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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
It was very cute & sweet update😛
Suraj was so naughty here😉
Poor chakor she was so confused by suraj's behaviour😆
Loved sukor teenage love😊

Thanks dear!

As I came to know you all like naughty Suraj a lot, just trying to give if possible different type of naughtiness.

Glad you loved it!

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AISHA GUPTA

@-Euphemia-

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

awwdorable and sweet!!

thanks for writing and sharing.

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@appledesire

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Perfectoo...

I loved it...

Love @ first site.
Kiss = keep it simply sweet..

Superb dee..

Again.. thnx a ton.. for beautiful wrk..

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
You have to write a book...and I'm promise I will be buy first...
So wo kiss Suraj ki bet nahi thi...naughty boy and chakor wo bhi kuch Kum nahi hai... Beautiful OS after rabbit hole this one is my second favorite Story...
I love this...take a bow Maithu... 👏👏👏

Thanks a lot dear!

You remembered me a friend who said the same thing and we ended by laughing without reason!

If it happens, I will thank you all for that!

Nope! It wasn't a bet!

Naughty Suraj is something I wanted to come back with since Flechazo and here it happened with a slight changes in characterisation.

Yeah! Agree! Chakor isn't a timid one here!

Thanks a lot once again dear!

Glad you loved it!

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

This was just a Phenomenal piece of work

I loved every bit of it

Suraj at first I thought of him as someone that is arrogant and a total jerk like telling Chakor the kiss on her first day was just a bet then he always staring at her I mistook that gesture of his for trying to make her uncomfortable but instead it seems like he was drawn towards her

his actions always told of an untold emotion towards her though he never voiced out anything but he certainly held emotions for her that carried care and concern too

the trip where he dedicated the song to her I felt he was letting Chakor know about his deep feelings for her

then he confesses that it was never a bet which certainly means he is very much interested in her

and I so love how he calls her Sweety

Suraj taking photos of his Sweety that is cool and it does seem like he is serious as he ask her can he meet her parents okay Chakor is confused as she believes because after college they both will go separate ways but his talks say differently

now the truth or dare game which indeed benefits both Suraj and Chakor though I think its probably difficult for girs to just kiss a guy especially when she knows she has feelings for him

both kissed and Suraj confessed he loves her Chakor while she too confesses her love just that moment itself was priceless now both comfortable enough to speak through everything now both are a couple and Chakor no longer has to be sad or in pain thinking that the guy she likes was just playing her

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Charaju

@Charaju

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Sweet! Superb, fantastic...
No words to describe 👏

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Maithu...come on give me a 🤗

This one was sooo AMAZING...the best OS,I have had read till date...😃

What a SIMPLY SWEET rendition😳

Just loved the characterisations of both Suraj and Chakor..

From the moment the first cheek happened,I am smiling wide like an idiot...and the 'seeti moment'...THE KISS IN THE TENT...I hooted like a tapori on this part...😆

And now,my fav part-(no matter how hard I try I always end up finding the similarity)😳

Like the original Suraj,this one is also a hell of a 'badmaash'...his advances and attitude may make any girl totally blast at him,but just like our original Suraj,one really cannot succeed in hating him,coz he is irresistible like dark chocolate..😉

And like the original Chakor,she may appear to be very strong personality,and she is,as well...but only a mere touch of him is enough to melt her,and she gives in.☺️

Even like the original Sukor,this Suraj also knows it,how to utilise this weakness of hers,upto his advantage...😉

Every part,whenever Suraj approached her...was beautifully written...

IF I NEED TO DESCRIBE THIS OS IN ONE WORD-THEN IT WAS MAGICAL⭐️

Keep going Maithu...👍🏼commendable job😳

Edited by KUTUR - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi di...
It was awesome..
Omg suraj was fabulous..and our poor chakor..
Is their first kiss s a bet?
Naughty suraj..
I loved tina here rather than in series..
Chakor's dare was very interesting..
Y don't u update suraj pov also sis..we can know abt his thought also na sis..
For tis os my "keep it simply sweet" to u..
Luv u sis..tc

Hey dear!

Thanks a lot!

You found it dear!

Naughty Suraj, so naughty thoughts, so no bet only kiss.

Glad you liked Tina here!

I know dear, it will interesting to know it but I wanted to explore Chakor's view only in this story.

And a secret, it will be hard to write his POV here! CRYING

Thanks a ton once more dear!

And love you too!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing!! 👏
Loved it, it was so sweet.
I was surprised how hesitant Suraj was in telling her his feelings I thought he was more confident.
Chakor is so innocent, when he told her he wants to meet her parents, I wanted to scream at her to say yes.
Can't believe she kissed him first. 😆

I don't think she's fragile, may be lacking in confidence. To be fair, Suraj didn't make his intentions clear, she thought he was toying with her.

Thank you so much!

I'm so happy that you loved it!

Just wanted to try a contract in their characterisations and actions. And I think it clicked as I can see you all like it!

Yep! This Suraj was a bit confusing time to time.

I think if I was in her place I would have thought the same. LOL

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: vk1nonly
Phew...
Really I am tired of searching good words in my dictionary to define your work and appreciate your writing. It was really a cute one( sorry not intelligent enough to have a good word).
Throughout I felt Suraj is the game played but I was like aaaw when Chakor kissed him.
Throughout I felt Suraj pretended to be lusty and may be lusted on her which will later convert to love but I was like aaaw when he refused to kiss her in front of everyone.
I simply loved it and I think I have another content that I can use to refresh my mind.
Loads of love.

Hey! A simple word of appreciation is more than everything dear!

So it means a lot to me and each and every word are my boost! ;-)

I'm really so happy that you loved it and enjoyed it!

Thanks for your love and love you too dear!❤️