FS: Walk With Winsomeness (Completed - 22/08)

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Hi sis..

Amazing update..

I just luved it very much..

First i was shocked tat suraj was engaged with imli..atlast i relieved..

Very innocent chakor..cute suraj..

Y suraj thinks to break their relationship for tis small thing..want to see their happily married life..

Eagerly waiting for next update sis..

Luv u..

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Great start! just like in soaps.

So Chakor is just a replacement !

Her chacha and chachi are monsters.

It seems Chakor lacks self confidence or is she just afraid of here elders?

Chakor already likes Suraj.

I like Suraj's concern for Chakor, he doesn't want to force her into marriage, he's such a gentleman!

Looking forward to the next update!

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Just a Fabulous Start

Suraj and Imli's marriage was fixed but she was not interested in him as she was already inlove with another

Suraj finds Chakor so innocent and he knows she is scared for raised voices while she finds him to be such a nice and caring guy

Imli runs away on the day of her wedding giving her mother the chance once again to pull Chakor to uphold the respect and prestige of both the families and Chakor agrees as she hopes Suraj will be her Prince while Suraj wants to know her view about this marriage and the fact that she is ten younger also makes him feel a bit uncomfortable

waiting now to see what will happen next

again I'm sorry for such late response

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Very nice twisted start

The honor of the family is to be safeguarded so many younger lives are pawned... Some sail through and get an excellent life... Some has a reversal effect..

Chakor I feel here that the relationship may evolve into a song as she is yearning for someone who will regard her.

I really like suraj who really thinks about her feelings and wants to know her comfort level. He also knows that she needs the warmth as she has lost her parents

A very different concept.

I am really waiting for the update

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Suraj & imli 's marriage was fixed but she run away😲
Chakor is so innocent😊
Loved sukor moment😊
Looks like chakor was not treated well by her chacha chachi
Sukor are finally married😊
Loved their mind talks about the marriage & othe matter😊
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!

I just didn't want to have her face after this part, so made her a run away bride LOL

Hope you will like their upcoming moments too!

Yup dear!

She suffered a lot and hope her future will be best by SR!

Glad you loved their mind talks!

I can see that you all missed it! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Aslesha99
Enjoyed reading the update!

Thanks a lot yaar!😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: arena99
Lovely story:-)

Thank you dear!😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Interesting start👍🏼
Can't wait for one full week !!

Thank you buddy!

Sorry for making you wait one week!

A lot of other updates were on line!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Charaju
Amazing update 👏
Marriage fixed with imli & ended up with chakor 😛
Inner convo is cute
Waiting for how sukor life is going to be

Thank you dear!

Happy that you find their convo cute!

I'm too waiting to write about their future!

See you soon dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi sis..
Amazing update..
I just luved it very much..
First i was shocked tat suraj was engaged with imli..atlast i relieved..
Very innocent chakor..cute suraj..
Y suraj thinks to break their relationship for tis small thing..want to see their happily married life..
Eagerly waiting for next update sis..
Luv u..

Hey dear!

H r u?

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you loved it!

Don't worry dear, for now all stories are only with happy moments!

Started to write the next part and I have already reached 3000+ words and I'm half the content only LOL

Need time to finish!😛