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Posted: 8 years ago
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Just a little something I wrote very quickly during a study break because the idea refused to let go of my brain.
I have some angsty Suraj-Chakor scenes in mind, which I may write if time permits and the response is encouraging.

Do hit the like button and leave a comment if you enjoyed the read!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It is fentastic dear...loved it...plz do continue. ..I want to know Chakor's reaction for this. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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aaru this one was awesome👏. actually loved it when suraj reacted to what kn said about chakor!!
suraj bandhua😭

waiting for more when u have the time😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res.

Sorry for the late unres.😆

This was kind of an eye-opener for Suraj, seeing and experiencing what a beast his so called father is. He is not beast incarnated, he is the monster himself. Threatening to kill his own wife, to harm his step-son and his wife, to sell his own daughter-in-law, to enslave his own blood. Every time KN touches a new low and our hatred for him touches a new high.

How Suraj could not control himself as soon as he heard Chakor's name. The bad memories resurfaced, clawing at his heart. I am sure he must be wondering, how was I so blind to not see the reality of my father? He is not power hungry, no, he is plain mad.

And he proceeds to accept slavery, the hot iron brand on his chest, on his heart. For Chakor? For her freedom? He doesn't know, could not understand, because the pain was too much to bear. The physical, the mental, the emotional.

Aru, you always write in such reality. I write in fantasy, dreams and sugar, you in truth, nightmares and a punch in the gut. A good, a great punch that is. And I am always speechless. I can't write in proper words how I liked something so I try to incorporate it in my own words, hoping that the author understands what I understood. Understood?😆

-Sanu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderfully written Aradhna. Suraj a bandhua is going to be painful. 😔
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing! Pls continue it dear!
Want to know chakor & Imvan reactions!
Loved the part where KN says everyone's name and finally Chakor (he never tought that his son will react for her name)!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved how he reacted only when Kn talked about Chakor.
Keep it up girl 👏



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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was brilliant...the interaction between Suraj and KN. And omg the way Suraj couldn't hold it in and reacted when KN mentioned Chakor. And then the last part 😭 Such a great read though.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was amazing! A sad read, but a great one! I literally could imagine the entire thing in front of me! This seriously makes me question whether ever since the beginning, Suraj had done everything out of revenge than any other emotion. 😲

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