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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Beautiful update👏

Loved suraj's proposal😛

You have written it from your heart

The whole engagement setup was flawless

Waiting for next

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu
amazing the Wearing

i could literally visualise our SUKOR in this and was smiling myself. Wish you were in CVS writers panel...

it was so smooth and was like a fairy tale... the prince and the princess being in the floral...

just loved it

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you could visualize the scenes!

I just wrote with the flow of my heart! And I'm so happy with the responses!

The floral theme is from the pics we are seeing from yesterday and one of their pic is my story cover in Wattpad LOL

Hope you love the rest of parts too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: chasa
Maithu...I was just visualizing the entire sequence...so lovely..loved the light hearted sukor...and then the proposal scene was wonderful. ...waiting for ur next update...pls jaldi karo na😭...and next time make it longer pls..

Thanks dear!

Happy that the scenes are liked by you and you loved them!

I will try to update by tomorrow morning as I have already written more than half of that!

I will try to make it longer dear, I can't guarantee it as I will go with the flow, so hope you understand!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ndivyateja
All the while im reading, there is a big smile on my face that stretched to my ears..my eyes were in awe of your writing skills..
Splendid work girl !! Can't get enough of it..want the next part to be longer..please 😳
Those proposal lines..came straight from your heart..😊

Love..❤️

I'm glad my writing brought a smile and I can say the same reading your comment dear! Thank you!

As I said in the reply for a friend, I will try to make it longer as much as the part will be needed, so can't guarantee it dear!

I think so about those lines as I didn't think about anything when the dare came! And I'm happy that I can use that here!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
It was amazing sis..
I just loved every line of tis part..
Every scene is visually comming before my eyes..
Want to see the same type of engagement in series also..
Suraj proposal scene was awesome..
Eagerly waiting for applying part..
Luv u sis..

Thanks a lot dear!

All of your words mean a lot to me!

Glad you loved it!

I too wish to see something similar dear! Fingers crossed!

Hope you like the Applying part too!

See you dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: arena99
Wow
Super cute the proposal lines loved it😊

Thank buddy!

Happy that you find the proposal scene cute and that you loved it!

Hope the next parts will be interesting too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: katheriene
Beautiful update👏
Loved suraj's proposal😛
You have written it from your heart
The whole engagement setup was flawless
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot yaar!

Glad you love the proposal!

Yep it was a sudden flow of words when I got the dare!

Happy that you find it flawless!

Hope it continues!

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Wow...this one was sooo sweet..😳

Suraj choosing the dress for Chakor,so.adorable,I could imagine everything happening..

Suraj proposing Chakor was also.very heart felt,and the lines.were very beautiful❤️

I liked this one...

Waiting for next😊

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

The first part was amazing!

Loved every bit of it.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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av131

@av131

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

This is simply superb👍🏼
What I loved d most is d end part where she went on her knees to give her hand coz she can give her hand by standing also but she came to same level as his.
Waiting for next ritual !!

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