OS: Words and Promises. - III

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res.
Checked out the forum after a long time and this is just...the best everrr!! Each instalment in the series is better than the previous idk how you do it!!

Will come back to do some more fangirling ASAP!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res.
Will unres asap, aur agar na hua toh maaf kar dena please!šŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is fantabulous, amazing, superb, excellent šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘šŸ¼...OK I am out of words
Gosh Nimmi there is such jaadu in whatever you pen down dear lady...you never fail to leave me dazed and wanting more to read and not stop
You have really brought your dream alive in this story, coz everyone who knows you and reads your posts, know that this is something you have always wanted to see happening in the actual show, but alas...
With this story you have the freedom to experiment and I am just loving it ā¤ļø

Plsss continue whenever you have the free time, coz you surely left us on a cliffhanger here 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just wow!! šŸ‘
You are an incredibly amazing wordsmith & a genius authoršŸ‘šŸ¼
Its really difficult to write praises for your works coz i always fall short of words.


Loving all your Sukor fictions. They are way way better than what unfolds on our screen. i feel it will be very difficult for chakor to keep resisting givenn that even the opposition party is now a SuKor shipperšŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Exceptional piecešŸ‘!!Marvellous writing,I was so caught up in it, that when it ended, my heart brokešŸ’”. I wanted it to go on till forever!I adore Suraj here ... strong, feisty, determined and above all - devilish😳! I want THIS Suraj in the show, then perhaps I'll become a regular viewer againšŸ¤”...Is there any chance of u updating this dailyšŸ˜‰? At least here - Imli isn't in between Sukor and I don't end up with a migraine ... instead I smile throughout the entire story😃.
Loved every bit of the OS ... it made my day!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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And My brightest shining star is back and HOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tu woh osh ki boond hai, jo tapte registaan me bhi thandak de jaaye.

NimmišŸ¤—
Your words are like an addiction. The more I read, the more I crave. It always leaves me with wanting more. "Teri taarif mein kya likhun aye jaadugar. Jitni karun, utni hi kam hai. "

I am absolutely in love with this Suraj. The Suraj of our dreams.

The deepest, darkest yearning of a woman is to have someone who would love her madly, insanely.
Jo har had paar kar jaaye.
Jo 'behad' ki bhi had tod jaaye.
Aisa ho mera dilbar,
Jo khuda se mere liye ladh jaaye.
Aur jo taqdeer ka rukh mod kar,
Mujhe apne haathon ki lakiron mein likh jaaye.

ā¤ļøā¤ļø

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally you update Yeee ...my waiting is over and you bang on with it...

Truly fantastic, fabulous, amazing, marvellous job you done...I love love love it...Chakor please cut the crap of imli imli...I know her questions valid at some time but all the time this is like headache for me and what a smartly move suraj babu you become leader now...well you have all leader qualities but this was awesome to win chakor's love...go on...

Arz kia hai...

Main ruthi tum bhi Ruth gaye,
Fir manayega kaun...??

Aaj daraar hai kal khaai hogi,
Fir bharega kaun...??

Main chup tum bhi chup,
Iss chuppi ko fir todega kaun...??

Har choti moti baat ko laga loge dill se,
To rishta fir nibhayega kaun...??

Dukhi main bhi or tum bhi bichadkar,
Socho fir haath badhayega kaun...??

Naa main raazi naa tum raazi,
Fir maaf kar k badappan dikhayega kaun...??

Doob jayega dill yaadon main dill kabhi,
To fir dhairya bandhayega kaun...???

Ek Ahem mere ek tumhare bhitar bhi,
Iss Ahem ko fir harayega kaun...??

Zindgi kiss ko mili hai sada k liye,
Fir Inn lamho main akela reh jayega kaun...??

Mund li dono main se agar kisi dinn ek ne bhi aankhe...
To kal iss baat par fir pachtayega kaun...??

-Khushi...



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg this. Is. AWESOME agar aisa huva naa then oh god I want this to happen suraj to woo chakor haayee suraj back to his old self hatred hayee
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aradh_27

Res.

Checked out the forum after a long time and this is just...the best everrr!! Each instalment in the series is better than the previous idk how you do it!!

Will come back to do some more fangirling ASAP!



meri Alpha.
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SO good to see ya aradhana.
gee.. thankh ku. thankh ku.

will wait for you old girl. come back choon.
phir se jhappis.

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