Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Suraj also has a painful past😭What will Suraj ask Chakor to doWaiting for next
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Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Suraj also has a painful past😭What will Suraj ask Chakor to doWaiting for next
Originally posted by: Shreeti.sukor
Oh God!
You are back? You have no idea how happy I am. I had read this month's ago and I still remember it bit by bit. I just started reading the updated chapter.First of allA BIG THANK YOU!!!!next, the chap was amazing
Originally posted by: amrutha131
OMG,u updated !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
I love ur both stories a lot😳
Waiting for next parts😊
Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Welcome back..atlast u have updated..
It was superb dear..Just loved tis update..
Originally posted by: meshmesh
Welcome back
Thanks for resuming the story.Wow Suraj was so angry. Loved how Chakor didn't back away from talking to him.Hope what Suraj asks doesn't insult Chakor,Eagerly waiting for next.
Part 7
" I swear to my parents, I will do anything, I am not a bimbo had I been I wouldn't have been here apologizing, I'd give a damn to however you feel she challenged him angrily, her brain yelling at her not to commit something, he had that wicked smirk who could even tell her to strip down, but he wouldn't do that right? Or would he?
Why was this guy soo handsome? Was one of the prime question in her mind, but then she also had the question for why the heck was she always soo affected by his closeness, it was like she's a Velcro and he's her other piece, she shook her head and silently wishing he stop with his advances towards her, why the hell had she given her words, why should she always mess it up, why did she even think wandering in the lion's den would be a good idea
As for him, he could smell fear, no matter how brave was she pretending to be... Suraj could see the little swear beads sprouting on her forehead, he carelessly bent his face to her ears, smirking as he noticed her clenched fist and without further due he whispered his wish to her in a deep husky voice, one that he din't do on purpose but her presence caused it to him, "Be my hoe"
Three words which didn't only shook her but also those who were watching them, "Yaar I told you, there's too much sexual tension between them" Jagan whispered to Adi who only glared at him in return shutting him up
A swift movement and she pushed Suraj off, raising her hands to meet his cheeks, but damn he had good reflex, her arm was trapped between his hands before it could even touch him
"How dare you??? I did say anything, but my anything din't mean I will put my dignity in jeopardy!!! You're a beyond imagination jerk" her eyes widely opened, still in unbelievable mode, his voice and words repeating in her head, causing those uncontrollable red flush on her cheeks, but did that cause any different to him? NO, instead he had an I-knew-it kinda of look
"See I told you, you can't even take your parent's swear seriously, am not the jerk here, you are, you said you'd do anything to prove you're sorry, and I asked you something very simple" he smirked purposely running his eyes all along on her body , he was doing it to trouble her, but inspite of all the hatred he had for her, he could feel his actions stirring a rage of passion inside him
"Anything never meant being someone hoe, specially someone like you" She could swear she was about to cry but then his smirk widened and eyes filled with amusement
" I don't understand how someone like you can assume I'd be asking you to sleep with me, Am The Suraj, I don't need fat meats, I need hot chicks, and I get them whenever I want" Each of his words were meant to hurt her and he could tell it were doing just that
She awkwardly looked down at herself, was she fat? No way, she was an athlete, yes she was chubby but that was her nature, anywho she never tried to be the zero sized kinda girl like her sister, how can they even starve on leaves? She could only shudder at that thought " Well if being fat gets me away from your filthy junk then I guess I shall get a few more pounds" She retorted feeling her confidence now rushing back
The chuckles from his mates irritated his ears, was he insulting her or getting himself insulted by her? And he said they very next thing coming to his mind without evening judging up the consequences
"Filthy? Alright, then Adi get Miss chakor here some clothes, she'll be my date as a compensation to offending me" His voice dripping with sarcasm
"Date??" Was the rhyming surprised response of the three
"Yess, she shall see my grandeur' I will take her to the ball of tonight" he answered in an almost too real French accent which angered Chakor harder, why did he had to be handsome, educated , strong but a jerk??
The guys were shocked but they could see where this was going, "Are you planning to get her killed?" Adi retorted angrily clearly suggesting to Chakor not to go with this plan
"It's how the viewer sees it, so if you want my forgiveness, get ready by 8 in whatever dress you're given or else you can get the hell out of my place by midnight, I don't except you coming so saying good bye in advance, Goodbye Miss chakor, hopefully our paths won't cross again, I'd hate to have your blood redden my hands" He said leaving the room knowing he'd rendered her speechless and knowing he'd own the last word, the smirk never leaving his face
She'd promise something over her parents but she could just leave, there was no way she was going anywhere with Suraj and the frightened looks of his friends were clear sign that the suppossed ball wasn't fairytale theme, she gave the guys a last look who were innerly struggling whether to yell at her and ask her to leave this place before she gets killed or stay quiet and watch her get killed
Was around 5 , Adi came to drop the soo called dress, "I suggest you don't go" There he said it against Suraj's rule but he said it also because he knew even Suraj wouldn't want Chakor there, he was just blinded by his anger
She din't reply she simply took the dress, opening it out of curiosity, it was a long black dress , a low cleavage, a long cut from the knee, and body fitted until the hips "Seriously???" The heck did he think of her? A prostitute but then she managed to sum up a conclusion, he was doing it on purpose, on purpose for her to deny and leave like a coward
Suraj looked at his watch all well donned up in his formal suit, just two minutes were left for minute hand to settle on twelve and hour hand on eight , he smirked to himself knowing very well , his plan was pinned to the point
He shook his head wondering why the hell was he even waiting for it to be right, Chakor wasn't gonna come, she was way too much of a loser, and once again he was right, he turned towards his car, miffed he couldn't use his truck for the formal night
"still one minute for eight" her voice somehow stopped him causing him to take a huge breath wondering if he had heard right, turning quicker than a spin ball, his eyes took the scene that unfolded infront of him
Standing infront of him was the girl he was soo set assure wouldn't come with him, wearing the very same dress he instructed Adi to get for her, every single odds were in his favour then how??? his eyes trailed from her feet to her gown which exposed little of her fair skin toned legs through the side cut out, instead of exposing little to imagination she used her graceful walk to make herself look desirable instead of hoe'ish, the body fitting dress capturing her curves and her hairs falling on her shoulder covering the spaghetti straps , her face catching all attention with just a tinge of make up which he wondered where did she get from
It was her turn to smirk, she walked to him grabbing his hands and looked into his watch, it was exact 8 o'clock, his expression yelled out he wasn't expected her, least like this.
"Shall we leave Mr Suraj?" A winning smile gracing her lips which had Suraj captured
"what do you think you're doing?" He asked her having now regained his posture, it was like a momentary electric shock
"What you told me? Do you anyhow suffer from multiple personality disorder? You told me to accompany you to prove am guilty for having had talked ill am doing, now what? You wanna back out?" She wished innerly he'd , she wore that dress and that expression after loads of conscious convincing but she wasn't one to defy Suraj if he once took his words back and told her to go back inside the mansion
"Suraj? Think about it man , tell her to go back" Jagan whispered to him , he felt like to facepalm himself, those two were like two deadly calamities crashed together
"Nahh!!! Who am I to stop if she wanna come besides she's to never get the chance to be my date, it'll be a pity date"
She rolled her eyes waiting for him to open the car doors for her, but no, as expected he walked to his seat and sat, she opened the passenger seat , sat and banged the door loud, muttering under her breath, "chivalry died a merciful death"
"Aint vivaan to be chivalrous" he said as he started the car engine
"Din't expect any better from you, even if a jerk atleast Vivaan knew how to treat a women" she said angrily pulling the dress over her knee attempting to cover it, why do they cut these dresses soo high' she cursed in her mind
Hearing her praising Vivaan ignited a burning feeling in his chest, he ignored the feeling and now that he thinks, was taking Chakor with him a good idea, she seemed way too innocent for those kinda people just by a mere thigh show she kept on shifting uncomfortably on her seat, he took a long breath and scrolled the window screen by her side down, as she felt the soft wind bounce against her face, she immediately felt relaxed, she looked at Suraj his eyes were fixed on the road, arms flexed towards the steering wheel, she could never understand Suraj, as many guys tried to approach her in past but none was like Suraj, he felt like an impossible puzzle
He stopped the car infront of what seemed to be a luxurious hotel, a place Chakor din't see a guy like Suraj to fit in but then he was unpredictable , she waited for him to tell her what to do next
"Listen, I...no matter how I hate you I wouldn't want you to a pitiful death" that wasn't what he intended to say but it came out as such, she was confused but she remained silent wanting him to continue with the soo golden speech, "alright, if you actually want your life miss chakor not that I care, three things keep in mind, first, don't stare" He said as she was actually staring at him causing her to run her fingers in her hairs pretending like she wasn't and just as she was about to speak he interrupted her saying, " second don't ask questions and third just for your sake stay besides me no matter what happens"
In Response she simply rolled her eyes, if this was soo dangerous that she had to stay always besides him and follow rules why did he drag her with him
He quickly jumped out of the car and rushed to open the door for her, shocked she was for sure but she masked it as she saw people coming towards them, all dressed in formal wears, She watched as he plastered a fake smile on his face greeting the guests and automatically his hands went on her back as if telling them she was with him
At the entrance there was two guards , Chakor was disgusted how they rubbed off the woman under the terms of security' she froze under Suraj's touch wondering if it'd be same for her but as they entered, she could feel fear emitting from the guards allowing Suraj and she in without even a touch over her hair
She looked at him with admiration dragging his attention to her, "What???" He asked angrily , he hated the mushy sights girls gave but then she rolled her eyes again and answered "I was giving you way more credits than you deserve, forgive me your highness"
Yeps definitely not like the mushy girls ...simply a witch'his mind yelled at him
The lighting inside were luxurious but the dim light of the mansion made them feel safer than there it felt like something badly sinister in the air and just like he felt , Suraj saw the person he expected the least infront of him, his eyes fixed on Chakor, the man who ruined his family, the man who actually defiled his mother when he was just in the next room, he felt like the ground slipped from his feet , his face pale like he's been sucked off all his blood and his grip over Chakor's back tightened, "NO WAY" was all what slipped from his mouth