SS: Piya Rangrez. (updated 17/06).

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av131

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Fabulous👏
I love thrillers !!
Thank u so much for writing this Nimmi🤗
And will u continue Ajay-Chakor OS series ??(bcoz I wanna read them before if ever Ajay turns negative)

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Fabulous👏
I love thrillers !!
Thank u so much for writing this Nimmi🤗
And will u continue Ajay-Chakor OS series ??(bcoz I wanna read them before if ever Ajay turns negative)

amrutha.
🤗

happy to see you ra.
i should be thanking you for reading this story and liking it. so a big thank you.

aha Ajay Chakor series? well i was goofing around then thinking that finally serial is getting entertaining. but nay my idea of entertainment and Cvs idea of entertainment are on polar opposite frequencies. so stopped watching the show again. will catch up with the episodes someday going by the opinions of the girls whose opinions i value here.
sorry dearest.. this means Akor series are on hold.

i am writing this story down clawing my inspiration from old Suraj Rajvanshi that i loved from memory lanes of bygone era for shruthi's budday... i know i am a weirdo. 😆.

once again heartfelt thank you and much love.
big hugs.

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nimmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Updated part I, II and III.

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Namita

@Namita-M

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

It was awesome Nimmi. Brilliant!!

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Chasa

@Chasa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Interesting...nice to see chakor and suraj becoming friendly..pls update soon

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av131

@av131

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Brilliant👏
Waiting for next !!

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AISHA GUPTA

@-Euphemia-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

I thought they guy who saved her was suraj...maybe chakor mixed up the names.( my guess.)

I m curious to see how this unfolds...waiting..

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Interesting update👏

I thought the guy who saved chakor is suraj😲

Was it an imagination of chakor or reality😲

Loved sukor argument, it was same as in the serial😆

Waiting how the mystery will unfold

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gibbu

@gibbu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Its always a delight to read your stories. You just weave magic through your words. Going by one of the chapters you posted here of Angel-Kitten-Pirahna fiction and first three chapters of this ss, this one promises to be a masterpiece too. & hoping that since you are writing in an au the risk of abandoning this work midway is greatly reduced when the show keeps bothering you time and again

The turn of events are really surprising. Initially i assumed that the person who saved the girl is the hero who is some warlord. But for now it seems everything is a moh-maya😆. Waiting for next chapters for the mystery about the saviour to unravel.

& the title of this ss forces me to expect high emotions too, apart from action and suspense. i just love concepts borrowed from mysticism

Edited by gibbu - 8 years ago