SuKor OS : I don't hate you anymore

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

#guttermind activated

Oh dhinka chika dhinka chika

Sorry to burst your bubble but it's not adult this time 😆 *evil laugh as your dirty dreams shatter*

I mean, I do have to control myself sometimes with you around.🤣 as you are still young (mind ki baat alag hai)😃

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Sorry to burst your bubble but it's not adult this time 😆 *evil laugh as your dirty dreams shatter*

I mean, I do have to control myself sometimes with you around.🤣 as you are still young (mind ki baat alag hai)😃

Oh well...anything from you could cheer me up like this😳. I wanted to read OSs this Sunday...but apart frm Akhila...no one updated😭. So was loiking forward to this..

Woh baat alag hai I wud have jumped if its adult...🤣 but no worries...m still very much happy that I am going to get one from your side😃

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-
this was beautiful... do continue!

Thank you so so so muchhh!!😃

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sriarshi

@sriarshi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Beautiful chotu.. loved it.. how beautifully u wrote their inner feelings👏..loved how chakor thinking about Suraj left her dreams.. how Suraj know it..he don't want her to sacrifice her dreams For her.. ❤️..hope one day we can see some situations like this on Sukor

Continue it.. waiting for next update

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sriarshi
Beautiful chotu.. loved it.. how beautifully u wrote their inner feelings👏..loved how chakor thinking about Suraj left her dreams.. how Suraj know it..he don't want her to sacrifice her dreams For her.. ❤️..hope one day we can see some situations like this on Sukor
Continue it.. waiting for next update

Thank you so much Sri. I am so happy that you liked it🤗

In this stage Suraj and Chakor are like this only. They care for each other so much but dont realise it. I hope for that too. I will update soon.😃

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

it was lovely
loved it so much
plz do write a second part

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: srividhya68
it was lovely
loved it so much
plz do write a second part

Hello vidya. I am glad you commented.

I will write and post a second part soon.

Thanks a lot.

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Sent through PM by parboni:

Hello Sahas,A nice OS you wrote there.So genuine and apt in portraying Sukor's feelings.I wish you continue soon.But I wanted to ask one thing.Did Chakor not put those papers inside the drawer?Then how did those papers fall on the floor due to wind?

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sahashrabdi

@..chotu..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ..chotu..
Sent through PM by parboni:
Hello Sahas,A nice OS you wrote there.So genuine and apt in portraying Sukor's feelings.I wish you continue soon.But I wanted to ask one thing.Did Chakor not put those papers inside the drawer?Then how did those papers fall on the floor due to wind?

I was unmindful of the fact dear. I am sorry.

Thanks a lot for commenting and well mentioning this thing. I have edited it now.😊

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parboni

@parboni

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#30

A big thank you for considering my PM so seriously. 🤗 And a big waala sorry for picking out your fault like an annoying examiner. 😭 Nicely edited.:) Will be waiting for the next update.

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