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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#971

My dude aced with his DP and his CP

It's oozing dude be it with his DP or with his CP (cutie pie).

He is not trained, he is angry, short tempered, hasty but he is smart, strategist, knows where to knock so that the door is opened

Thanks nikki for pushing me to see.

He listened calm about the best officer who is trained, an excelled analyst, who can foresee danger and protect him, protect who... Protect Suraj Rajvanshi... Hahaha

Dude looked at him calm, I knew he was going to do something... Something and he DID it, quick took his gun, turned him caught him by his neck and lo he was attacked by his own gun. SR his style, swag and I kept clapping... Hahaha officers beware he is indeed RAW... Kacha... Who can be judged, guided, handled, tamed only by one person who knows every inch of him, reads his mind through his eyes...

He ain't easy, she too took solid two years to tame him and he got tamed because he gave himself to her completely, full control to her... I just loved, he smirked... He is going to save me???

The way Fareed mocked about Chakor i was bating my breadth sure this guy is going to get hit... Thankfully my lion roared that Woh Chakor hai Chakor... Still reverberating.. She will kill herself but will not kill your mission, but officers be warned for my dude will kill you if you talk ill about his chakor. And you do not know about my deadly adories who are the best undefeatable duos...

Moved his coin and brought his best guide to him...

His DP is taken aback, but she knows once he decides he only ensure it happens, loved the way he curtly cut Fareed. That push he caught her and she held him... He didn't signal her nor spoke his intention but she quickly knew and acted... He blew her yes... Beautifully said he will make the moves right but a wrong step will be corrected by her... I pride my dude as he never says he is perfect... But never shy to praise her perfection... Yes he took the best decision in his life..

She knew, she just gave in as once her PP decides which he rarely does, there is no going back..that moves with that attitude initially and turning into lust in his eyes... The both eye locked and mine too in that bliss..

The DD scene... Dada and daughter

I just loved... The way he admires his chakor's beauty along with her stubbornness. .The strong man just opened his fear, vulnerability to his daughter awwwhh cutie pie... Was just making those cute expressions... He fears as he has experienced the ruthlessness of the colonel, and fears to act of love in front of his love... My eyes swelled at this gem, he took his daughter into confidence to share his concern about her, his family (this guy has been having no big dreams other than his family) and so cutely asks her not to tell mummy about his fear... It was like he was a baby and saanvi was dada... He kissed her little fingers... And that hug of his goddess, his pearl,... Wish the baby could hug him back... Vj just just aced he was so so natural... When aadhya grows she will be proud to have worked with him... The class actor...

He slept as he had shared his burden with his little goddess... Dada and daughter in sweet slumber.

Flies down my chirpy bird... I was literally taken aback when she saw her man and her princess in their slumber... She spoke those words... Your dada must have told you... He is afraid... She did not see his eyes, just saw his face... Eyes closed still she read his mind... I am also fearing, fearing for you for our family... What should I say about my adories... Risking themselves for the safety of the nation... She lay beside, just placing her hands on him...

This particular scene just made me realise one thing... I may be wrong...

All these days I was thinking about the innocent feelings of naina but failed to realise the innocent saanvi's feelings and plight..

Both are in the mission, selfless god forbid if anything happens to my adories what is the fate of their princess...

Yes my adories, i am proud of you, if you could stake your lives, your little one's life indirectly, her future for the nation's security why not stake Naina's feelings, her emotions for the same... Sometimes hard sacrifices have to be made indirectly too... So if Naina is good hearted she will be proud to be part of this mission though unknowingly.

Chakor I am indeed proud as you rightly said desh ke aage kuch nai.

(my adories am sure all the gods will be by your side in this selfless act, where my lion, my sun, my eagle for the first time had feared... Nothing will happen to my sukor for their little goddess will remind the almighty of their protection)

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#972

Originally posted by: malarmia
Lovely post, Sumsukor 😊

Thanks a lot deary

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#973

The SUN wanted testification but it rained for purification...

Yesterday's episode was in two parts, one was utterly cute next was eternally divine.

The sun wanted the rains, the most pure form of nature to testify, prove his love for his bird...

LO IT RAINED, I WAS AWESTUCK, HE ISN'T A SAINT, OR THE GREEK GOD ZEUS WHO CONTROLLED THE CLOUDS, NOR THE HINDU LORD VARUN THE RULER OF RAINS.

BUT It rained, rained, at his command? at his heartwrenching request, to prove his love...?

Did the rain come to testify his love NO, the rains came, came thundering breaking the clouds from nowhere... The rains came down to purify themselves by drenching him, to purify themselves as here down stood the soul, the purest form of love they have never witnessed...

Suraj Rajvanshi the man who turned himself, tuned himself to only love chakor, live for her, breathe her has been asked to fake love to another girl for the security of nation... Noneother by his own chakor on the RAW (RUTHELESS ARROGANT WARMLESS) officer's advice...

He gave in after much hesitation as if otherwise she will risk herself for the nation, and he will not allow a scratch befall on her.

He started to act... not to love, just beginning to be friendly but inspite of her guidance, her directions he keyed himself like a puppet but no he couldn't do this

He did not scold her, nor angered her as he knows his chakor, he knows, he comes after nation for her so held himself strong to achieve her goal.. But no

Suraj, the sun walked down the jeep, in the middle of the road which was bright and sunny unlike his heart which was not, the bird knew his plight but her desh bakth is asking him tread through that path.

He baffled what he spoke, i was baffled, incessent tears were rolling... He could not be with another girl, he is just unable to think of even telling a lie or faking to say love...

The sun felt like treading a path on a pyre... That pyre with fireballs, feels he will be burned, can the sun feel fire but this my dude anyone other than her makes him feel burned.

She was taken aback, she knows his love but he feels she is not understanding for if she had, she would not made him do this...

He was perplexed, emotions raging, he wants to prove, testify his love... He is full of emotions, wants to prove, he calls not some person to testify, he calls the nature to testify, kaash if it rains, if it rains my love for you can be proved, can be testified, she is baffled, and he silenced for few seconds... Realising what he asked, can it rain, if it doesn't will my love be proved?? Quick questions running through his mind, she turns, rain all of a sudden... Why suraj how can it...

But i cried, prayed and lo the rains were waiting for during the Memory loss track on the mahasivrathri day it rained to purify him of his deeds during his ML... So the rains were eversince waiting to purify themselves by drenching him by passing through him, the purest form of love... The rains would have wanted to... waited for this request and when called for they came down happily dancing, to devour themselves with his purity...

The sun flamed in the pyre, and the rains devoured him of that burn, to calm him as he needs no testification.

He called for testification but the rains came down for their purification... Purified themselves as they will not get another chance to witness such a form of love as there can be only one SUN, only one Suraj which rises and sets for his bird only for his Chakor...

She knew him, for her life starts with her suraj and ends with him..

No words, emotions only when he just pulled her and her small frame just perfectly went into him... Infused in his tight hug... And she just spoke yes its hard for me too, more than you... I cried for my adories who had to undergo such pain for the nation.

Sukor's love is by itself separate as I always say... Love can be defined as human, divine and sukor and none can match the third yardstick.

Suraj, my sun, my dude how do i testify my love, my pride for you.

Indeed the rains are blessed to purify themselves by devouring you as you will not allow anyone other than your chakor to lay hands on you...

Sukor you need no testification or justification for your love.

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Divya

@ndivyateja

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#974

Sumi..That's a Surajlicious post..When it comes to ur dude, I back out coz you ace it..🤗

Well, your post compelled me to watch the episode..After a long time, that Man made me smile with pride..😳

I really don't think he was hesistant becoz he considers Chakor & his family above all..I have a different opinion to it..

Suraj is someone who ascertains the situation better than anybody, better than Chakor too..His calculative approach is what makes him evaluate a person's calibre..Just with the trace of a gun, he solely found out everything that's happening, what happens too..He even faced his opponent..Considering all these factors, he felt 'a trained officer' would do a better job.. if he agrees to do it, he may end up making a blunder that would cost lakhs of lives coz 'To err is Suraj' 😉

But when he knew, he was chosen to woo Naina..His reasoning was clear, 'I will not coz I cannot as Chakor is the only person I ever love'..😊

Truly speaking, (completely my opinion) Chakor looked impulsive, over enthusiastic, emotional..whereas Suraj on the other hand surprised me with his Calm, clear & focussed attitude..

Yes Sumi, he doesn't need to take an oath..When Chakor was about to take an oath, I was talking to myself "You were the one who brought your own hubby to this mission, why do u want to take an oath.." The same words came out from Udaay..😆

On a personal note, I prefer Suraj being the brain & Chakor being the heart of this mission but the opposite is happening..

Anyways, thank u soo much for this wonderful post, I would have missed a 'good-feel' moment..Once again thanx to u for posting & helping the forum activity..I myself not visiting the forum much as I have nothing to contribute..😊

Do write more & more..Just keep posting..❤️

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#975

My MR a big smile on my face...

My dude hmmm as you say i just cannot, and all thanks to Mai for her summary which nudges me to see the episode. Later...

True to err is my dude and feel my collars up as he is very brainy too that one gun has indirectly led him into the mission.

Well may be out of context that day when he was changing saanvi's nappy your gif of tom with the baby flashed in me and started laughing hahahs.

Thanks deary for your comments which I always wait for...

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Divya

@ndivyateja

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#976

Im forgetting ur gifs now-a-days..Herez one..

My current muse..Jack jack..😳 Sanvi & her dada..😉

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#977

Originally posted by: ndivyateja
Im forgetting ur gifs now-a-days..Herez one..
My current muse..Jack jack..😳 Sanvi & her dada..😉

A aawwwhh thanks a ton.. My favorite too... Especially this little one when he burns off his head and maths is maths, hahaha incredibly incredible.

🤗

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#978

Suraj Rajvanshi is ...

Mai thanks at the outset..

I just fell in love with the trio...vivaan so dam cute... Love this bromance...

So dam cute my adories were like hot jamoon (dude was oozing in that maroon tee) with her in green like a pistachio icecream. Meejay were ravishing abd their infectious smile... Haha no sharam before vivaan... I loved loved his pull . Thu idhar aaoo bachi. And madam banged and lo turned pink... Meera was soso innocently beautiful... Even after 8.5 years their love still locks me... Bliss.. No sharam, haha but how can she not with her garam dude 😉

My dude is so faithful studied the file . Even he would not have done this in his college days... Finally what his plan, shove few dogs in fire and save them... Haha i just couldn't control laughing and my bliss was blessed with him on her lap😳 wished she peeked him on his forehead ...

His casual way will i hit the guards with this umbrella hahaha... And mocks Fareed.. With that accha you know about my wife... And the next moment follows her order...

In all this my dude is dude all he wants by hook or crook to get over this and get back to his beautiful wife and daughter soon..

Loved the rage in his eyes when he spoke about the colonel and that quick change when he sees her. Wow vj arey chodo... How much ever i fall for you you will not care...

All our wishes to you dude as SR is a winner of a different class...

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#979

Pariksha of the Panchabooths for my adories???

The journey of my adories my Sukor has not been easy, for they are not easy, theirs is not ordinary love, it did not happen overnight, in a week or months... it took them to tread the thorn bed which had roses hidden in between... two solid years, the childhood enemies turned into adult foes, frenemies, friends, support mates, team mates, then they found the hidden roses one by one to know each other, fall in love, madly for each other, live for each other and turned into that divine soulmates and has created a separate category for love.

Every journey is tested and testified by many but here again my adories are not normal, they were tortured and tested by humans(KN, Imli, RV, Ragini) but none could do anything to them.

They emerged winners, but were they left..?? .. no even the Panchabooths (the Five rulers of the universe, Water (Jal), Air(Vaayu), Sky (Aakash), Earth (bhumi) and Fire (Agni) have also tested them... only to make them unique, shine to the most in the universe...

Sumi gone insane, yes to an extent when it comes to my adories, the promo, the current track... everything, my adories are together but not together...

Why bring the Pancahabooths... the almighty moves the coin well ahead to prepare the warriors...

She was brutally stabbed and thrown in the Ganges, Water (Jal) when the evil thought that she was dead and gone, the Titan rose from far away brought her back to life just by his thoughts... Wapas Aaja Chakor, tumhara Suraj ke paas... He was purified on mahashivrathri day and when he called for testification of love, came the varun to purify himself in my adories love...

His memory was brutally taken away lost in the thin Air (vaayu) that too for five long years, the Eagle rose tornadoed the wind and brought him back to her thunderously...

Sukor journey has tread pathed through turmoils and ruffages so much that even the himalayan regions touching the (Sky) Akash could not separate them or bring harm to them as they are guarded by their Chanduji the ruler of the Akash. They are divine.

He was brutally buried alive, deep under the soil (Earth, Bhumi) and he came out unscathed due to her love, her suffocation of him being suffocated, her strong currents of love brought him alive...for the Bhumadevi also wanted to taste him and devour him to prepare him

Why my sukor is being put through all this... why only them...

the divine forces have vouched them for the noble cause they have been identified for, the Agni (Fire) is putting them through this pariksha of their relationship, their love, for they are putting their love through fire, as in this ordeal both are going to burn themselves through in pain, agony for the betterment of the country, to thwart the evil force.

She is not Ram nor he is Sita, he is Suraj, (should only the wife go through agnipariksha to prove the chastity, love) sukor is always unique, he enters the pyre not to testify but to prove that he will go through any ordeal for her, for her love, as he knows only to love her and follow her words and no more. She is not putting him through this pyre to test his love as she is also going through the same fire as he goes through... She the Gold with Her Diamond is entering this agni pariksha for the well being of the nation and will emerge shining more more more than the polar star as the gold and the diamond will never burn or melt in any pyre... They are blessed by the divine forces to emerge as winners always and they will win.

(I am keeping away the pov of Naina as I said earlier if Saanvi the innocent one can be put through this hell of the parents life being risked... why not Naina who will be able to understand the real purpose behind)

I pray to the divine forces of nature to bless my adories comeunscathed ..

They will emerge, as they are the titans who rise, raise above, anything for they are sukor, soulmates born to win...

Thank you Panchabooths for purifying my adories.. . I rest

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#980

The Lord God gave him (NO) choice... My dude...

I woke up to a beautiful morning where I saw a sparrow in my balcony, I don't know why but that little chirpy bird reminded me of Chakor... it was chirpy, chirping all the while and there was another beside just looking at it... Just looking at it... and you all guessed it right it reminded me none other than my dude...

I remembered this famous song written by Cecil Frances Alexander in her Hymns for Little Children. I love this song for its simplicity and melody...

All things bright and beautiful,

All creatures great and small,

All things wise and wonderful,

The Lord God made them all.

Each little flow'r that opens,

Each little bird that sings,

He made their glowing colors,

He made their tiny wings: la la la la lahla

The Lord God made them and gave them their choice but was he???

The Lord decided when he created my dude.. just placed a heart and brain and said all you have to do is to love... Love... And love...

When lord creates I was told that a fairy angel is always there... to help him... she did ask him... only love and nothing else... brilliance, smartness, anger... agony... pain... fight... He said no all he has to do is love... and he will do all this when he loves... and whom and when she asked...The Lord said he has no choice ...he will be bizarre, roam he will do what his love wants him to do...when it wants.. the angel was perplexed... But stamped that creation... But thinking what will he do till he finds his love... and stamped the creation as Suraj Rajvanshi... he grew bizarre...

Few years later Lord created a beautiful creation... the angel was stunned, it was a lovely soul, brilliant, wise, helpful, shrewd, smart, bold, fearless, righteous, patriotic, but with little of lust very little... And beautiful, she was angelic...full of life... The Lord sent her but first into misery... The bird was born... But chained... the angel named it Chakor. The chained free bird (what an oxymoron?) she was chained by destiny but was free by her choice...

Su - Kor

The birds did meet... the chirpy one hated the other...for he was bizzare and started to hate him and so he did what she wanted... hate her (he fell in love to hate her as it was her wish not his choice) started this unique story...till they parted...she ran away to return with fame... and he was bizarre, hating her stayed behind to play the game...

They met, in a bizarre way his love came bundled to him... the first eye contact they had after 10 years as teens... They had fire... fire of hate... She hated him so he did what she wanted hated her( he had no choice)

Many things happened the worst was the bride swap... wait was it her choice to marry him... no... then.. yes still he did what she wanted to do... she wanted him not to marry Tina... Swap the bride... he did what she wanted... Not marry Tina but she came beside him to take the vow ... (he had no choice but to marry)

Lots happened since... she wanted him to divorce... be the father of Imli's child, yes he went all the way to bring her back... it was her choice not his...

She told him to forget Imli as vivaan is loving her... he did, for it was her wish and he had no choice...

Again things unfolded, she wanted to marry Vivaan but he did what she wanted, made vivaan and imli understand that they love each other... still not his choice.

Su Kor started their journey... He did what she wanted to do... Becoming her partner in all the mission against KN... He had no choice as he just had to listen...(well that's what the Lord God wished), he was hesitant all the while, while she was taking over him, controlling him and all he did was loose to her as that's what she wanted not his choice...

Su Kor blossomed into being friendly... from the delhi to bandhuva track ... she wanted to help him, be with him not his choice... he followed her wish as he was created for that... He gave in to go away with his ego, break the chains as she wanted him to be strong to save her... He did it...

SuKor love was blossoming... all he did was what she wanted him to do... too many things, she confessed him first and he followed her wish to love her, safeguard her, to guard her esteem... Even divorced her as she wanted... not him...as he loved her explicitly... So following his motive of his creation...the various horrendous tracks were all his love for her to follow her wish as he had no choice... till the memory regain... (I leave the ML track to an extent) and the lovely healing, making love, blossom her, he did at her behest... He still has no choice as all he had to do is to love her...

SUKORVI... he expanded his family... did what she wanted for the uplifting of AZ, stood by her to fight the psychological bonding... her choice not his, all he did was to love... only love her...

Till Yesterday... He still has no choice... But follow her wish to love someone... fake love to someone...and when he achieved it, he realized it that too only when she told him that he is being loved... He did not realise as for his he has to love only her only his Chakor... he rejoiced... as his love's wish, HER MISSION is accomplished... he is being loved by someone...HE IS NOT LOVING THAT SOMEONE...because it is not his choice...

Yes the bird chirping all the while but the other bird was just looking at it as it was created to love it and only love it.

SUKOR ... The angel teared and looked at Lord God, I now understood why you made him to just love her as in that he did all that has to be done was smart, brilliant, out of the way (camp wedding), shrewd, angered, fought for her, and under why Chakor was born with little lust as he was there to lust her, to love her as still it was her wish not his choice...

The birdie just flew high and the dude was just following her behind proudly with his wings above her shielding her...as all he has to do is love her and only love her as he has been only created for that .

Does he have any other choice .. Not that he want one either

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