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Posted: 6 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Superrr superrr superrr... 👏

Just loving it😳

Wish the serial had proceeded in such an interesting way!

Mazaa aa gaya


Ps... chakor back with her gyaan and awesome ideas... loved it too


Thanks Nikkii

wish wish so much we wish

idiots makers how much they have wasted the talents of Meejay na

Chakor has to be Chakor naaa...

Thanks again
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Posted: 6 years ago
#92
Thank u so much dear...totally enjoyed 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting update👏
Loved Ragkor's family moment😊
Shyam lal & boys conversation was beautiful😊
Loving the mystery of Kishore & hit miss with Shyam lal👏
I think the boys got to know the truth about Raghav
Waiting for next

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayur123

Thank u so much dear...totally enjoyed 👏


Thanks Ayur for enjoying.


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Loved Ragkor's family moment😊
Shyam lal & boys conversation was beautiful😊
Loving the mystery of Kishore & hit miss with Shyam lal👏
I think the boys got to know the truth about Raghav
Waiting for next


Thanks Sonali

great that you are loving it and your words always mean a lot to me.😊

Will update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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PART V

Raaghav was taking care of the girls as they were missing their brothers and they were cranky too... He was checking with the factory about the packing and also about the after effects of the spraying.

But ... He was feeling somewhat restless. The boys' words were always coming through.

Chakor took the babies, fed them along with Girija and put them to sleep.

She saw Raaghav and sat beside him, held his hands in hers... Why are you worrying too much. He said I don't know, but I am feeling very restless. Arjun was not ok too so I am worried. Should I bring the boys back? He asked. She said Raaghav you are worrying about so many things. The boys are indeed growing and I think at the base of your heart you are worrying for something you don't want them to know. His eyes was shocked. Very true, he held her hands tight. He said I love them, they are my soul, I know they love me too, but, I always have the fear of how will they react if they get to know that we are not their biological parents?

She said, but how will they know?? He said its not a secret as the plantation workmen are like a family and the old workers knows about this, but none had spoken about it as they love Rishabji and me. But still... She said there is nothing to fear and need to face such a situation if it arises and the boys knows how much he loves them so there will not be any change in their love towards him.

He smiled, she hugged him and said I am with you always and if such a situation arises we will handle as the boys are important than our girls. They both went to bed with he hugging her waist and she lying beside with her head on his chest and holding his other hand...

He kissed her on her forehead and asked naughtily tightening his grip on her waist which made his hands touch her skin at the waist as the tops moved up a bit. He asked when is the dessert time?...with his eyes closed..She jerked at that simple touch... . Chup... budda soja she said blushing herself. She placed a simple kiss on his lips and closed her eyes resting on his chest... Thank you Maidam he smiled...

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The boys were in Shyaam Lals house. It was near the plantation. It was an individual house, a bit far away from the workmens' residence. Calm and also had its own little garden. Shyaam Lal stay with his caretaker as his wife had passed away and his daughter is married and stays in Kolkatta. He mostly stays in the Mansion as Raaghav has given him a separate room and sometimes in his house.

He brought the boys home and they like his house too but very sparingly stays behind as they never stayed away from Raaghav.

Ramu kaaka, ran Ar and Aa and hugged him. Ramu, the caretaker loves the kids and always makes their favourite food and plays with them and share good moral stories with them. He loved Aa's sketching and always used to ask him to draw something.

Laal said he was going to the factory for an urgent call and will be back and they will hear the recording once their lawyer uncle come.

The boys were playing and Ramu kaka was showing his grandchild's pics which was half covered with a wrap around on his phone and was asking Aa if he could sketch it full. Aa looked at the pic very very focused and started to sketch it out and Kaaka was so happy that he could see the full face. Wah beta, thumhara haath mey jaaddhoo hai he clapped him.

Arjun was playing games in Laal's laptop and there was pop up of an automated mail saying list of visitors . Out of inquisitiveness he opened the mail and saw many attachments and few images. He saw the image of Kishore with goggles and cap. He was feeling very weird and that image was coming to his eyes always. He called Aa and asked him if he could sketch him without the goggles and cap. He went to the living room to watch the TV. The news was flashing mentioning that a prisoner had escaped from lucknow a week before and he is a murderer and asking the public to be cautious and also to call the police if his whereabouts was found or seen anywhere. Aayansh looked at the image on the computer and started sketching and was half way through the second eye when Shyaam Lal came in calling the boys. He left the sketch on the table and ran and so did Arjun when the murderer's pic was shown on the TV.

Shyaam Laal and the Lawyer along with the boys finished their dinner and went into Laal's bedroom to hear the recording.

AA was reluctant but Arjun was curious. Laal got a call and passed through the living room and caught a glimpse of the photo that was shown on the TV while passing through. Govind Seth the security called Laal and said the CCTV was showing movements in the isolated area of the plantation and he will be going with few others to check. Laal was called again and was informed that there was nothing and few stray dogs had come in and had been chased away. He felt some noise at the gate but no one was there.

He went to the room and started the recording.

The recording which made the boys chock with tears, shock.

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Raaghav woke up suddenly shouting from his sleep, shouting Arjun, Aayansh. His heart was palpitating fast and Chakor ran to get water and calmed him down...

He said no Chakor, I am feeling choked... something is wrong, my sons may be in trouble... He took the phone to call ... when he saw his phone trigger with that alarm that alarm which never set off was alarming now... Ringing the alarm bells. he know something wrong was happening. Shyaam Laal...he tried calling him.

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At the same time at Laal's house

The boys heard the record... And Arjun asked for the other one which Laal and Lawyer was surprised about...

After sometime the lawyer left and Laal saw him off at the gate and came back to his living room... He saw the sketch of the little baby and the sketch of the other with the second eye half done.

He was shocked, perplexed, he saw the computer with the pic of Kishore... And the sketch lying on the table. No No No it can't be. He saw the news flashing with the pic... Ki...

No No its Karan Rishab... how did he come??? He was in the prison... So he was the one who came as Kishore to the factory... Oh God! Whats happening...

The whole incident flashed in front of him... while his front door was being broken..

Karan Rishab, the brother's son of Rishab the owner of Rishab Foundations. Karan lost his parents and was brought up by Rishabji. He shared the same love and affection that he shared with his son (the twins father) but Karan was always selfish, had bad vices and was always greedy and eyeing the wealth. He had bad companionship and was creating problems for his son and to the business. Many a times he had asked Rishabji to give a share in the property and business but Rishab refused as he was not listening to him and changing ways. He infact threw Karan out of the Mansion but gave him the fields in Chandigarh and Karan was never happy about it. He lost the fields by gambling. He was having his ears and eyes about Rishab Plantations and was waiting to strike at the right time.

When Rishab went with his son and daughter in law to his native deity, he planned the accident and thought that the whole family with the twin babies met their end. He realized that the old man survived and was admitted in the hospital by the villagers and Raaghav. He met the old man at the hospital and that was when the police arrested him as the lorry driver confessed and told about Karan. He was given life imprisonment for accident and murdering of the couple.

Rishab came and told this to Shyaam Laal who was always worried and kept a vigil over the twins.

Being very rich, there are people out there who will be eyeing to create problems and also I worry about the safety of these boys. These were the words told to Raaghav which changed the life of the trio.

He told Laal not to tell Raaghav about the murder and tell it was an accident for the fear that Raaghav may go away getting scared.

When he was happy with Raaghav, Rishab took him as his heir and wanted to transfer his property business but listened to Raaghav and instructed Shyam Laal. Laal kept Raaghav informed about Karan that he was a threat but said he was away as he was given the property in Chandigarh but to stay vigilant always.. Knowing his death arriving Rishabji did various letters and preparations and gave them to Laal as he was the most trusted person.

Everything flashed... God I must inform Raaghav, I must save the boys

He tried to call Raghav and the boys when the door was broken open and he came in from behind. He turned back to see him standing there

You... Karan... how did you come here... Ramu... thud he was hit on his head... You old man... you are still alive?? I thought you would have been dead and gone... Saw the boys here... Raamu came running only to be hit by Karan.

He went inside to see the boys coming out but instead of going in he ran outside and took his car a few meters away from the house...he snapped the landline connection while going.

Shyam Laal fell down trying to reach for his mobile but the wicked had taken it. Laal fell down but pressed his knob at the side of his watch and prayed almighty.

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That alarm triggered on Raaghav's phone. That was the special alarm which was set on Laal's watch to be used in case of any emergency as for one Laal used to travel alone and at times he took the boys alone. So long it was never used but today... The alarm triggered...

Raaghav panicked, he tried calling the Shyaam but it was not reaching. It was switched off. Something is wrong. The boys... Bajrangbali, Ramji please save my sons...

He called Govind Seth and asked him to check Laal's house and grabbed his ipad. He called his IT guy and asked him to check on the cameras if some movements was suspicious.

Chakor saw him panic. What is it Raaghav?. Whats happening?

Laal is in trouble, he panicked, his phone is not reachable, and the boys boys are in trouble... he called Laal's land line... Dead... Ramu's mobile was not reachable. Hell with the signal...he shouted.

Chakor started to palpitate. He grabbed the Ipad... Opened the remote software. Chakor tell me the boys have their band intact na... He shouted... She has not seen him so angry... she said yes but how will...

That band is important, its not ordinary thread, it has the OHM and it has the tracker that I had fixed on to the boys. Nothing will happen to them. The tracker was showing moving beyond the plantation.

I curse myself Chakor cried, I stopped the boys from being given a mobile phone as I thought it was not necessary for school children. Oh god Daak baba please bring back my boys.

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The boys found it strange that Laal kaaka did not come back, and the whole house was silent. AA was bit scared while Ar put up a brave face and caught Aa and walked down to the living room.. it was dark as Karan had switched the power off. They called out for Laal and Ramu but no response.

While walking down the sketch caught stuck in AA hand and he quickly just folded it and kept inside his pocket as it was dark and did not know what it was.

They both walked down and found Laal lying unconscious in pool of blood. They did not notice Ramu too lying unconscious as it was dark and he fell into the kitchen side. They tried to wake up and ran to call but the phone was dead.

They quickly realized something wrong. AA started to cry while Ar was crying but quickly gathered himself and calmed him and said be bold, mumma has told to be bold and dad has told we are lions not to go weak.

They came running outside to the other side of the plantation. He was waiting there as though he was looking around when the boys came running to him

The boys ran to him... Uncle please help us... somebody hit our Kaaka... We need to call our daddy

He hugged them, calmed them told he will take kaaka to hospital. He asked for Raaghav's number and told him that he will get kaaka and call their daddy

Putting up a concerned look, he made the boys sit in his car...

He walked far away so that they cannot hear him

He called Raaghav...

Call from an unknown number... Raaghav was alarmed... Who is this? And why the tracker stopped. Too many questions.

He picked the call... Raaghav Kumar Rishab here?????

Ha Ha ha Raaghav Kumar Rishab, Wow Rishab !!! Congratulations... but I have bad news for you...

I have the boys with me... he told calmly. I have already waited long. Cannot wait more...

Who are You? Where is Laal ??? where are my sons... Raged Raaghav

Your sons... but they aren't your sons na... he laughed, he cut the call.

Shocked...chocked... how is it possible???? who knows it????? Raaghav froze.

What is it Raaghav, tell me, she shook him.

Chakor cried her heart out... I need ... I need my boys...my sons...

He vowed!!! not a scratch on our sons!!! I promise...

Stay here with the girls! No !! I will come with you. She told Girija to lock the mansion and asked the security guards to be on alert and to set the alarm.

We will find them together.

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A small car came and car took Laal. Karan said he was being taken to hospital while both the cars proceeded to the lone part of the plantation...

Karan was very calm and told the boys that he spoke to their daddy and told him that they are with him and to come and pick them up and he said he was coming.

But, why didn't he talk to us Arjun asked.

Ar said thank you uncle but where are we going?? What about Kaaka? We want to be with him. He said please don't agonise, the other car is too small so kaaka is laid behind and all the three cannot fit in.

He smiled and was talking sweet to the boys while engrossing them in his sweet talk and driving them. He said his house is nearby as the small car was running low on fuel to go change the car and in the meantime he said he has called the doctors too.

It was becoming dark and Ar and Aa was getting bit worried and said we want to see Kaaka and want to go to daddy.

Karan was getting impatient at the boys continuous nagging.

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Raaghav called the commissioner and told him and said to plan in confidence and that he is going towards the plantation.

He was driving mad looking at his ipad which was showing the tracking till the plantation but after that it stopped.

He got perplexed, called his IT guy and Govind Seth to find the status.

Where can they go!! He was thinking. Chakor was going through the tracking map. She said it stopped near the lone area of the plantation after which it is downhill and dense. Raaghav both looked in shock. No... hope they have not gone downhill that's dangerous and signals donot work.

She cried for the boys. Hope nothing has happened to him. They drove to the downhill. He was constantly calling Laal's no. they stopped at a place and then walked towards the forest, but Chakor said what if they have gone to the old godown!!

He got a call, it was from Ramu kaka, he spoke to Raaghav very feebly, saying somebody hit him and Laal was also hit. His call got cut. By that time Govind had reached Laal's house and took Ramu to the hospital. He said that saw he two cars going towards the plantation.

Raaghav got a call from an unknown number. He shouted...tell me who are you? What do you want? Where are my boys?? If I get you I will kill you..

Karan was too cool, he said don't search you will not get the boys if you donot do what I say and I will not do harm to your boys. He spoke what he wanted to Raaghav and Raaghav was shocked. He fisted himself, saying No No I cant do it.

You better do it if you want your boys... and I will call you where you should come. Don't try to act smart he said.

He spoke to Chakor, Chakor thought and asked him to go ahead and do what is asked to be done...

Trust me she said!!


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Karan laughed you see this, everything is transfered to his name and thats why he took so long to come and he did not want to talk to you too.

Raaghav cried No Arjun... Arjun was shocked...




Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#97
Ufff Sumi... full on edge of seat thriller👏👏
Superrr...I am loving the good old chakor who has come up with some idea... waiting for it...

Hee hee hee not to forget the demand for dessert...raghav babu too much sweet not good for health😉

I wish the boys turn out to be smart and outdo Mr. Karan... that will be cherry on the cake.

Keep writing keep writing... now no delays permitted... especially after a nail biting finish
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Posted: 6 years ago
#98
Sumi dear 🤗

commenting for 4th part.

it seems the stage setup for dreadful future moments coming up.

Boys are lovely, hope they dont go through so much. loved their convo with shyam lal

Arjun and his mumma thinking same, their smartness, chakor's sensible smart idea on business, I loved all.

chakor lecturing, missed it so far, thats one of chakor's traits too..lol

so what does that recording have, have kishore got them, again still suspense, thrill intact..

hope Raghav-chakor and the kids sail through this phase and come out soon.


Edited by LuvSSever - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank you Smita Sharma for your comment on twitter.

this means a lot.


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Part 3
Loved the family bonding & sweet moments specially the boys are so adorable, they reminded me of my http://childhood.How cutely they are seeking for more siblings & Chakor sweetly refused to give showing excuses. Aayan likes his mother's eyes & more fond of her whereas Arjun is more concerned about his father. It is said that God lives in every child. So Arjun can sense something which worried him for his father. Didn't like Mr. Kishore, his attitude & intention to annex everything. Waiting for his meeting with Shyamlal. I was feeling shy to read the dessert part.Loved the warning "read at your own risk" as it is apt for the portion.
I can feel your emotions as I'm too a die hard fan of suraj & sukor. No matter how much I love Raghav but my affection, loyalty is little more towards Suraj.I have always imagine sukor in such bold scenes, so to be frank it's not easy for me to imagine Rag-kor in this kind of scenes as I have never seen them in such intimate scene. Your khajoraho encounter post was also bold but I loved that as in that case it was sukor's & we already saw that scene on TV. But you wrote this scene so sincerely, so beautifully like an expert & for your superb writing impelled me to love it . Excessive of boldness may seem vulgar but you put it in exact quantity, so there is no vulgarity in it. The scene is perfectly mixture of Raghav's inquietude about the boys, Chakor's consolation & then having possessed in each other's arm.


Part 4
I like the relationship between Raghav & Shyamlal.He is like a father figure, a preceptor, an adviser to him. Loved Chakor's smartness. We lost the intellectual Chakor in the show but you brought her back. Indeed she has always the capability to solve any problem & now Arjun too think like her. It seems after growing up he too will follow his mother's footstep. Loved Shyamlal's interaction with the boys. So they have signed the contract with Kishore. Let's see how long Kishore can avoid the meeting with Shyamlal. Last portion is too shocking. What secret is hidden in the recording? I guess Kishore is behind the hitting Shyamlal & kidnapping the boys.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Ufff Sumi... full on edge of seat thriller👏👏

Superrr...I am loving the good old chakor who has come up with some idea... waiting for it...

Hee hee hee not to forget the demand for dessert...raghav babu too much sweet not good for health😉

I wish the boys turn out to be smart and outdo Mr. Karan... that will be cherry on the cake.

Keep writing keep writing... now no delays permitted... especially after a nail biting finish


Thanks Nikkiii

thanks that you felt thrilled.

Raghav babu and dessert 😆😆 dont worry Chakor will ensure he does not fall diabetic😉

Boys Vs Karan lets see...

arey a tough boss I have... let the nails grow for you to bite again...😊

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