Aafato'n ke parindey "IshaqZaade" chapter 16
Recap : Tina insults suraj...Suraj remembers his and chakor's moments...Kn ask suaj not to disappoint him...vivaan and chakor has planned something..chako falls in
river and suraj brings her out of water...
Chako opened her eyes and found herself in the medical room of camp...she saw vinny sitting beside her...
Cinny : Ohh chakor tumhe hosh aa gaya...main toh darr hi gai thi...
chakor: Vinny main yaha'n ?
vinny : Haan kal raat ko tum toh behosh ho gai thi isliye medical room main shift kar diya tumhe..
chakor: Kal Raat ko ? matlab main yaha'n kabse hun ? aur time kia huva hai ? practice karni hai mujhe...
vinny : Tum toh kal raat se yaha'n ho..Iss waqt subha k 6 bajj rahey hain main ground main jaa rahi thi toh socha tumhe dekhti chalu...
Chakor was still weak but managed to get up and got ready for practice in her track suite...she ate breakfast and came to ground where tina and kusum were already
warming up...
Kusum : Lo ji aa gai se madam...arrey chalo sab haal toh pucho inka..
Tina : iska haal kia poochna kusum...shakal se hi behaal lag rahi hai ...
Chakor: Kisi ki shakal dekh kar uska haal btana toh najoomi (Face readers ...actually I don't know what they are called in hindi but they're called najoomi in urdu)
ka kaam hai...tum runner ho usi par dhayan do na...
Kusum : Dhayan toh tu de chorrii ... Manney na lagta k tu iss baar jeetne wali hai..
chakor: woh toh waqt hi btayega...
Chakor looked here and there but suraj was no where to be seen...she did't know who saved her but decided to ask someone after practicing ...After a while the
coach kabir came...he was talking on phone but when he reached near girls he hung up...they started their practice...
In haveli :
Kn was shouting "Suraj" "Suraj" yaha'n aiye...
Tejaswani comes running to kn and asks...
Tejaswani:Kia hua mp sahab ? suraj s ekoi bhool ho gai kia ?
Kn : Aap jaiye meri nazro'n k samne se aur apne laadley ko yaha'n bhejiye jaldiii...
Suraj was sleeping in his room ( in his white kurti and jeans ) when tejaswani came and wakes him up and tells him how angt kn is...Suraj immediately got up and
ran toward kn's room where he was sitting on sofa and on the table a stick ( wooden stick with leather covering ) was kept...looking at the stick suraj started
to sweat and he said...
Suraj : Pa..papa aap ne...apne bulaya hume..
Kn : Kal raat kaha'n they aap ( he asked in a stern voice )
Suraj : Hum..Hum kaha'n honge papa camp gaye they...tina se milney k liye...( He knew where this all was going )
Kn : Achaw tina se milne gaye they aap...Toh miley phir aap tina se ?
Suraj : Woh papa...actually...
Kn : (shouts) Bass kijiye...kitna chupaynge sachai ko ? hum ne...humne kaha tha aapse hume baar baa niraash hona passand nahi hai...Hume abhi abhi kisi ki call ai
thi aur unse hume pata chalta hai k...K humare laadle suputra ( son ) camp gaye they magar woh kaam nahi kiya jo hum chahtey they balke...balke uss bandhua
chipkali ko marney se bachaya apane ? Kyo'n bachaya usey marney dete naa...humare gale ka sabse barha kaanta nikal jataa...jawaab dijiye hume yu'n iss tarha'n
putley ( statue ) ki tarha'n matt kharey rahiye...jawaab dijiye ( he shouts even louder )
Suraj : Papa woh hum tina ko milney hi gaye they magar...
Kn : Nahi magar wagar...kuch nahi ...ap jantey hain hume..hume aapse kitni ummeedein hain magar ek baar phir apne humari ummeedo'n par paani pher diya hai...
aur iski saza toh milnhi chaiye na bhai...henaw ? toh btaiye apko..apko do options dete hain hum...yaa toh hum saza apki mummy ko dein or unhey haveli se
dhakkey de kar bahar kar dein...Yaa aapki bachpan ki saza ko hi dohraya jaye...
Suraj Had no ther option he just stood there and said in a ster voice..
Suraj : Aap humari mummy ko ghar se mat nikaliye..jo saza deni hain hume dein...
Kn picked the stick and started to hit suraj to vent his anger and suraj just stood there without moving an inch with tough expressions...Kn continued to hit suraj
he himself got tired and his anger vanished...he thew stick on floor and signed suraj to leave...suraj left from there tejaswani was standing outside kn's room crying
suraj sis't even looked at her but she followed him asking should se call a doctor when suraj reached his room he shut the door on tejaswani's face ...Suraj's white kurti
now had little red blood stains...he threw a vase in anger and shouted..
Suraj : Chakor bhuvan laal teri wajah se...teri wajah se aaj papa ne hume phirse woh zakhm diye jinhe hum humesha se bhulana chahtey they...Pata nahi kyo'n bachaya humne tujhe
Hume nahi ban'na kisi ka rakshak...Tere liye jo plan bnaya hai na abb usey anjaam tak pohanchane se koi nahi rok sakta basss...
Evening : At camp
Everyone was done with practicing chakor and some other girls were in their locker room ( or changing room or shower room :p choose whatever you want ) tina was also
present there...chakor goes to vinny and asks about what happened last night who saved her ? tina who was listening to this came to chakor before vinny could say
anything and said
Tina : Ohh toh tumhe nahi pata k who is your saviour ?
Chakor : Pata hota toh vinny se kyo'n poochti...
Tina : Ohh fine...toh mein btati hun k tumhe kisney bachaya...Or kaisey bachaya...( she laughs after saying this and looks at kusum who also laughs )
Chakor : Tum log hass kyo'n rahey ho ? aisa kia huva tha kal ?
Tina starts to tell chakor what happened last night...
*FlashBack*
...
Suraj brings chakor out of water and makes her lay on ground. everyone was present there by now because some of them heard they falling noise...suraj pated chakor on
Face but she did't move...He begin chest compression but even after that she does't move or gets conscious ...Someone from the girls says check if she's
Breathing...suraj checks and gets shocked because she was't breathing...afte thinking for a second he Tilt her head back and lifted the chin...pinched the nose and
covered her mouth with his and started to give her mouth to mouth rescuscitation...All the girls looked at each other and some felt jealous though...His lips were
still connected to hers...After trying several time chakor finally breathes...suraj picks her in his arms and takes her to medical room and asks doctor to take care
of her ...looks at chakor one last time and leaves from there...forgetting that he came to meet tina...
*FlashBack Ends*
Tina,kusum and other girls were laughing to tease chakor while chakor's eyes were wide opene ...She was lost in her confusion of what to think..she just stands up
and starts to walk...she comes at the same place where suraj saved her...tina's words echoed in her mind she shuts her eyes and imagined everything that tina said...
*Unconscious chakor* *Suraj worrying for her* *Suraj coming close to her* *Suraj's lips on her*
saans main teri..saans mili toh
Mujhe saans aai..Mujhe saans aai
Rooh ne chhoo li Jism ki khushbu
Tu jo paas aai..tu jo paas aai..
Chakor opened her eyes and sits on the same place...it was night time no one was around her she was lost in her thoughts..
Tere khayal mein doob k aksar
Achi lagi tanhaaaiii
Saan main teri saans mili toh
mujhe saans aai mujhe saans aai..
...
The End
Precap : Chakor and tina comes to know about something...Chakor and suraj collide and chakor falls atop suraj...Vivan joins kn and suraj feels jealous
I hope you like this chapter too...I'm so happy for all the love and positive comments I'm getting for my story...I feel so happy when I read them...
Thank you all so much for the support and love you'e giving me...keep reading the story...do tell me if you find something wrong or not good enough...
*SPECIAL ANNOUNCEMENT* The next few chapters will mainly focus on SuKor but there will be other scenes too..And I'm not going to focus too much on how vivaan
managed to gain kn's trust etc etc...because you've already seen it in serial itself...Everything will be explained in short I hope you don't mind that...
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