SS : Crazy About You (Completed) - Page 32

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update, it was very cute👏

So suraj was telling truth about chakor's pregnancy😊

Loved how he was observing every changes in sukor

Waiting for season 2

Originally posted by: Charaju

Amazing update 👏
Sad that story completed & Happy as there is a sequel
Nice story & every part written beautifully 👏

Originally posted by: amrutha131

Superb ending👏
I just loved d whole story
Yippee Season 2🥳

Originally posted by: taahir004

Last part

Simply Fabulous ... I just Loved all of it

Suraj was so confident that his Chakor was pregnant , all he wanted from the elders was their blessing and he spoke telling them that he tricked her in signing the marriage documents as he knew she too loves him but the pregnancy had to still be confirmed

after what seemed like ages the elders accepted especially Chakor's father telling her that he already lost one daughter and does not want to lose another her happiness lies with Suraj so he is leaving her with her husband but been her father he will always be there if she needs him

her mother on the other hand gave the braclet to Suraj and he finally plave in Chakor hand when they confirmed she is pregnant

both love each other deeply and both now are finally happy that all misunderstandings are cleared the parents are aware about them and their love for each other

this was a fabulous and so amazing story

thank you for allowing me to read your work

much appreciated

Originally posted by: meshmesh

A beautiful end to a great story! 👏

So Suraj knew about the pregnancy before Chakor. Loved how he notices every little thing about her.

Bhuvan's words and Kasturi giving Suraj the bracelet were emotional.

Poor Chakor, hiding behind Suraj trying to stop him from embarrassing her infront of their parents.

I'm happy you're thinking of season 2, it would be great to see their dynamics with their relation out in the air.

Originally posted by: sumsukor

CAY

You are turning me to be CAY for the lovely story of yours. when I received the intimation late night just could not wait finished it in one go and then went over it again and again. You just amaze dear. Clear flow of thoughts so that I just could visualise...

just loved the way Suraj handled the elders and also the situation so well!

Loved and adored the way Chakor was so cute hiding behind him and adorable is he who is so confident about his thought and also so careful in noticing about his life's little changes so acurately.

loved the pregnancy revealing haha imagined Suraj walking up and down... that was so cute. the way he loved his little princess...

How well he knows and cares about her his world is around her...Just could relate it with ysterday's epi how he confidently said in the precap to Chakor that Ajay is going to propose her with red gulab (well sorry donot want to bring in that track but felt like).

waiting for the part 2.

JUST LOVED IT.

stay blessed dear

I know I am late in commenting but was too busy a bit.

Thanks

Originally posted by: Hafsa.libra

You have written the most beautiful story . I couldn't stop myself from commenting after reading the whole story altogether. N tomorrow I'll be reading your two other ff "the one for me" And "emi" .you have great writing skills n you create the most perfect scenes.

You gave us all what we wanted to see in drama by making most perfect sukor scenes.

N sorry if I didn't commented on your previous ff because sometimes i feel lazy to sign . but now I promise that I'll try to comment on your ffs .

N plz post the season 2 of it . I'll be eager to read it too. N at last i wish that u always stay blessed. Take care. Love u.

Originally posted by: Eatifi

god,what I have done...😲

sorry Maithu,the essay became way too lengthy...😛

I did'nt expected so...😳

Originally posted by: Eatifi

SO.NOW COMES MY TURN,I HAVE BEEN WAITING SINCE SO MANY DAYS...

this was a crazyland,I will say,somewhat like 'my world'...

A devious game between the mind and the heart,with lust playing its own part,,,and as usual,the heart won,for it can never go wrong,as "LOVE IS ALWAYS RIGHT"

an 'out of the box' concept,I mean our protagonists were bil-sil in relation,and a romantic relation between them ,sounds shame full from the first go...BUT WHAT THEY BOTH HAVE BETWEEN THEM,DOES'NT HAVE TO BE UNDERSTOOD BY OTHERS,ITS FOR THEM,NOT FOR THE WORLD...

I will go on part by part.as moments excited me,

first of all,honestly speaking,I was getting bored in the first part,until HE entered,and then the real thing started...how difficult,it would have been for both of them to control the raging longingness inside,when someone who means this much to you,is in the very front of your eyes,and you are rendered helpless,

then started their bickering sessions,Sukor,be it original or fictional,they just cant remain at peace without having a verbal bout,and they started with their 'name fight',I understand why Chakor was having a problem in calling him by his name as,it would have been probably made her weak,and I get why Suraj stressed on to be called by his name as,YOUR NAME SEEMS TO BE ALL THE WAY MORE SPECIAL WHEN YOU GET TO HEAR IT FROM YOUR LOVER...

Suraj turns out to be in his SR business man mood,with his own copyright swag..

then their meeting in the office,omg,the way he noTices her lips parting,JUST HOW COULD ONE RESIST FALLING FOR THE MAN,WHO NOTICES YOU THIS WAY...

and their fight for the name continues,,,with Chakor having a problem with his smirk,I mean,really,this is so much like the real Chakor,she also has a problem with everything of his,but alas,both Chakor just cant keep themselves in control while with him...

then comes the part of the first assault,the kitchen scene,I understand what Suraj must have been feeling all this while,controlling him,but he just gave in to the moment,seeing her in a sari,after all how long can one have control over doing what you just feel to do,logic does'nt really works,when hearty says something,and the body wants...

and I cried for the first time ,when Chakor read her diary,it was also she having a constant battle between her heart and mind,it really feels very hurt when your desire becomes someone's possession..

and then I really,really loved the way Suraj takes away Chakor forcefully in the bedroom and they both have their first kiss,I dont know why I just love this type of manhandling,coz the underlying emotions are only love...both of their souls got the very first shower of rain that day,which was lying parched from years,It was not meant to be like that,but nothing could have been better,,,,

And I loved,loved Suraj's dialogue,"I WILL NOT DO ANYTHING UNTIL YOU ASKED"...and our man did lived this line of him,coz he is SR,be it original or fictional,both Suraj are individuals who always own their words...[and there he wins me]

oh,how could I forget the deadly line,"EVERYTHING IS FAIR IN LOVE AND LUST"...I agree sweetheart,I agree...would lke to add,"THERE IS NO FEELING AS CONTENT IN THIS WORLD AS LUSTING BEHIND THE ONE YOU LOVE"...

and then he saves his no on her phone,with the name of "your future",this man not only controls his life but her as well,for he considers to be his...

and their morning sleeping positions were amazing,[I was reminded of POD and even when Sukor had slept for the first time together while on their,'ishq ka safar']

The second sentimental part for me,Suraj sleeping on Chakor's lap,his gesture was so innocent,how could anyone think him to be wrong...

and then the passionate kiss,I did'nt felt an ounce of lust in it,it was love,unadulterated love...that why,even she gave in...

and her punishment,to make him eat,does'nt it sounds something childish,[just like the punishment which Suraj gave to Chakor,some days before]

and if Chakor's diary made me to cry,Suraj's pov made me to emotional to the extent that I went on a silent mode...

the papers signing moment,Suraj have some mercy on the poor soul,just for your contentment,dont make her weak like this,at least see,for yourself,how she feels,whenever in physical contact with yours...

the fight between Chakor's mind and heart was good...SHE IS GIVING IN

and then comes my fav part,the dreamy proposal on the alleged most romantic place in the world,the kiss was simply mesmerising...I so very get Chakor's dilemma...

soemone,your the prince charming,one fine day,come alive from your dreams,in the very front of your eyes,in your virtual world,and one by one,he is turning all your dreams into reality,JUST HOW COULD YOU NOT BELIEVE IT...JUST HOW COULD YOU NOT FEEL HIS TOUCH TO BE GENTLE,WHEN YOU KNOW HOW ROUGH HE CAN BE...

Suraj in a tuxedo,with Chakor helpless,[I was reminded of the college reunion party]...

and here comes the undoubtedly bestest part of the entire ff,"A drunk Chakor"...in her 'wild cat' mode which only he can handle in the most tender,and gentle way possible...[he again won me with it]

she was submitting herself to him,but he wanted her to do it in her senses...FOR TO LOVE A SUBMISSIVE IS TO FEAST HER FORM,APPRECIATE HER STRENGTH,CHERISH HER MIND,RECOGNIZE HER PAIN,UNDERSTAND HER FEARS,ADMIRE HER WILL,AND TREASURE HER SUBMISSION...and man,he did it,exactly...

and the lovemaking moment was live fire,for it did'nt only meant,that both Sukor wanted each other bodies,it meant that,their love,their desire,their helplessness has truly triumphed over all the concepts of 'right-doings and wrong doings"...for it was really not sex,it was love,yeas it was a little wild,but what can we accept from the tiger and his wild cat...

all that mattered at that moment was to "just do what the heart wants,what the mind says,what the body needs"..

IN THAT MOMENT HE NEEDED TO CONSUME HER,TO FILL HER,TO MARK HER AS HIS...JUST AS SHE NEEDED TO OPEN HERSELF TO HIM,TO BE DESIRED,TAKEN,OWNED...

and then the part where the angry young man raises his hand on his baby doll,I could feel his helplessness...

loved the way he took care of her baby doll,when she break down in the hospital,,,

and Imli's letter was truly very saddening...

all.I want to say Maithili,thanks for this emotionally CRAZY experience,I could relate with them in every bit...and thanks for giving this Suraj,who for me is the closest to my Suraj...😳

IT FEELS SO GREAT WHEN TRUE FEELINGS TRIUMPHS OVER EVERYTHING...FOR LOVE IS DIVINE...LOVE IS JUST LOVE...

LOVE HAPPENS LIKE THAT ONLY AS THE HEART REALLY DOES NOT KNOWS ANY OTHER WAY...❤️

this was a masterpiece Maithu...👏