... I am aging as well as I am also a heart patient... I don't know what I will do with my grandsons. Being very rich, there are people out there who will be eyeing to create problems and also I worry about the safety of these boys.

You came as a blessing as but for you I would have died leaving these kids as orphans. Can you stay with me for some time please to help me. Shyaam Lal was accepting the same and requested Raaghav and Girija to stay behind.

Months rolled and Raaghav assisted the old man in his business as well as took care of the babies, he grew fond of them and was thinking was he prepared by God for this as he never liked kids before he met Anjor and now he is made to be with these innocent souls who laughed at Raaghav with their cute innocent smile. Girija took care of the household along with the workers there and they liked her like their own mother as she being wise too.

A year passed by and Raaghav went once to AZ to check about Chakor and Anjor only to return heavy heart and also found that BPS has made AZ hell.

The old man was growing sick and Raaghav was taking care of everything with help of the able loyal servant Shyam Laal. He learnt the business and the workers grew fond of him.

The kids Arjun and Aayansh took their first step and was held by Raaghav who held their tiny fingers..

The old man saw Raghav's closeness to the children and Shyam was insisting for the welfare of the business Raaghav to be made as the Guardian which literally shocked Raaghav.

Raaghav I have been so selfish that I did not even ask about your life... Please tell me the old man asked.

Raaghav told him that he has no life as his life has been ripped apart but he believes that he will start living again when his life comes to him..

The old man was stunned by his innocent love and also teared hearing about his and Chakor...

He was terribly ill when he cried about his grandsons... Raaghav said they will be his sons and he will live for them and promised that not a scratch will befall on them.

The old man decided what to be done...

He adopted Raaghav, made him as his heir and transferred all the property and business onto his name.

The old man was emotional when Raaghav said that he will not be the owner but will be the father of the boys and for the safety of them he did the most unbelievable act.

The birth certificates were registered:

Name : Arjun and Aayansh

DOB : ******************2019

Fathers name : Raaghav Kumar

Mothers name : Chakor Rajvanshi

Girija teared and hugged him.

The old man was happy and reached abode knowing his business and his grandsons are in safe hands

Raaghav tried to get that photo printed which was in his phone and placed it in his bedroom.

He grew the business by getting able experts and also learnt the nuances and grew powerful too. He visited once every year AZ and with his power within two years proved that BPS abducted the lands and gave back the lands to the villagers and asked them to watch out for any information about Chakor and Anjor..

Its now 10 years ...he saw looking at the pic...

Daddyyy came running the kids to him...

We need the consent letter, please daddy can we go to Delhi... just two days...please please...

He said ok you can go but I will come to pick you the second day... But you both should behave yourselves...

Arjun said yes and Aayansh as always ran to the pic and said I love you mummy and thank you and looked at her...

Aayansh said Raaghav you are flirting with my wife... always looking at her...Daddy I love mumma's eyes...

Yes me too as in those eyes I loose myself, I forget the world and also forget to breathe myself...a tear blobbed

They both ran to him daddy please don't tear, we love you... when will mumma come from her expedititon?... He said lets pray god it will be soon...

They ran to the Pooja room and lighted the diya and prayed to Bajrangbali...

Girija walked in... Beta how long will you wait ...for bitiye... Till I breath my last...

Hope she is fine alongwith Anjor wherever she is!!!

The kids packed their bags to set off for the trip...the trip which will bring a major turn of events

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I shall be doing the conclusion in the coming week as I didnot want to rush it much due to constraint of my time...


my apologies please.


Shall update soon 😊

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome eagerly waiting for next update
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi fantabulous as usual👏👏
I am teary eyed yaar!!!! What a lovely flow of the story...

Mumma's eyes where he drowns himself...ufff remembered the galti galti galti bahut badi galti dialogue😳

Loved how he remembered to go back to AZ and give the land back to the villagers!

Though I am not bothered about anjor but good that she heard the lawyer talking.

Waiting for raghav chakor rendezvous 😳

Bother the idiot makers. Everytime I read such a lovely OS I keep wanting to throttle them for cutting short RAGKOR. How much they could have explored!!!!

Ps... loved the name shyam lal... very typical estate manager😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear🤗🤗

what shall I say, I am very sad that your story will end in few parts. bcoz I am loving it to the core and I wanted to read more and more of your Chakor-Raghav version.

loved the flow, as always i love the aspect how you take care of all the areas we are concerned about and all those unfullfilled wishes of udaan is taken care of in your story.

Raghav slowly developing into a powerful businessman and he got back AZ from BPS.. too good.
I am waiting to see how chakor react to this action of him.

then their emotional parts As always bang on.. loved it again.

"Daddy I love mumma's eyes...

we love it more too..those eyes😳

Yes me too as in those eyes I loose myself, I forget the world and also forget to breathe myself...a tear blobbed"

we knew raghav babu how much you love her and how you got lost in her eyes. nostalgia of their scenes having that part.


Then, chakor despite her worries, working towards her duty what she is assigned for, and she is appointed to tk care ofstudents in camp, thinking how twins will react seeing their mom...

Anjor too knows the truth..so final meet and milan is remaining.

I am awaiting to read Chakor-Raghav meet..and you know we are concerned about that more😃😆


loved it dear.. awaiting next part.

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