OS: Keep It Simply Sweet - Page 5

Originally posted by: amrutha131

It's so sweet and beautiful Maithu 👍🏼
Never expected Chakor to kiss first and their cheek kisses are so cute😆

Originally posted by: vvv

Awesome

fantastic

fabulous

you stole my heart girl!!!

i loved it so so much

actually it was simply sweet

👍🏼

Originally posted by: sumsukor

very very sweet

I would say simply superb!!

Nice the way Suraj is appearing as a playboy but serious in his own ways!

Chakor... the strong girl,, seems to be vulnerable with Suraj.

Good one though

really enjoyed it

Originally posted by: chasa

Aww..really enjoyable...nice one maithu

Originally posted by: aishagup

awwdorable and sweet!!

thanks for writing and sharing.

Originally posted by: appledesire

Perfectoo...

I loved it...

Love @ first site.
Kiss = keep it simply sweet..

Superb dee..

Again.. thnx a ton.. for beautiful wrk..

Originally posted by: taahir004

This was just a Phenomenal piece of work

I loved every bit of it

Suraj at first I thought of him as someone that is arrogant and a total jerk like telling Chakor the kiss on her first day was just a bet then he always staring at her I mistook that gesture of his for trying to make her uncomfortable but instead it seems like he was drawn towards her

his actions always told of an untold emotion towards her though he never voiced out anything but he certainly held emotions for her that carried care and concern too

the trip where he dedicated the song to her I felt he was letting Chakor know about his deep feelings for her

then he confesses that it was never a bet which certainly means he is very much interested in her

and I so love how he calls her Sweety

Suraj taking photos of his Sweety that is cool and it does seem like he is serious as he ask her can he meet her parents okay Chakor is confused as she believes because after college they both will go separate ways but his talks say differently

now the truth or dare game which indeed benefits both Suraj and Chakor though I think its probably difficult for girs to just kiss a guy especially when she knows she has feelings for him

both kissed and Suraj confessed he loves her Chakor while she too confesses her love just that moment itself was priceless now both comfortable enough to speak through everything now both are a couple and Chakor no longer has to be sad or in pain thinking that the guy she likes was just playing her

Originally posted by: Charaju

Sweet! Superb, fantastic...
No words to describe 👏

Originally posted by: KUTUR

Maithu...come on give me a 🤗

This one was sooo AMAZING...the best OS,I have had read till date...😃

What a SIMPLY SWEET rendition😳

Just loved the characterisations of both Suraj and Chakor..

From the moment the first cheek happened,I am smiling wide like an idiot...and the 'seeti moment'...THE KISS IN THE TENT...I hooted like a tapori on this part...😆

And now,my fav part-(no matter how hard I try I always end up finding the similarity)😳

Like the original Suraj,this one is also a hell of a 'badmaash'...his advances and attitude may make any girl totally blast at him,but just like our original Suraj,one really cannot succeed in hating him,coz he is irresistible like dark chocolate..😉

And like the original Chakor,she may appear to be very strong personality,and she is,as well...but only a mere touch of him is enough to melt her,and she gives in.☺️

Even like the original Sukor,this Suraj also knows it,how to utilise this weakness of hers,upto his advantage...😉

Every part,whenever Suraj approached her...was beautifully written...

IF I NEED TO DESCRIBE THIS OS IN ONE WORD-THEN IT WAS MAGICAL⭐️

Keep going Maithu...👍🏼commendable job😳

Originally posted by: maithu_

Why just 1 hug? Hugs buddy ;-)

Oh my dude! Thanks a lot for all these lovely words!

Each and every words just boost my confidence to go further LOL

Hahaha You made me smile(not laughing as I'm at work) with the use of the words like 'Tapori' ...

you did'nt like the word???,I use this word whenever I have to describe something out of the box...😛

And I'm glad you enjoyed their chac and their moments!

That's my fav part too!

As I get to see the story from a different light!

LOL Suraj and dark chocolate! Nice combo! I love it! :-)

Hahaha I want to see one day, our Chakor to use his weakness(just like in the bus) for more scenes than just once.

And I am sure you will someday make her do that,even more than EMI,whats say???😉

It's my pleasure that you liked and enjoyed the story!

Lots of hugs buddy!