SuKor Drabble: Chakor's Birthday

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Reina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ..chotu..
OMG this was so so so so beautiful! Really loved it Reina! Do write more dear.

Thank you😃 will definitely work on a part two, the encouragement really helps :)

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Reina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ria.april18
Wow!!!!
A very beautiful and cute OS dear... 😳
You have described both Suraj and Chakor's emotion so well... 👏
And so thoughtful of our Suraj babu that he brought so lovely uphaars for his dharam patni... 😉
I really hope something like this happen in the show too...
If you can then please continue it... will look forward to it... 😊

Thank you so much ria! I realllyyy want a scene where we see Suraj shopping for Chakor, I think his frustration would be hilarious to watch😆

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Reina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: tarasuresh
Amazing Amazing amazing totally amazing❤️ Thankx for writingg such a wonderefuull OS

Thank you for your appreciation <3

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Reina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: shravs1101
Wowww!ahmazing os dear.
Totally loved it,the way u described everything was flawless and the story moved smoothly from one level to the another.
Right from the beginning till end,it was awesome...Suraj shopping for her,his frustration at the shopkeeper for not showing him d right sarees but imagining her scolding him for threatening the shopkeeper with the gun,then he immediately put down the gun and tried to be calm,he asked nicely to show him something classy and especially yellow,then buying that bracelet scene and then comes the most beautiful scene of this story,SuKor scene in the room...no words can describe the beauty of that scene,it was that fab...all in all,it was a beautifully fantastic story.
Plz plz continue it,will be eagerly waiting to read more.

Thank you so much for the wonderful comments!!! I tried to mix a little bit of what we know about SuKor and a little bit of wishful thinking, gahh I want a scene like this so bad...

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Reina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: _Namita_
Reina, it's beautifully written. Would love to read a continuation.
Like Sanya said, maybe Chakor wearing the sari.

Thank you Nami!!! 😳I am definitely going to write one with her wearing the saree!!!

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GrilledCheese

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

amazingly written... do write more!

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Awesome OS.Really interesting,would love u to continue it😳!

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nikki.171

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Is it just me or was the sun and moon bracelet symbolic to their selves? Nevertheless, I absolutely love this. The feels are making me so fuzzy and I cant stop smiling myself - just like Suraj.
You seriously should write more. I thrive on SuKor stories and there are so less of them around here.

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Bee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Awww, this was sooo cute!!! ❤️

Suraj imagining phantom Chakor in his head and listening to her words :p (akhir biwi to biwi hi hoti hai... aur wo biwi agar Chakor ho tab to uski baat sunni hi padti hai 😆)

And Chakor scolding Suraj for being out so long, typical her :p

Also, the bracelet was beautifully described. Suraj and Chakor. Two sides of the same day, forged as one. How sweet.