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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Charaju

Nice update
Kn's pov was emotional
I think my guess was correct kn sis was Chamili's mother
Waiting for next update

Thanks a lot!
Love the name ChamIli! ;-)
Hope the next part comes out good!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh


Hmm, in principle I've no preference on who should know first. I think if KN knows first he'll immediately reveal the truth to Chakor and make them part of the family. As for Chakor, she might hesitate because she knows that her mother's family didn't approve of her marriage and she may fear that KN will refuse to let Imli and Vivaan get married. Also, Chakor strikes me as someone who doesn't open up easily, just like Suraj actually.

Interesting points dear!
You have really got them so well!
As I said, I think of including a twist when the truth comes, so hope it's interesting too!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rinka_Ritz

So truths are revealed.. I am waiting for the next.. I liked the update.. Sorry dear I wasn't here for many days since I had some important exams... Anyways Happy belated friendship day to you

Thank you so much dear!
I will try to be back soon with the next part!

Exams and studies are important!
Hope everything went well!
Thanks a lot for the wishes and same to you too dear!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello!


How are you all?
Nope! Don't think wrong! I'm not discontinuing the story! LOL
This note is just to say that I will not be updating the story for maximum 2 weeks!

Sorry!

See you guys soon!

- Maithili
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous Part

KN is he referring too Chakor's mother
it seems like he too had went through a rough ordeal in his past

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fabulous Part

KN is he referring too Chakor's mother
it seems like he too had went through a rough ordeal in his past

Thanks a lot buddy!

I can't tell yes or no or confir your hypothesis about Chakor's mother and KN relationship!

I thin everyone at some phase of the life goes through a different kind of pain!
So yup! He too went through it!


P.S I told 2 weeks but it's been almost 5 weeks!
Will be updating in next 2 days!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello!


How are you all!
I know I said that I will update this story in 2 weeks but I took almost a month!
It's just a bit busy in personal and professional work!
Rest of my own story in the end of this part!

Link to the previous part: Part 16 KN's POV
Happy reading!

*****

Part 17: Yes or No?


KN's POV

I learnt that life is not full of white clouds.
Grey and black clouds will pass, unstabilising the situation, the strength we hold.
But the strength our loved ones hold is stronger than those passing clouds.
And that strength made me more stronger than before.

Making me to want to do good!
Good for people surrounding me!
Good for people in need!
Good whenever I can!

And I did it!
Everything I can, I did!
Protected my children and made them stronger personalities.
Got to do few works for people and satisfy my inner voice.

I have separated one love, I don't the history to repeat!
And when I see that girl, I feel like seeing my sister.
Her eyes are just the exact copy of my sister!
But the childish behaviours of my sister is not in both the sisters.
They can't be my sister's children.
They are no more in this world to be with their uncle.
But I can at least get to see those eyes if she comes and lives with us for the rest of my few days.

Hope she comes!

End of KN's POV

"Hello!"
"How are you?"
"We just meet this morning in the staffs meeting!"
"Hmmm yeah! But it was this morning!"
"Oh! I didn't know that! Thank you Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi for enlightening me!"
"Can you just say I'm fine instead of all this drama!"
"Can't you just say what you want instead of accusing me!" putting the sports team vests in their bag inside sports room.

Taking a deep breath in his cabin, he spells "Can we meet?"
"Anything serious?" she pauses her action as she asked him this.
"No! Nothing serious!" he heard her sign of relief and a smile crossed his lips before he spelled his other words "Just a talk with you about our siblings!"
"Is your Papa coming too?"
"No! Just two of us!"
"Hmmm"
"So 6:30 at our coffee spot in the habitual Cafe!"
"You are not even asking if I'm free! How bad?"
"I just now checked Miss. Lal's shedule and saw that she finishes in -10mins, which means already finished. So she has 2 hours free in front of her. So I don't think I have to ask if she is free."
"How rude!"
"Thanks for the compliment!"
"Unbelievable! How did I become your friend?"
"I was also asking the same question! How can she be my friend?"
"Oh heh I mean How did you become my friend?" as she made different faces rewinding her previous line.
"Can we chat about this later? I have a meeting in 10 mins! Need to go!"

"You changed! You are behaving as groom's brother and not my friend!"
"Chakor! Listen!"
"You listen! I will be there only at 7!" as she got out of the sports' room.
"God! What difference there is in 30 minutes!" as he got up seing the peon on his door with all the needed files.
"Don't call god!"
"So whom should I call? Chakor?"
"Whatever! And let me tell you that even 1 second can make a big difference in the life! So see you at 7!"
"Ouf! See you at 6:30 if you don't want to have dinner with me else at 7:30 for dinner! Choice is yours! See you Bye!"
"Su" and she couldn't even tell him that she has no problem dinner but he just cut the call "What does he think of himself! Cutting the call on my words! Have to teach him respect!" she murmured as she made her way towards her place.

"I changed for our good! If I keep being close, I will one day end by hurting you by exposing my feelings! So it's better like this" he said to himself closing the car as he took those file and went from there.

"You are 15 mins late!"
"I'm 15 mins earlier than what was planned!"
"I said 7!"
"I said 7:30!"
"Mam! Here is your juice!" the waitress served the juice for Chakor.
"Thank you!" she said as she took her juice.

"You couldn't even wait for me!" he accused her.
"I was waiting for you since 7!" and took a sip when the waitress again appeared with a coffee in her tray "I ordered the coffee with less sugar for you!" she said after asking the waitress to place it in his place.
"Thank you!"
"Mention not!"
"How is work going on?"
"All good! So? Tell me what are we here for?"
"What do you think about shifting with your sister to our Mansion?"
"What would I think? You father is so good that he offered it but I don't think it's a good to take the goodness of it."
"It means you don't wish to come!"
"It's not a wish but a way. A right way to be in my place!"
"You would be with your sister and Papa will be happy to see the more people at home!"
"You are behaving as his lawyer!" she smiled saying it and then added "I know you are concerned about him. I'm too as he is a good, caring and understanding father. But I can't stay in a place where my sister is going to live her life."

"What's wrong in being with your sister? He told you to consider it as your house!"
"Considering and being is different! And you know that!"
"I checked with our family doctor, he said that our dad is not so well. He is stressed and it's affecting his health a lot."
"Ohhh!"
"Hmmm Well! I would like you to not tell this to Vivaan. He would be affected too and I want him to be happy! And don't tell to your sister too, she shares everything to him, he told me!"
"Hmmm" she agreed.
"And I would like you to help me in this and get with us to go to home to make our Papa happy! Hope you understand!"
"I understand buuttt" she hesitated.
"If you don't feel comfortable! You can just say that to dad, he will understand but he will feel bad! Let me know if it's a YES or a NO as soon as possible! I mean by tomorrow morning it will be ok!"
Shaking her head "Unbelievable man!" and both laughed.

"So dinner?"
"I'm hungry! Yes please!" she said making a cute face which brought a smile on his face.

And the dinner went well.

*****

Thanks for reading buddies!
Next update soon!
Hope you like the return of Sukor of end of KN's POV!
Let me know this through your COMMENTS and LIKES

And by the way I will be updating this regulary for the coming 1 month as after 1 month I will be in flight and ground for 15 next days!
I mean 2 days in flight and rest on ground! LOL
And I will post the SP of the new story soon!
See you all soon with the next part!

Next part: Part 18 : Drama King & Queen

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting updatešŸ‘
Sukor are back to the equation they share when they came to know about imvan😊
Loved their nok jhoksšŸ˜†
So kn wants chakor to be there as chakor's reminds of her sister, mystery will stay for some time
Looking forward to know what will be sukor's equation when she will shift
Waiting for next

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Posted: 7 years ago
First thing first Maithu
I am spell bound how your change your hats amazingly without any flaw in thoughts. Your drawing board must be best. No mincing of words or mixing of thoughts.

was sweating with XRH and lo comes this platonic one.

A different KN! liked his genuine feelings and hope he sees his sister through her eyes.

Just loved the simple yet the ying yang equation of SUKOR.

really like Suraj's confidence about bringing her into the space and also he is very watchful about her.

Infact indirectly he is trying to emotionally blackmail(well this is bit a harsh word) make her accept KN's proposal but as the ethic girl she is right but am sure she will end up falling prey for the sweetness of the father and son.. (will need to wait and watch)

Hindsight SR seems to have his own agenda though claiming to be worried about the siblings !!! Is he hahahaha

lovely one

waiting for the next updates
Edited by sumsukor - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting updatešŸ‘

Sukor are back to the equation they share when they came to know about imvan😊
Loved their nok jhoksšŸ˜†
So kn wants chakor to be there as chakor's reminds of her sister, mystery will stay for some time
Looking forward to know what will be sukor's equation when she will shift
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!
Feeling nice to see you all soon!
Yup finally got them back to the inital phase and it was a bit difficult, that's y made Suraj's feelings limited for now.
Glad you loved their convo.
I have a small graft of the future of Sukor, let's see if it's interesting!

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