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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please update dear eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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First of all i am sooo very sorry all of you for having kept my ffs pending, i had schools a bunch of issues but now holidays and end of my course thanks to italian educational constitution😡, i even skipped udaan but now holidays started i entered here and saw comments still up and few messages in my inbox am soo soo sorry guys , anywho i want to continue my ffs, i'll post a mid part if it's still welcome
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 6

A drop of tear slipped out of his eyes, he shockingly moved a finger to touch it , he was sure he had severed all relationship with pain and tears but this girl managed to stir his past back , he roughly remembered her feeling his anger rush back to him

"I hate you Chakor"

He entered his gym area, glaring at everything in his sights, it felt like the past he succeeded to run off from over 10 years slapped his face. All that which was only bad memories came back rushing to him like a harsh reality .

Jagan and Adi entered the gym room only to find their boss in a condition they have never seen him before, sure he's been maintaining the angry young man posture for years, but the sight before them wasn't of only someone who was angry , there was.. Suraj bashing the punching bag violently, from their sight they could easily make out his knuckle was bleeding yet that din't stop the brutal punches. They nervously exchanged a glance as if daring the other to ask Suraj what went wrong, at last Adi exhaled knowing Jagan was too much of a coward to dare it

"dude whats wrong with you?? his tone in high pitch sure that it will penetrate through Suraj's aggressive mode brain

"Leave me alone, I don't want to see anyone" he replied grumpily without pausing his arms but atleast know the sound of his punches could reach his ears, earlier he was just numb

" Dammit man your hands are fcking bleeding, stop this madness" with a maintained distanced he tried harder and yes Suraj stopped, his eyes locked to his bleeding knuckles, 'why wasn't he feeling pain?' his knuckles were all burst up but pain?? None!! Nothing could hurt him, made him cry, but that girl did?? Just by opening a room by opening past wounds which was healed according to him

"I hate that girl" he simply replied now holding the punching back tightly as if it was Chakor's neck

It was then Adi and Jagan could realize the reason of him being so riled up

" Too much sexual tension bro, I just can't deal with it" Jagan let out unknowingly earning a glare from both Adi and Suraj... He gulped nervously saying the next thing which came to his mind "Seriously?? What did she do now?? She seems quite harmless if you ask me" he shrugged

"Harmless my foot!!!! She fcking entered in Bhagya di's room today, I swear on everything bad I did I could knock all the six bullets in a gun into her head without feeling a bit remorseful, she disgusts me!!!" Suraj had a brutal glaze in his eyes and none of two doubted it, as much as it rendered them speechless, Bhagya's issue was sensitive for either of them too

"So what, she din't do a crime??"

Just as those words came out Suraj and Jagan looked at him incredulously

"So what Adi???? Are you shitting me?" The pain the memories the cries everything coming back in his mind like just yesterday

"YEss Suraj, so what??? You have been running away from your past like it's poisonous, you sometimes behave like Bhagya never existed, you don't even let me utter my brother's name because of that reminisces of you Bhagya. How is that fair to you to Bhagya to anybody dammit??" He yelled out feeling Jagan pull him back, he wasn't letting this go, what Suraj was thinking was a never coming back past ,was memories which he bottled up deep inside preventing him to see the Suraj he was, they as his best buddies miss him, sure they have a mission, sure they have a dirty job but that din't change their character.

"DO you know what Adi?? I give a damn shit about what you think or that girl thinks, tell her to leave, I don't want to see her face again"

" Fine by me I will leave but you should know I am sorry" Chakor spoke standing still on the threshold of the gym

She hated how she spoke to him, it isn't her, she wasn't used to be bitter. Sure she din't enter that room purposely she din't intend to hurt him but she had no rights to say such things and it was still her mistake for wandering around without permission as realization hit her hard, she rushed to find Suraj knowing it might turn against her but right now her sorry was more important so there she was after loads of wrong turn in the mansion she followed the angry yells sound

All's attention turned to her , two of them wishing she wasn't soo daring and one of them wishing he had a gun in his hands at that instant

" You don't understand do you????" HE rushed towards her trying to reach her neck when both of the guys pulled him back "Leave me dammit"

She was frightened by his aggressiveness but it was too late to back down, "I said I am sorry, trust me I din't mean to go there, I was idle wandering when I bumped into that room, i was leaving when you entered and startled me, I swear" She was pleading infront of a gangster, a low character one, what was she reduced to?, but heck she was doing what she thought was the right thing though she was thankful for Adi's and Jagan's presence

Suraj swallowed, no longer resisting to free himself from his friend's grips, he wanted to punish her, he wanted to punish her bad and killing her wouldn't satisfy him, he wanted her humiliated, that would maybe silence the roaring monster in him "Fine" he breathed out, looking at the three and now that he was calmed down the two left him, as he walked right infront of Chakor who begged his feet not to give up to her fears and step back

"You have to prove you're sorry " He said , now clenching his knuckles, showing his burst up bleeding knuckles to CHakor who felt even more awful, she somehow knew she was the cause after those wounds

"Anything! I promise, I will prove you" She said making him smirk

"Anything?you won't back out right? You don't seem to be a woman of words, you're just a bimbo a spoiled one, let it be, not something within your capabilities, you just go lie and poke in things which doesn't concern you like good for nothing shits" those words were spoken to trigger her and it worked just that, it triggered her to no bounds

" I swear to my parents, I will do anything, I am not a bimbo had I been I wouldn't have been here apologizing, I'd give a damn to however you feel" she challenged him angrily, her brain yelling at her not to commit something, he had that malicious smirk who could even tell her to strip down, but he wouldn't do that right? Or would he?

Edited by Blushy_Auntacid - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update dear please update soonnn. 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting update👏
Suraj also has a painful past😭
What will Suraj ask Chakor to do
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh God!
You are back? You have no idea how happy I am. I had read this month's ago and I still remember it bit by bit. I just started reading the updated chapter.
First of all
A BIG THANK YOU!!!!
next, the chap was amazing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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OMG,u updated !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
I love ur both stories a lot😳
Waiting for next parts😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome back..atlast u have updated..
It was superb dear..
Just loved tis update..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome back
Thanks for resuming the story.
Wow Suraj was so angry. Loved how Chakor didn't back away from talking to him.
Hope what Suraj asks doesn't insult Chakor,

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shar456

Awesome update dear please update soonnn. 👏

Thank you Shar

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