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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
This was amazing maithu...
Chakor is badaas here and Suraj is ACP...not bad not bad...I like hum...like there conversation it was also superb...

Tum aa jao meri kalam ki syaahi bankar...,
Main tumhe apni zindgi k har panne main utaar doon...!!!

Thanks Kushi!

A new Suraj and Chakor!

Glad u liked it!

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SilverLove.

@SilverLove.

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

hi maithu as always the first part amazing

great conversation between sukor👏

and suraj getting jealous of that boy was cute scene.

waiting for ur next part😃

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Sruti

@vs215blooms

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Maithu... It was fabulous... So our suraj s ACP... He suits well... Chakor s singer...😛 loving it... Their convo s simply amazing...suraj's jealous towards d kid...awww... Beautifully written...👏 Waiting for d update...

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: tapaswinee00
it was amazing . Loved the way u described their first meeting

Thank u!

At first, I didn't know what to make them speak but once started it went on!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-
Great start,really interesting,eager for the next part!

Thanks dear!

Will try to update on time!😊

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Good start Maithili...😊

WORKOUT....huh...well,which girl would mind such a session with the sexy...😉

ok,so this time an arranged marriage,sounds interesting...

their first meeting was cool..😎

But please Maithu,I want my 'besharam' Suraj,with naughty one-liners😉

Good job,waiting for the next update..👍🏼

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: pershial
hi maithu as always the first part amazing
great conversation between sukor👏
and suraj getting jealous of that boy was cute scene.

waiting for ur next part😃

Thanks dear!

Hope the next part is also up to this level.

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: vs215blooms
Maithu... It was fabulous... So our suraj s ACP... He suits well... Chakor s singer...😛 loving it... Their convo s simply amazing...suraj's jealous towards d kid...awww... Beautifully written...👏 Waiting for d update...

Thanks for ur compliments and appreciation!

I can never forget his intro scene in police getup!😉

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: KUTUR
Good start Maithili...😊
WORKOUT....huh...well,which girl would mind such a session with the sexy...😉

ok,so this time an arranged marriage,sounds interesting...
their first meeting was cool..😎

But please Maithu,I want my 'besharam' Suraj,with naughty one-liners😉

Good job,waiting for the next update..👍🏼

Well Thanks a lot buddy!

You see he uses only terms from police dictionary like encounter, investigation, workout...😃

Here I tried to make Chakor a little naughty, only a little.

Will bring naughty Suraj back in some of my other work for sure dear.

Thanks once again!