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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

First thing first Maithu

I am spell bound how your change your hats amazingly without any flaw in thoughts. Your drawing board must be best. No mincing of words or mixing of thoughts.

was sweating with XRH and lo comes this platonic one.

A different KN! liked his genuine feelings and hope he sees his sister through her eyes.

Just loved the simple yet the ying yang equation of SUKOR.

really like Suraj's confidence about bringing her into the space and also he is very watchful about her.

Infact indirectly he is trying to emotionally blackmail(well this is bit a harsh word) make her accept KN's proposal but as the ethic girl she is right but am sure she will end up falling prey for the sweetness of the father and son.. (will need to wait and watch)

Hindsight SR seems to have his own agenda though claiming to be worried about the siblings !!! Is he hahahaha

lovely one

waiting for the next updates

Thanks a lot dear!

You don't know how much I'm happy that I finished XRH!
This is the only story until now which took all these time!
Yeah there is this TTW but it's a FF but XRH, OS took more than 1 month.

So in that mood I wrote this LOL
The thing is I just get to put the characters' coat when I write their line, in that way it's easy.
If I write as a 3rd person, just watching them, there I wouldn't mingling with them, so can't make them grow from one phase to the other.

I knew everyone will remark this KN!
And I think we will never get a good KN on show!
Hope to see him one day in a really good way.

Glad you like the Sukor equation!
You caught him dear!
He was actually blackmailing her in his own way LOL

Hahaha You and your theory of SR's agenda over the siblings!
I don't want to say anything here!

Thanks a ton once again buddy!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Eagerly waiting for ttw finally it was updated
Interesting update
Waiting for next update
😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Missed TTW a lot! Thanks for updating.
KN is soft hearted here, he misses his sister and regrets the past.
Poor Suraj, he's trying to keep distance from Chakor, yet seeks her company.
Loved Sukor nok jhok.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arena99

Eagerly waiting for ttw finally it was updated

Interesting update
Waiting for next update
😊

Sorry dear for making you all wait!
Thanks a lot for the lovely welcome after this big gap!
Will be updating soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Missed TTW a lot! Thanks for updating.

KN is soft hearted here, he misses his sister and regrets the past.
Poor Suraj, he's trying to keep distance from Chakor, yet seeks her company.
Loved Sukor nok jhok.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

I too missed writing it!
That's y continuing it during break as I will be going with flow and nothing to invent! LOL

The way you sais the attraction of Suraj towards Chakor, it reminds me of our Suraj who comes just to flirt with her, or pull her legs in the beginning stage.
Glad you loved their convo!

Will try to be back sooner possible!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello!


How are you all?
Again an update for this story!

Link to the previous part: Part 17 : Yes or No?
Happy reading!

*****

Part 18: Drama King & Queen


"Di! Did you pack my bangle bag in any of the suitcase?" Imli asked sitting on the bed tired.
"I pity Vivaan for marring you! Always asking for your things without putting any efforts in searching! Did you help me to pack! By searching for your things, I just packed 1/3 of my things and I'm still searching your long lost green shawl."
"Di! Stop complaining and search! I will help you pack!"
"I can already see that you are helping me a lot by sitting!"
"By the way Di, how come you got convinced to come with me! You know how much happy I'm!" she hugged her sister who was searching the shawl by the bed side table.

"I'm really happy that Imli's sister is coming with us!" Vivaan to his elder brother while putting the last shirt of his inside the luggage.
"Yeah! It's good!" Suraj said as he walked towards the main door murmuring "I only knew how she agreed! And thakfully she agreed."
The brother on the other side of the wall.

***** FLASHBACK *****

"Yes Miss!"
"Can I know what you said to your brother that he is making my sister to beg me to come along with her?"
"I didn't say anything!"
"Oh really!"
"With whatever conversation I remember having with my bro, I think I didn't say anything regarding you!"
"I see!" and door of his cabin flew open with Chakor standing there in a kali avatar.
"I know that I'm your friend but it would have been good if you knocked the door of the Dean. You see sometimes he might be in some other avatar!" he said with his signature smirk just to receive the ball she was holding few milliseconds before "Oh oh hold on my angry friend!" catching the ball.
Cutting the call she was in, she entered the room and closed the door.

"Please take a seat!"
"No thanks!" crossing her hands over her chest.
"So let's do a stand up meeting then!" putting the ball on the table he got up and went to be face to face with her "Tell me!"
"I heard you brother talking to my sister!"
"How indecent of you to listen to a couple's conversation!" he made a face.
"Keep quiet and listen!" pointing fingers at him which he took hold with his index and bend it.
"No over powering each other!"
She took back her hand and said "I was passing by room yesterday evening when I heard Imli say 'Vivu! I tried my best, she isn't listening! Tell your brother to do it. He may have a better idea!'" again folding her hands "So now tell me! What should I get out of it!"

"Wow wow wow cool down lady cat! I don't need to plan something to get you there if I want" his words came out as he stepped closer to her while she bent backward as she was standing near the couch with her legs stuck to it "I just said Dad wish is our responsibility to Vivan! If he is asking your sister, go and talk to him and especially to your sister!" and again a step and she landed on the couch in a sitting position "I just wished to make my dad happy and I know that you are not ready because your prestige will be at loose" and he bent a bit, coming face to face with her "With you or without you my father will be happy as he is getting a daughter in form of Imli and not you!" and he stood straight "I'm your friend but accusing me of things I didn't do is not acceptable."
"You are behaving like the old Suraj I met the 1st time!"
"I was and I'm still the same person!"
"No! You were threatening me few seconds before and let me tell you! I'm not scared!" she stood.
"Oh really! I saw the expression on your face! They were spectacular!"
"You know what I wanted to come for at least your father but now" coming in front of him " You are making me regret my decision!"

"You see! Even now you are thinking about you! My dad wasn't asking for your money or wealth, he wished for your presence in his house which has no lights since years!" and sadness made his voice tremble in the end "It's not charity Chakor!"
"I... I'm sorry Suraj! I... I just thought that you" holding his hand as she saw the sadness cross in his eyes and voice "I'm sorry!" and he lifted his eyes have an unknown eye-lock for both of them which was broken by Chakor "I'm coming to live with Papa!" with a smile and it just made him smile.

Not only she accepted to go with them but he also accepted his father as hers with her last word.

***** PRESENT *****

"Love you Di!"
"Love you too my sweet sister!"

"All packed bro!"
"Just put your luggage in the car while I will go and get their bag inside too!" pointing to the wall which separate both the place.

"Where are you going Di?" as Imli got inside the car on the back.
"Just a minute! I forgot an important"
"How can girls always forget their things?" Suraj asked from driver's seat.
"Bro!" Vivaan chided as Chakor's face heat up.
"If you read researches, men tend to forget more than women." coming to the side of his window "One I was packing Imli's bag. Two, I thought to it at the end as it's fragile and important. And three, you created a big mess by pouring coffee and I was cleaning it!" and she turned and left from there.
"She has always something to tell! How did you live with her Imli?" he shook his head as the couple on the back smiled seeing their elder siblings behaving like kids.

Taking the big wrapped article with frames visible on the side, she exited and locked the door, making her path towards the car.

*****

Thanks for reading buddies!
Next update will be soon(Next week)!
How was it?
Let me know this through your COMMENTS and LIKES

Next part: Part 19 : Welcome home!

Take care buddies!

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update👏
Loved sukor fight, they are so childish😆
Suraj's emotional talk made chakor to agree 😊
The packing portion was funny😆
Waiting for next

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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing update!
It's great to see Sukor bickering again.
Loved seeing old Suraj, he was comfortable around her more than in the previous part and he's happier.
So it was Suraj who managed to convince Chakor 😊.
Looking forward to the next part.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi di
How r u ?
Talking to u after so many days , may be months .
Ok coming to this part of ur FF

it was really very amazing and wonderful .
I was missing this story very much .
this story is really getting very very very very interesting .
yeah i like this suraj and his lady cat very much .
i loved sukors conversation very much .
every part in this story is awesome .(i dont know where to start ) and not only in this part ,in the whole story from their first meeting to now every scene was aweosme .As a chakorian surajs POV of chakor is something which i really love to read . And that was in this FF which made me love this FF even more (i happy that chakor didnt fall in love with suraj soon and pls dont make her fall for him so soon ).


The best thing in ur FF is
it has some cute moments between sukor ,some funny moments
which makes me smile . sukor cute fights . And many more things which makes this FF a unique one .


Now i am eagerly waiting for next part (i cant even describe how curious i am to find what is going to happen next )

One question

Will u end this FF ? 😔


Love U and Ur stories😃


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Posted: 7 years ago
Haha
Just loved this plain vannila...

Loved the way he convinced her and so cute.

The siblings bickering was a breeze.

Waiting for the update

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