FF : These Three Words (Part 35 - 19/11 Updated - P: 79)

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#321

Hi sis..

Hw r u?

Sorry for a late rply..

Both part 17 and 18 are awesome..

Sukor conversation r very funny as well as superb...

I loved tis two parts a lot..

Eagerly waiting for next update sis..

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update👏
Loved sukor fight, they are so childish😆
Suraj's emotional talk made chakor to agree 😊
The packing portion was funny😆
Waiting for next

Thanks you so much dear!

Glad you loved their moments and found the sis funny!

Agree yaar!

They are so childish!

He just blackmailed her emotionally dear LOL

Will try to be back soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing update!
It's great to see Sukor bickering again.
Loved seeing old Suraj, he was comfortable around her more than in the previous part and he's happier.
So it was Suraj who managed to convince Chakor 😊.
Looking forward to the next part.

Thanks buddy!

Yup!

Finally they are back on track!

Sukor just make me crazy here along with them LOL

Let's see how it goes!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: pershial
Hi di
How r u ?
Talking to u after so many days , may be months .
Ok coming to this part of ur FF

it was really very amazing and wonderful .
I was missing this story very much .
this story is really getting very very very very interesting .
yeah i like this suraj and his lady cat very much .
i loved sukors conversation very much .
every part in this story is awesome .(i dont know where to start ) and not only in this part ,in the whole story from their first meeting to now every scene was aweosme .As a chakorian surajs POV of chakor is something which i really love to read . And that was in this FF which made me love this FF even more (i happy that chakor didnt fall in love with suraj soon and pls dont make her fall for him so soon ).

The best thing in ur FF is
it has some cute moments between sukor ,some funny moments
which makes me smile . sukor cute fights . And many more things which makes this FF a unique one .

Now i am eagerly waiting for next part (i cant even describe how curious i am to find what is going to happen next )

One question

Will u end this FF ? 😔

Love U and Ur stories😃

Hello dear!

I'm all good!

How are you? H is studies going?

Yup!

It's been months we last interacted!

Aww thanks for the sweet words dear!

It brought a smile on my face reading your comment.

I think we all love wild cat LOL

Glad you loved and enjoyed their convo and moments.

And I'm really that I made your wish come true here without my knowledge.

The thig is this FF is a micture of all other stories experience with POVs, thoughts, phone covos,...

It will be a long time for them to be together dear!

Few things has to happen before and I think 4-5+ parts will be in between the starting of her feelings LOL(I'm not sure!)

And I will try to have those cute moments here and there whenever possible.

I will not end this FF for now!

Even this year may end but not this FF with the speed I'm going LOL

This FF will have minimum 25+ parts. Max, I don't know dear!

Thanks for the love!

And love you too dear!

Take care!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Haha
Just loved this plain vannila...

Loved the way he convinced her and so cute.

The siblings bickering was a breeze.

Waiting for the update

Thanks a lot buddy!

Glad you enjoyed this part!

Yeah! Finally he convinced her(A difficult task to convince her yaar! I just spend minutes and minutes to find how to make Suraj convince her LOL And the idea is emotional blackmailing or ...)

I too love these siblings here.

Hope they showed something like this.

Will try to be back soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Hi sis..
Hw r u?
Sorry for a late rply..
Both part 17 and 18 are awesome..
Sukor conversation r very funny as well as superb...
I loved tis two parts a lot..
Eagerly waiting for next update sis..

Hello dear!

I'm all good!

How are you?

No need to say sorry dear!

It's my pleasure that you are reading and responding!

Glad you loved these 2 parts!

Luckily I feel like I brought the story fully back to track with all of your comments!

Will try to update soon!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#327

Hello!

How are you all?

I'm happy that the last 2 parts got good reponses with the return of SUKOR!

And from now on there will be Sukor but also others.

And it will be like this for few more parts!

Link to the previous part: Part 18 : Drama King & Queen

Happy reading!

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Part 19: Welcome home!

"I'm happy that you decided to be with us!" KN said in his emotional voice, holding Chakor's both hand as he welcomed the sisters along with his sons who are getting the bags down, one with a happy smile while the one has a smirk plastered on his lips hearing his father.

"I'm happy to be part of your family!"

"Our family!" he corrected.

"Yes Didi! Our family!" Imli beamed putting her hand on her sister's shoulder by side hugging her.

"Rooms for everyone is ready! You both will be sharing the room until wedding and the room will be all yours." he smiled addressing the sisters.

"Thank you Pa... papa!" "Thank you Papa!" both the sisters in their own way.

"Nice to hear it!" he smiled and turned as he held both the sisters' hands in his "Come! Let's go! They will get it!" and pulled them along with him in an affectionate way.

"Getting his daughter, he forgot his sons!" Suraj said it wontedly making a sad face, in a way his father could hear him.

"You felt it only now! I knew it in restaurant itself! Don't worry bro! You take care me and I will take care of youuu huhuhu!" in a cry tone, putting his hand over his chest.

KN turned towards his sons with a stern face "Stop blabbering and get the luggages in quickly!" and turned away from them with a smile as he is waiting to hear his younger son while the sisters have a smile lingered on their lips.

"What is this inequality papa? We are your sons! And not workers! I'm not moving a thing from hereon!" folding his hands as he winked at his brothers.

"Stop the drama and do the work quick son!" and they entered the mansion "And ahaan! Come fast! Your Girija mausi(aunt) has made superb dishes that will be available for only few minutes!" and he smiled at both the sisters as he brought them to the hall with sophisticated furniture.

"We have no respect in this house bro!" Vivaan said shaking his head while Suraj smiled seeing his brother's drama.

"Make it fast, else we will have not even a grain because of your laziness."

"Yeah yeah! Imli alone can finish everything there!" he sped his work without remarking his brother's soundless mocking laugh as he didn't get anything else than food.

"I don't how you both are going to live alone while both of you are behaving like kids most of the time." Suraj made his remark as he took two bags in each hand.

"Who is saying this!" Vivaan murmured.

"Said something!"

"No nothing! Just signing happily for being the worker of this house. And especially along with you!"

Suraj shook his head and entered the house to see the girls standing in front of his mother's painting with flower garland on it.

"Suraj has the same features as her."

"Hmmm And Vivan has her character!" KN added to what Chakor said without her knowledge.

"So who am I looking like?" Vivaan ashed entering the hall.

"No one!" Imli replied.

"Exactly no one! You are a different specie of Rajvanshi family!" Suraj pulled his brother leg for which the gained giggles and killing stares at the same time.

"Now it looks like home!" KN said emotionally making all four of them to stop their actions and get close to him.

"Papa! I think we have talked enough! If you want chat with your girls, we are going for dinner. If we wait Imli will finish everything even before I start!"

"Yoouuu!" she made actions showing him that she will deal with him alone and he is going to regret it while KN chided his younger son when both the elder siblings were smiling.

"I think Girija mausi will be angry if we make her wait more!" Suraj said eyeing his father, showing the angry stare of Imli and the returning glare of Vivaan.

"You are right! Let's go!" and Vivaan and Imli broke their small starring competition.

"I'm always right!" he mumbled to himself with an acheiving smirk.

"Of course not!" Chakor whispered to him as she was the one close to him and the only one who heard what he said.

"Always yes!" And she stopped in her track as he too stopped.

"You are arrogant!" she whispered while others moved towards the table not knowing the commotion behind them.

"And what about you? Always poking your nose in other's matters."

"I'm just helping you to not become over over-confident!"

"Oh I see!"

"Oh yeah! You are already so full of yourself! And if it continues, you will see only you in this world!"

'Tell her that you saw her!' his heart screamed. 'Shut the F**k up!' his mind retorted. "Think what may you want, you will find no one as me!" 'Arogant!' his heart.

"Arogant! I just don't know how we are still friends!"

'You see! She is like me!' his heart. 'That's why she is sooo intelligent.' his mind. "What do you want to be to me then?" 'OMG! Is he going to propose?' his heart. 'No! Don't do that! his mind. "If you are just my brother's SIL, I think I can pull your legs, play"

"What are you both discussing? Come and join us! Let's talk over the dinner." taking both their attentions.

"Yep Papa!" and turned towards Chakor with a smile as others attention were on them "Shall we discuss this there!"

She too smiled in return and said "You better stay as friend!"

He smiled and they joined others for dinner.

"If you both need anything, I'm just on the opposite side along with Vivaan in the other room, else Suraj is just next to yours."

Both the sisters smiled at the old man who is looking at them affectionately "Sure papa!" Chakor added.

And he smiled "Good night!"

And the sisters sang back in chorus.

"Suraj!"

"Yes Papa!" Suraj sat on his bed seeing his father entering his room.

"Are you happy to return home after all these years?"

"Are you happy Papa?"

"My happiness lays in you all!"

"I'm happy!"

"So I'm then!" he said putting his hand on his son's shoulder "If you don't want, you are not obliged to do it!"

"I want to be here with you Dad!"

He smiled "Okay! Sleep well! Good night!"

"Good night Papa!" and KN left from there "I will make you happy with whatever I can!" Suraj murmured to himself as he closed the door.

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Thanks a lot buddies for reading!

How was it?

Only one Sukor scene, I know.

Please adjust for now!

What do you think about a closed storeroom scene?

Similar to the one in the university but this one will be a bit different.

What say? Interested?

Let me know!

Next part: New mother! New starting!

Take care!

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#328

It was an awesome update sis..

Vivan and imli fight was like kiddos fight..

Kn was so affectionate with both the girls..

Suraj kn bond was so adorable..

Eventhough sukor scenes r lil..i enjoyed their combo..

Comming to ur qs sis..

What does tat a closed store room means here..i don't understand tat?

Overall tis part was fabulous..

Eagerly waiting for ur next update sis..

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
It was an awesome update sis..
Vivan and imli fight was like kiddos fight..
Kn was so affectionate with both the girls..
Suraj kn bond was so adorable..
Eventhough sukor scenes r lil..i enjoyed their combo..
Comming to ur qs sis..
What does tat a closed store room means here..i don't understand tat?
Overall tis part was fabulous..
Eagerly waiting for ur next update sis..

Thanks a lot dear for those lovely words!

Glad you enjoyed everyone's scene and all of their combo!

Storeroom is the room where we stock things/items of house!

And the reason I asked the question is: we had already had a locked room scene in the earlier stage of this story, in Suraj's cabin.

That's why asked it.

Hope you understand!

TC dear!

See you!

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: maithu_

Thanks a lot dear for those lovely words!
Glad you enjoyed everyone's scene and all of their combo!

Storeroom is the room where we stock things/items of house!
And the reason I asked the question is: we had already had a locked room scene in the earlier stage of this story, in Suraj's cabin.
That's why asked it.

Hope you understand!

TC dear!
See you!