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Kavya

@Kavi.Kapoor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Gosh - I smiled a lot during this (obviously I "LIKEd" as well😉).The characters here are completely different from the show and it was a delightful change. Do PM me when u update the next part, dying to read it!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: srividhya68
wow...awesome
loved it
suraj is super naughty
chakor a kitten..funny
cont soon

Thanks yaar!

Chakor is so shy shy girl.😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: gibbu
Freshly interesting story.👍🏼
Waiting for 27.03...

Your Suraj is so naughty...😉
how is Chskor going to handle him.. .

Thank u!

I wanted to show this naughty Suraj, luckily it clicked!

Chakor is no less!

U will find it in next update.

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Jasmene

@Chashmish786

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

This is something very new and very exciting I liked the dining table scene ...Ahhh the naughty, naughty suraj babu I really liked this part ...Great work sweetheart and your writing skills are absolutely worth admiring ..Thank you for such beautiful story...Looking forward to 2nd part 😳

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: _era_
Its so sweet & cute.
made me smile.
Plz continue soon.

Happy that it brought a smile on ur face!

Started writing next part, will post it on 27/03 (a small pack for my birthday).

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av131

@av131

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Superb update Maithu !! Compensated for No Sukor On Weekend.Advance happy birthday !!!!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: pershial
Hi maithu ur TS is brilliant,super,mind blowing,extraordinary no words to describe how amazing it was but pls make it as an FF pls pls pls pls
i really love it very much i kept smiling throughout the FF and when i imagine everything i felt it so real

i super excited for ur second part but my only request is pls make it as a FF pls pls

dont think i am crazy but really i am little crazy about chakor

i love this naughty suraj (i love this suraj very much no words to describe how much i love this)

and i love this chakor who hesistates i like this kind of chakor (pls dont change this chakor keep her character like this )
to me i love chakor who hesistates for everything i dont like her too bold(lil bold is ok but i dont even want that i lov this very much) (for me i love it i dont know about others)

ur presentation is really very nice highlighting the areas correctly everything in ur TS is so perfect .

above all ur TS is simply amazing...

i hope u consider my request.

eagerly waiting for next part

Hi dear,

I'm so happy that u loved it!

Thanks for ur lovely words.

Sorry that I can't fulfil ur wish as I have plenty of ideas for a whole bundle of 10 os/ts.

There is already a FF on holding which I update rarely so thought to finish that before starting any FF.

In my future stories you can find different kind of combination of Suraj and Chakor.

Hope you will like them too.

I will try my level best to keep a smile on ur face with my writing.

Thanks once again for encouraging words.

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
This is super interesting! KN is so sweet here I cannot digest it LOL. Update soon and PM me again Maithu <3
-Sanu

Thanks Sanu dear!

I didn't want a vilain here, so thought to make KN a sweet person!

So tried to keep the story sweet and simple and I think I succeed!😉

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse
Wow maithili this was so refreshing story...very very nice...
Love sukor here but for me surprise package is KN he is so sweet uski baato se to muje diabetes ho jayegi 😆 awww kitten so cute 😉 well love at first sight wala concept I don't believe in that...ajeeb hai yaar... But your update was fabulous...👍🏼

Hi Kushi,

Me too love this Sukor so much!

KN is a friendly figure here. Moreover he is the reason for Suraj's sugary names for Chakor.

I don't believe too in Love at First sight, but wanted to try my hand in it!

Hope it's not a mess!

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-
Gosh - I smiled a lot during this (obviously I "LIKEd" as well😉).The characters here are completely different from the show and it was a delightful change. Do PM me when u update the next part, dying to read it!

Yuppie!

Thank u dear! (I know that u can't like each time u smile😛)

Will PM u on monday!

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