It's a Decade love Never Decayed & Adopted Completed - Page 12

Originally posted by: Ankita38

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Loving this thriller story!!

Originally posted by: meshmesh

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Thrilling story, I could imagine it acted in front of my eyes.

Knew that Chakor would replace the nurse.

PART VII

In the godown

He went to the boys, my dear you tell me have I troubled you at all. Infact I had been searching for you both as I know this Raaghav was trying to act good with you but was behind your wealth, money.

Nooo this is false said AA.. Ar was quiet... He was looking at Karan...

False...???.. look here... he showed the documents to Ar and Aa...

See all the property and business is in his name. You see this... He showed the documents.

Laal was crying, Raaghav was shocked ... my name ??? No No how is it... I did not tell the lawyers to write in my name. you wanted it in your name???

You bas***d shouted Raaghav.

He said... if I am lying you can see it... He said... Raaghav was shocked and ...He fell down on his knees crying... Whats happening??? Whats all this??? I am not able to understand. Maidam, kahan hai thu??? Are you in trouble???

Karan was saying, you cheated the boys and Laal too. When I tried to contact you to take care of the boys, you did not allow me to come.

Noo I will kill you, you are lying Raged Raaghav...

Now the boys know, know who is their true blood relation, who will take care of them.

He asked the boys, did I trouble you.. No.. said the boys.

Did I hurt you... No said the boys...

Raaghav cried... He said don't believe him... He asked Laal to speak... He said I love you both...

Karan acted very concerned. Yes you loved them because you wanted their wealth.

You are not their father as they are my brother's son. I am their uncle.

You did not give your blood to bring them into this world... They are not your SONS. He said.

If you want to see my blood take how much ever you want but don't dare say they are not my sons. He said am sorry boys, I feared this day, but please trust me I am not for your wealth or money. Please I can die but cannot live without you both, or without your trust.

Raaghav looked at the boys who was standing still.

Raaghav called out Ar ... please speak up... Aa please...

Karan said, the truth is YOU ARE NOT THEIR FATHER. You are a cheat, selfish.

Ar said, yes Uncle you are right. He is not our father and we know that...

Raaghav was shocked... And so was Karan too but he quickly covered up saying

Oh good! My smart boys... Good you know he is not your father... He is that greedy one who wanted the wealth for his wife who is a selfish woman and for his daughters.

Arjun said Yes he did not give his blood to father us but he gave his heart and soul and gathered us. Tears fell down Arjun's eyes. Raaghav lifted his head to see the boys.

Aayansh slowly was moving backside as Arjun was talking to Karan and said don't talk about our mother...

Laal smiled at Arjun... and thought Raaghav you failed in your education but you have not failed as a father.. Indeed your boys are the cubs of the Lion.

Karan was confused... He said see the documents for yourself he was loosing his cool.

Arjun said, I saw the documents, but you don't know what we know...

He looked at Laal and said kaaka thank you...he teared.looking at Raaghav who was confused... looking down. Karan lost his cool. He showed his colours... what are you talking he asked Arjun..

Arjun said the documents that you are showing... Saying the property and business in his name.

It can never be...Uncle Karan !!! No no Uncle Kishore!!!

Karan realized this boy is not easy!!!

Raaghav's eyes grew wide in surprise... Kishore??? Before he could react he was quickly held by the goons and Karan held Arjun.

Leave him shouted Raaghav I will kill you...

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The doctor was away in the another room and the nurse was getting impatient as their room was closed.

She quickly heard someone open their door and it was Aayansh... mummy he said very very slowly and hugged the nurse... the doctor was surprised... her eyes were wide in shock but quickly she understood. She removed her mask, and said Aayansh my boy you found me, smiling and kissing him you are alright?. She covered herself again... She looked at her phone and thought a second. Yes mumma but I am scared... that man he is that Kishore... I am worried about Arjun and daddy??

What daddy is here?? She asked...

She came stealthily from behind and saw the scene where Raaghav held and Ar was beside Karan and Laal was there. She tried to draw Laal's attention...Laal saw her and was surprised, but quickly he understood and caught hold of his head and said ohhh its paining and he slid only to create a bit of confusion and Karan lost his patience and called out the doctor and nurse. Chakor in the dress of nurse ran inside and took laal. Her heart cringed to see Raaghav in such a vulnerable state.

She took laal and made him sit with the doctor. Aayansh gave Laal's mobile to him and was hiding.

Karan was angry... He was holding Arjun, pointing a knife and was calling out for Aayansh. Come out else I will kill your brother and your so called father.

Dare you touch my son and my husband, roared the tigress coming out with a big log and hit Karan's hand. The knife flew away only to be caught by another goon and he held Chakor...and Arjun. Aayansh was watching from the other room not knowing what to do.

Here comes the wife...ha ha no no the mother, what a mother who mothered two sons directly at the age of 9??? I am going to kill your son and your husband and grab the property too.

Don't worry, the documents that you brought is safe with me and I changed the documents in your name to confuse the boys but, I have to accept they are smart...

Chakor smiled, Karan was getting more wild. He held her cheeks, Why are you laughing?? Are you not bothered I will kill you all...Raghav raged don't touch her...

She smiled disgustingly at Karan... You think you will get the boys property and wealth. Fool, the documents that you have is null and void as Raaghav has signed it and he is the caretaker of the boys and none of the property or business is in his name and he has no authority to sell or transfer the property. Karan was shell shocked. Whaaat????? No No you are trying to fool me , he signed the pesticide contract as the owner of Rishab Plantations... She said, no you did not see, he signed the papers in the capacity of a CEO and not as the Owner. And what do you think a criminal like you can go scot free?? And I will allow it. You don't know whom you rubbed. This is Chakor and I start the game and end the game and will win always.

Arjun signed AAyansh and he quickly grabbed a log and hit the goon from behind who was holding them.

Raaghav was surprised and realized as to why Chakor was asking him to accept the demands of Karan. Wah Maidam, kamaal kardiya bey!! Arey lalla, chodo mere bachey ko warna maar kayenga...

The other goon tried to catch Chakor and in the mean time Raaghav raged, quickly hit the goons holding him and doubled up on Karan and punched him. This is for touching my boys, he punched another this is for hurting Laal, he could not control his rage, he carried Arjun on his back and kicked him saying this is for touching my queen he kicked him continuously. Arjun got down and went to AAyansh.

More goons were coming to surround Raaghav who was raging. Dadddy shouted both ran to him, Raaghav understood they clinged onto his biceps and he swirled them so fast that the strong legs of the boys just hit the goons who were trying to near them...

There was so much of chaos... Suddenly there was a sound of the babies... the boys and Ragkor froze... no no...it cant be.

Karan laughed at his assistant who brought girija along with the babies... He said now comes the real mazaa..

He said now all stop this drama, he caught Laal and said now tell me what needs to be done for transferring the property, else I will kill all as If I don't get the property none gets it. Laal said you can kill me but nothing will come to you. You are a sinner, you have no heart and you killed the... He stopped...

Karan was so angry he pushed Laal and was going to take the babies who were crying loud... Raaghav and Chakor shouted no no don't touch them... Raaghav was about to go when the boys both came together from both sides and pushed both the hands of Karan. Dare touch our roses, both were so angry, don't dare you... Karan's hands were bleeding, he was wincing in pain. they took the babies who just clung to them and were giggling with tears hugging their bros. They had cut his hands with the syringes which was in the godown, touch the roses, the thorns came out to hurt.

Raghav held Karan by his own knife and threatened the goons to stay away. Chakor and girija took the babies...

There were police sirens surrounding the godown and the commissioner himself was there with the team.

They arrested Karan and the goons...

Karan was confused, how is it the police came...

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To clarify...a small fb

Arjun when he went into the loo sent the message daddy we are in trouble to Raaghav's mobile and the sketch of Kishore to Raaghav's mobile from Laal's phone. At the few seconds of signal the message was delivered and his tracker tickled which activated the system at the factory which was monitored by the IT guy and Govind Seth. They alerted the police.

The lawyer suspected foul as Raaghav wanted the document of the property in the name of Karan so he gave the document and waited hiding when Raaghav was taken by the goons. The police came to the lodge and saw the car parked but open so they quickly searched and found the mobile which had Kishore's pic and the message from Laal's phone. They quickly alerted the team to go towards the plantation's downhill godown.

Chakor had received the pic of the criminal, which she had downloaded and knew that Karan was the criminal. She quickly messaged back commissioner affirming the same.

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Karan was baffled and said still they are not your sons and this truth is going to hurt you forever...

Raaghav kneeled down... The boys ran to him hugging him... Yes we may not be your sons But YOU and Only You are our DADDY..

As you have adopted us. He hugged them tight... No No please...

He cried his heart out smiling hugging them, while Chakor was smiling, tearing holding the babies... they wanted to go to their bros... she left them

They crawled to the bros who were kneeling and hugging their Lion... Both the boys felt a pull... the girls where holding on to the boys and trying to get up, stand... the boys were excited, they are holding trying to stand... they slowly turned as the roses were extending their tiny fingers to reach to their bros... they held them.

Mumma they shouted in excitement... They are standing... the girls were excited as they took their first step holding on to their bros fingers giggling and said those words, the first words...bha...aaaiii...bhaa...iii

The boys were tearing , hugging the girls...kissing them while they were held by the their parents...

The police congratulated Chakor and the boys!!! Raaghav hugged his family close to his heart...

Laal was happy!!! Seeing the family...

But something was bothering Raaghav...He was crying...Arjun looked at him

He asked how do you know I am not your F... He could not complete...as his heart was cringing to say it...

Daddy Arjun said... We knew...We wanted to tell you... But ... lets go home. He hugged him and was not leaving him. Daady please carry me...

AAyansh was hugging mumma...

I feel so proud of you my boys Raaghav said tearing and hugging chakor in one hand and hugging the boys... They all were heading to the Police Vans.

But ...Arey oh Raaghav babu called out AAyansh, kya pyaar kar rahehe bey , thum tho nahi jaanthi hai naa ... Kya asked Raaghav. That mumma was in the godown... Hum janthey hainaa hamara yeh kaali kaali aur khuubsoorat aankhen ko ... arey lalla shuru kardiya hamara biwi ko line maarney ka... He tried to catch Aayansh who was hiding behind mumma. Ha mera lalla thum ne sahi kaha said mumma darling...hugging him and kissing him.

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The family was in the mansion... it was a very very bad day but they did see the dawn. That dawn which has brought sunshine and removed the darkness of the past forever...

Eversince they came back, Arjun was with Raaghav ...

Raaghav asked Arjun...

Please tell me how did you know...

Daddy... Listen to my story...

The story unfolded which brought out so many things...

Which unfolded the truth that

everything need not be biological????

Love does not need blood always

All it needs is heart and soul

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Will post the concluding part on Friday

Thank you Sritama Chakroborty for your lovely comments on my insta DM

I am overwhelmed with your lovely words.

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Sneakpeak part 1 and 2

Sumi Di.. quite intriguing... Cant wait to see how the story unforlds...btw in btwen d suspense loved d small Raghav-Chakor romance scene at d dining table.

Superb suspenseful and intriguing. Chakor taking initiative n kissing Raghav n the beautiful fb regrading d car-perfect cherry on d cake. Loved d boys-Ragkor bonding too, cant wait to see how d drama n suspense unfolds.

Part 3

Di quite a bold Ragkor moment bt u wrote it so beautifully & aesthetically never eer felt uncomfortable and you made it clear that abig storm is coming in their lives so it was pretty much needed . loved the way u r creating d suspense. Cant wait to see how d Kishore saga unfolds n how it affects Ragkor nd d boys n their rerlationship. Thank u di for the beautiful Ragkor moments n Ragkor boys moments.

Part 4

Very interesting... Kishore playing his dirty games n Ragkor n d boys completely trapped. Cant wait to see how will Raghav- Chakor combat dis challenge. Raaghav fearing gyani mata, chakor's gyann was very cute. M in love with VJs action scenes both as Suraj and Raghav. Hope we get some great fight sequences. Raghav stule fight n raghav teaching a befitting lesson to Kishore

Part 5.

My god Sumi di... what a nail biting thriller it was.. full on suspense n high voltage drama ... superb. To start with loved dessert part thn loved d way u built d suspense, revealed Kishore aka Karan identity & real intention. Raghav fitting trackers in boys threads super awsm. So smart... loved active Chakor too... loved the way she is giving courage to Raghav n giving him strength. Can wait to see how will Ragkor rescue d kids n punish Karan. N it will be interesting to see ho will d boys handle Kishore n his lies...

Part 6

Another suspense filled thriller... Fab. Raghav n d boys so badly trapped in karan's dirty game but I guess d nurse is our Chakor. It will be very interesting to see how will raghav Chakor expose Karan's real intention d boys. Wating to see Ragkor's rise against Karan n his evil plans

Absolutluy loving td smartness and intelligence of d boys. Raghav upbringing has given them Chakor's traits.

Part 7

Fantafabulous... The boys, Ragkor, the roses all rocked. Each n every aspect of the story was so delightful, action packed n heart touching. Loved our tigress Chakor N Raghav's signature style action. Spl thank you for adding that N Ragav n d boys emotional reunion so heartwarming. Loved d way Arjun gave befitting replies to Karan abt Raghav...thn d boys saving their roses...cant get better than dis. N finally the roses trying to stand up holding their brothers hands... beautiful Di to d corre n perfect cherry on d cake. All in all super awsm

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thanks so so much...

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Superrr as usual...

Action wala episode 😳 I could actually visualise VJ bashing up the goons, especially after the maidam was touched😉

Smart boys... loved it... and chakor in action... seems like ages since we saw her do something like this...

Waiting for Friday😳

Originally posted by: Ayur123

Interesting dear ..👏