'YOUR LOVE IS A LIE' - A Sukor FF- Discontinued (Note-pg16) - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: maithu_

Superb!

Loved every bit of it except the hug!
Hope Vivaan doesn't turn negative in the course of time!
Chakor still loves her Love.
How will she work with him in future?
Waiting For His Entry!
Thanks for the PM!

Thank you di for the lovely words😃
Vivaan will be leaving soon as of now and there is no such plan of turning Vivaan negative. Though some parts will be necessary to overshadow Suraj over him. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Great start, it's good that Vivaan won't be around when Suraj comes back. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thanks😊
Will update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Beautiful 👍🏼
Hope Vivaan remains as Chakor's best friend forever
Does Chakor live alone in her flat ?
Waiting for next part !!

Thank you😃
He 'll always remain the same.
Yes, as Vivaan helped him move to the new city, She has been living in this flat alone since then. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Very nice and super.

Waiting for The dude

Thanks😊
Will be back soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
very interesting...and well written...waiting for surajs entry.
please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Hello Everyone!
I am back with another chapter. Based on few readers' suggestion the succeeding parts will be completely in English . And from now on I'll introduce POVs of characters as and when required.

"YOU STILL RULE MY HEART"

New York :

The announcement was made for the flight to take off. The crew and staff of the airplane advised the passengers to grip the belt and all the necessary instructions were given to the passengers. The flight finally took off; Air hostesses started serving the customers with their requirements. They soon reached at a seat where they stopped near a man laying comfortably on his seat, with his eyes glued to his laptop screen.

Air hostess: Do you want anything sir?

Man: Yes a coffee, strong and with only 1 teaspoon of sugar.

Air Hostess (with a smile): Okay sir, I'll get it.

Man: Do you know why only this coffee?

Air Hostess: No Sir, Why?

Man: Because she likes it this way.

Air Hostess: She?

The Man pointed towards his laptop screen with his finger. The screen showed numerous photos of a beautiful girl -some in her sleeping form, some with a cute pout, some with her angry pout, and some with her henna painted hands. The Air hostess stared in a daze with an Aww.

Air Hostess: Sir your girlfriend is really very pretty.

Man (with a big smile): Not Girlfriend, She is my wife, Mrs. Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi.

(Hence, the man was revealed to be Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi)

Air Hostess (with a sheepish smile): I am Sorry Sir, it didn't seem that you are married.

Air Hostess _POV_:
Omg! This man is married. He seems so young. And his physique -tall, muscular, fair and well built- does not prove by any means he is married. His wife must be very lucky to have him.
POV ENDS...

As the Air hostess turned to leave, Suraj called her.

Suraj: Miss, apart from bringing me a Coffee, Can you do me one more favour?

Air Hostess: Sure Sir, Do u require anything else?

Suraj: Can you help me choosing the best photo of my wife for my desktop background, as for me she seems adorable in every pic, even in her pyjamas like this.

(It revealed to show a pic where Chakor was having Ice cream smudged over her nose and she was posing like a kid in night pyjamas showing her tongue.)

Air Hostess (with a big smile): Sir, Choose your desktop background which makes you remember the best moment spent with her. Till then I'll head to bring your special coffee.

SURAJ _POV_:
How to tell her Chakor that every moment related to you is precious to me . It has been 2 years since you left me, it feels u took my soul from my body and I have become a Lifeless body. The only source of my energy on which I am living is your love, Chakor. I am fully confident u still love me too my babydoll but I also know that you being you would never admit it (with a wide smile). But I am also Suraj Rajvanshi, Your dearest pati dev, I'll make u realize my love again. Get ready Chakor, to be mine again and this time forever.
POV ENDS...

Soon the flight lands and there comes out Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi, on seeing whom, every girl present there gets awestruck and every guy gets jealous. Being the centre of attraction, Suraj knew the attention he was getting, but he didn't even looked up at any of the girls staring at him.

Taking out his wallet he caressed a beautiful photo of his lovely wife while he started talking to the photo.

"Biwi, I swear on you, I never ever looked up on any girl except you, not even in this two years when u were not there with me."

"I'll always be only yours and you are still mine and will remain mine forever" , kissing the photo, hugging it to his heart.

"I am coming Biwi to claim you once again" , He kept the wallet back in his pocket.

As he searched through the crowd, he finally found out the placard with his name. He soon walked upto the man holding the placard.

Suraj: I am Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi. I guess Mr. Nalin Ahuja might have sent you to pick me.

The man: Yes Sir, I am his driver. Sorry, Ahuja Sir Couldn't come to pick as he had a meeting scheduled early morning.

Suraj: No problem. It's fine.

The car journey was silent and peaceful with Suraj engrossed in thoughts of Chakor. His mind was thinking of all the possible consequences when he would meet his love. Starting from meeting her to re-uniting, his mind wandered every possible corner. He suddenly asked the driver to stop the car on seeing a jewelry shop.

"How Stupid I am? I was going to meet Chakor empty handed" , he mentally chided himself.

He got down the car to purchase a gift for Chakor.

After searching through the whole shop he was still wandering what to purchase as a gift, then a beautiful pair of anklets caught his attention.

Seeing anklets he remembered an incident of flashback.

Flashback:
Chakor was walking towards Suraj with baby steps from behind with a naughty smirk on her face; While Suraj was engrossed in his work.

She was suddenly going to do BOO in his ears as her cunning hubby caught her hands and pulled her on himself.

Seating comfortably on Suraj's lap,

Chakor (with a cute pout): How did u know I was behind you?

Suraj, Putting his arms around her petite waist.

Suraj (with a wide grin): Biwi, when u will understand I even understand the language of your tingling anklets.

Suraj (widely smiling): You know I am very smart, I already tied the bell on my Jungli billi only difference here, being that I tied it on her ankle instead of her neck.

Chakor (joining her eyebrows) : Do I seem a Jungli Billi to You?

Suraj nodded his head in positive. While Chakor got up from his lap and headed towards the bed to find a suitable weapon.

Chakor: You! (She throws a pillow on his face) Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi I won't leave u today.

She started beating him on his chest and soon whole room was filled with pillow feathers with laughing sounds echoing all through the room.

Flashback ends...

Suraj (to himself): I promise biwi we will have those moments again soon.

He soon asks the shopkeeper to pack the anklets and turns out to leave.

<End of the Chapter>

Next part: Meeting of Chakor and Suraj.

Thank you for everyone who commented and liked.🤗Once again it's your comments that motivate me to write.😃
So do drop your comments for an early update.😉
#stayhappy😊
BYE











Edited by J.arora - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Aww! Suraj loves his biwi a lot
Loved how he was talking to her photo
Waiting for their first meeting !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Amazing update👏
Suraj loves chakor so much😊
Loved how his thoughts were occupied by chakor
The flashback was cute😊
Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Hi ,
It was an amazing update..
I can imagine how suraj looks in ur story..
Suraj was lovely here..I thought he will meet her in this part itself..😔
Eagerly waiting for sukor meeting..
Update soon dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
What an amazing update
Suraj ranvanshi always amazes

Waiting for the meeting eagerly

Love your writing

Crispy but on dot with lots of expectation!!!

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