Not all Roses Ss Sukor up pg54

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Brilliant

Avya is so cute, she's truly the ray of sunshine in Chakor's life.

Imli is so selfish and heartless, not for one second did she miss her sister.

Chakor was right in every word she told Suraj. Suraj feels some guilt but not enough and he isn't ready to apologize. The gap between them is so wide mainly because they never liked each other or even knew each other well. Will Avya and Baghya be enough to bridge this gap?

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

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Chasa

@Chasa

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Wow..avya is such a cutiepie...i am so glad suraj got it back from chakor...just love the strong and independent chakor..looking forward to the next part

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AISHA GUPTA

@-Euphemia-

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

aww...love chakor here.

she is soo like what evry girl should be..

i hope suraj accepts his responsiblty not out of guilt but only if he loves chakor.

as usual i hate imli..

great chapter..pls update soon.

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Amazing update👏

Loved chakor's reply to suraj👏

Suraj is feeling guilty but is not accepting it due to his ego & insecurities😡

Loved how suraj's parents behaved with avya & chakor😊

Loved the last part, I think avya will bring suraj to right track😊

Hate imli

Avya has suraj's traits

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

It was an awesome update..

Loved the brave chakor a lot..

And also avya she s so cute..

How she treated suraj was superb..he deserves tis and also more..and suraj have to pay for his deeds..

I want both imli and her parents also get insulted by chakor..she have to treat them bad for what they have done to her own daughter..

Loved baghya for supporting chakor in her tough suituation to till now..

Want to read more..pls update soon..

Edited by Sania_suraj - 8 years ago

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Hope09

@Hope09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Hey the update was awesome! 😃

Well I am at lack of words to appreciate your fabulous work...

Loved reading it... ❤️

Chakor's character was amazing! I really liked the way when she stood up amongst all with that charming confidence of hers...

Suraj again disappointing... Still he had something left to explain ... And moreover how he can say that Avya is her child too..

Hope he does not claim any right on Avya creating trouble for Chakor... 😳

Update the next part soon 😊

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Subi51

@Subi51

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

In love with female protagonist, she speaks right words , takes right decision at right time. She has certainly been best mother. Want to keep reading the story plot for days. Really realistic. Keep writing more.

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Blushy_Auntacid

@Blushy_Auntacid

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: maithu_
WOW!
Superb!
Loved how Chakor showed the mirror of his actions to him.
I still hate Imli.
Bhagya parents are really adorable!
All the whole a great chapter!
Waiting to see how Suraj is going to change his fate.

thank you Maitju , am glad you liked the chapter

Even i dislike the character of Imli no matter how cvs would portray her positive , i'd never see her in that shade

Updating soon

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Blushy_Auntacid

@Blushy_Auntacid

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: crystal30003
Amazing update! Hope in the next chapter Suraj realises his big mistake of not supporting chakor and giving up his rights for his child. And he accepts Avya and declares this publicly so that chakor has some feelings for him as at the moments she seems quite cold hearted.
Hope you update tomorrow and just wanted to ask how many chapters this will be.
Thanks.

hey Crystal , thank you soo.much , i intend to update everyday since i wanna wrap up the story as quickest as possible , so yes i will update today too , in a bit and i dunno exactly how many chapters it's going to be , m kinda going with the flow , i write on mobile :/ but since it's a short story i can say it's gonna be more or less 10 chapters , hope you lke the next part it's all about you said :p suraj's realization

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Blushy_Auntacid

@Blushy_Auntacid

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Just awed...at your flow of words
Not a miss anywhere... You reflected of my thought of how a strong women who had fought all odds to be..

Lovely the bonding with Avya.. Just visualising her makes me very sensitive.

Suraj... He deserved it... Just couldn't pity him... Excellent the way you are figuring him...

Feeling so proud of our chakor s Bird to be an not ordinary vulnerable bird but an eagle or a hawk.. Calm but spot on attacking the target..

Just loved and always I felt soo good when a woman soars high all alone..

Just great yaar

Let's see how sun struggle to get our super bird

Excellent excellent..

You amaze me.

Bless you dear

hey sums first of all thank you , i need the blessing hehe , i wish girls to stay strong on their every stand most of the time people misunderstand our inclination towards emotions as weakness which is dramafied by serial directors 😡 , Sun has to burn to give light so i intend to follow the theory i will.continue soon

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