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Chasa

@Chasa

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Loved the 2nd part...i was imaging the entire scenario...suraj is so sleek ,...loved the way how he applied the haldi from the waist to the cheeks..waiting for ur next update..pls update soon..hope the exact same scene takes place in the show too..

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Maithu

Still mesmerised... Felt like the Monday epi already being shown.

Omg suraj handling his chakor and you didn't miss the jungli billi's trait too.

Waiting to see how he is going to be billi handled by her.

Still not coming out of the visualisation...

Thanks a ton

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Amazing update👏

Suraj is so naughty😉

Sukor's moment was sensous

Waiting to for jungli bili to attack him

Waiting for next

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Awesome part sis..

Loved every single line of tis part too..

The way suraj applied the haldi to her..i got a goosebumbs..

U r true sis..his smile s really magnetic..which pulls us to his side..

Chakor olv at the last line was superb..

Overall i just loved tis part a lot..

Waiting for the next update searching sis..

See u..

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: aishagup
beautiful! mesmerising! I loved sukor here especially suraj.
ohh so chakor wants to give him marks on his handsome face 😉

overall loved the update

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you loved Sukor here!

Do you think she will get the chance to mark his face? LOL

She wouldn't be busy doing things!😳

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: chasa
Loved the 2nd part...i was imaging the entire scenario...suraj is so sleek ,...loved the way how he applied the haldi from the waist to the cheeks..waiting for ur next update..pls update soon..hope the exact same scene takes place in the show too..

Thanks buddy!

Happy that the scenes were imaginative!

Glad you loved and liked their moments!

I too wish it dear but for that they must give something revealing to Chakor and not a gown like costume the D day!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
Still mesmerised... Felt like the Monday epi already being shown.

Omg suraj handling his chakor and you didn't miss the jungli billi's trait too.

Waiting to see how he is going to be billi handled by her.

Still not coming out of the visualisation...

Thanks a ton

Hey! It's my pleasure that you are all reading and liking my writings!

I'm just waiting for Monday episode and the real Rituals scenes!

LOL! I loved how you said 'Billi handled by here'

Hope the next will have the same effect!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
Suraj is so naughty😉
Sukor's moment was sensous
Waiting to for jungli bili to attack him
Waiting for next

Thanks dear!

Naughtiness is Suraj's trait! Do you agree?

Happy that you enjoyed their moments, I'm too waiting to write it in the searching part!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago