MAIN AUR TUM - A SuKor FF UPDATE Ch. 9 Pg. 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi to all that come across this FanFiction. I go by the nickname AMP and I hope to hear your opinion on my first ever story that I write. This story will focus on - as you guessed it - the relationship between Suraj and Chakor. The story will start off from their wedding and will then change from the show storyline. I apologize in advance if the characters seem different from how they are portrayed in the show. I recently got interested in it and haven't seen the show since the leap. I will try to make sure to keep the dialogue in Hindi, but my Hindi is weak and I apologize if something doesn't make sense. This story will be rated T as it will contain some implied things, but will be relatively clean. I don't know just how long this story will go, but hopefully regardless, everyone will enjoy it.


Prologue - Page 1
Chapter 1 - Page 2
Chapter 2 - Page 2
Chapter 3 - Page 3
Chapter 4 - Page 5
Chapter 5 - Page 6
Chapter 6 - Page 7
Chapter 7 - Page 9
Chapter 8 - Page 10
Chapter 9 - Page 12
Edited by PotterHeadAMP - 8 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue

"MAIN aur TUM khabi ek saath nahi reh sakte! Samje Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi. KHABI NAHI!" The words hurled out of her mouth the minute she was thrown into his room. She now stood with her back straight, finger pointing towards him as he fumed down at her.

"Tume kya lagta hai, ke main yeh jhooti shaadi ko sweekar karoongi."She carried on as her dupatta flew off her head as her rage and the wind outside increased. All the pent up emotion from when the truth came out that she had married this monster of a being and how no one - not her sister, nor her parents - believed her. But it all came crashing back down when she realized that even the love of her life had not trusted her.

Her legs gave out beneath her as the evenings events caught up to her and she was met with the sight of wedding shoes. A dark chuckle escaped her mouth as she realized that this was exactly what he was waiting for. Her to break down right in front of him and how wonderful was it that she did so right by his feet. Main to mere rakshas pati kai payron mai hi gir gayi.

Her thoughts came back to Vivaan and how easily he had comforted his new wife, her own sister, Imli, as she had stood their before the fire tied to a man that lived to destroy. He had thrown accusations right at her and she felt a slap to her face wouldn't have hurt more than watching the thin thread of trust he held for her break. Another dark chuckle escaped her as she realized what she had meant to do to another had abruptly backfired towards herself. The only good that came out of this day was seeing Tina's freedom. Yet it seemed her freedom was never meant to last and no matter how hard she worked, something was always missing.

She was wrenched out her thoughts as a pair of hands grabbed her shoulders and pulled her body back up. Suraj Rajvanshi was smirking down at her believing he had won. But as her eyes locked with his she saw an uncertainty pass over his face as if he didn't know what he would do now. His face then locked back up as he saw her gaze rest on him. The hands that were holding her shoulders came off and she wondered what he could possibly do to her now after ripping her life to shreds. Her eyes widened as the thought struck her and she realized just how beautified the room was. The bed was covered in petals shaped into a heart and garlands of flowers fell around it in a canopy style. No sooner had the thought fleeted over her, Suraj had picked her up by her waist and legs and dropped her onto his bed.

"Sweekar to karna hoga tume dharam patniji, kyun ke ab MAIN aur TUM shaadi shuda hain. 7 phere liya hain hamne, mera naam ka sindoor tumahre maang main bhara hai." He said this as he slowly lowered himself onto her laying body. She was breathing heavily now as his face inched towards hers.

"Ab kahan dhorogi tum, Mrs. Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi."
Edited by PotterHeadAMP - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Can't believe that this is your first work! It was just too good! The dialogues in Hindi were perfect! Update soon! Wanna see how SuKor go from here!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi AMP, loved your prologue.
pl continue

waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yippie another Sukor story
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wonderful and excellent update. interesting start. waiting for update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi PotterHeadAMP
I rly loved you story !!!!!!!!! plz continue :D
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I dont know whether sukor would be endgame or not but these sukor fanfics are lifee!!
Love your writing style. Waiting for more :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A.N - I did not mean for the very first chapter to be this long, but here it is. I used some elements form the actual show and would like to apologize if it seems similar to any other fanfics in the forum. Let me know your thoughts and Thanks to everyone who commented after my prologue. It gives me a lot of confidence to read such nice comments. I will not mind any constructive criticism either, so let me know if something doesn't make sense. But anyways, ENJOY!😛

Chapter 1

Sunshine filtered through the open window, and birds chirped as the sun rose. Rays fell across the two newlyweds sleeping in the wedding adorned room. One slept comfortably on the bed, while another slept curled in a ball against the headboard.

Suraj woke up with fluttering eyes and his eyes fell over the motionless body of Chakor. She had her head rested on her folded arms and was facing him. Her eyebrows were furrowed as a frown marred her sleeping face.

Suraj tilted his head to the side as he examined this woman before him. Meri patni he humorlessly thought. The nights events caught up to him as his mind woke up from its slumber. He pushed himself up and looked around his room. The anger of being duped by this bandhwa billi and his fiance Tina had clouded his judgement and in one of his most stupidest moments he had decided he would marry Chakor just to spite her for the rest of her life. He had realized far too late that he may have flushed his own life down the drain by this unfortunate marriage.

He looked at her again and noticed her maang smudged with red sindhoor that he had filled with his own hand. He remembered how she had furiously rubbed her hands over it to remove the colour and how no matter how hard she tried it wouldn't come off. Suraj could not understand how easily it had been to pull this whole charade off. He sneered at how quickly it had been to turn everyone against Chakor, a task he thought would have been the most difficult part of the nights events. Vivaan - the bas***d - had taken no time in comforting his new wife and turning against who Suraj had believed was his true love. That hadn't taken him long and he fumed at how Imli had accepted Vivaan's help without any questions as she had glared at her sister accusingly.

The thought of Imli brought him back to her confession of being pregnant with his child of all things. He scoffed internally at the ridiculous notion that he would ever have done anything of the sort with a little girl like her. He may have found amusement at her clear interest in him, but he had no physical interest in her, at all. She was everything that he didn't like in women, a little girl who followed all orders given and walked around him like a lost puppy everywhere. He wanted someone who could match his intellect and who would never just do all that he wanted, that would get boring very fast.

Suraj's eyes went back towards the sleeping form of his new bride. She was an exception from his type as she was too much of an extreme in all categories. He couldn't deny though, that he found her quite attractive. When he had first seen her after all those years he had been quite surprised by her appearance. He didn't know what he had been expecting, but he sure wasn't expecting a woman to have come back. He tried to compare how she had looked back when she was just a child and now. She had definitely grown into what could be seen as a beautiful woman. Then she had opened her mouth and his thoughts of attraction dissipated as fast as she ran in her races. He couldn't believe how someone who could change such nicely on the outside, could stay the exact same on the inside. And in no time she managed to flip his life in all different directions as he found himself in jail.

It hadn't taken to much effort to get out but he had to give her credit on how quickly she had managed to right any wrongs in this village of Azadganj. He would never admit it, but he had always found her efforts commendable and he respected her on some level. But her mistake lied in underestimating him. If she was the queen of this village, gentle and taking people out of the depressing depths of their lives, then he was the king, the one who always got the last word. And after all they were married now weren't they.

Suraj finally got off the bed and stretched his lean body upwards. He had taken off his kurta sometime during the night due to the heat. He smirked as he remembered how scared Chakor had looked as he had hovered above her gasping body that night. He wouldn't have ever done anything to her, how insulting that she had even entertained the thought that he would ever do something so disgusting with someone. He may have been a monster but he was not evil enough to take someones innocence from them.

Her words made him chuckle as he went into the bathroom to take a shower. "Aur paans aaoge to me tume chetaavnee de rehi hoon kai itni zor se mai us jaaga par laat maroongi kai tume taare dikne ko milenge." Suraj had laughed then and dropped over to her other sidewith an arm resting underneath his head. He had smirked at her and turned over, leaving Chakor to her thoughts. He had half expected her to move over to the couch in the room, but had been none too surprised to see her right by him. She was stubborn as a mule after all. She would never let him win fully in any case.

As Suraj finished up his shower, in the bedroom Chakor woke up to a room lit up by sunshine. This was the bedroom that faced the rising sun every morning and she would in any other case be happy to have such a room, but the reality of the past nights event raced through her head once again. She abruptly got off the bed but lost her balance as she lost her eyesight for a split second. Chakor felt a pair of warm hands wrap around her bare waist and she fell onto a shirtless and wet male chest. Tingles spread throughout her whole body as he lowered his mouth to her ear, "Good morning meri bandhwa biwi ji."

Instantly she turned her head away as she struggled to free herself from his tight hold. "Choro mujhe."

Just as Suraj was ready to let go he heard the door open and he smirked as he turned them both around. Ab maza aayega. His smirked widened as he was met with the sight of Vivaan and Imli. Their expressions had darkened at the sight of what looked to be a pair of newlyweds, with Suraj's half naked body engulfing Chakor's. Suraj had her dupatta wrapped around his neck and due to Chakor's weak body from sleeping in an uncomfortable position the whole night she was resting against his body unconsciously.

At the sight of Vivaan and Imli, Chakor's eyes widened and she grabbed Suraj's arms and ripped them off of her waist. She hastily stepped away from him and towards the pair who had entered the room.

"Waah didiya, hum toh aaye te aapse maafi maang ne ke liye, lekin aap toh bohot kushi main hain." Imli sneered at her sister. She glared at Chakor as she thought about how she should've been the one who was in Suraj Babu's embrace.

Chakor interlocked her fingers as she said, "Tu galat samaj rahi hai Imli, aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Meri baat suno, please. Woh toh mujhe chakkar-" But Vivaan had had enough. "Ab kitne jhoot bologi tum Chakor. Tumne hamare aur Imli ki zindagion koh toh bigar ke rakh de. Leken tumne ek baar bi nahi socha is bachche ke baare main. Kai usse uske pita kai bina jeena paraiga!" His voice grew louder as he threw words at Chakor's face.

Suraj who had been watching Chakor, snapped his head towards Vivaan. He was in front of him before he knew it and had his collar in his hands. Being tall always gave Suraj many advantages and he hadn't been quite as happy due to it then today as he watched fear flicker over Vivaan's face. "Ek baat yaad rakna, yeh bacha mera nahi hai. Toh ab mujhe tere muhn sai is baare main kuch bhi nahi sun na. Aur meri biwi kai samne toh hargiz nahi. Chalo ab tum dono hamare kamre sai nikhlo. Hum dono ko aaj ke sab rasmon ke liye tayar hona hai."

With that he shoved the pair out of his room and locked his room door. He turned around and met with the sight of his fuming wife. She looked at him with blazing eyes, her hair surrounding her face. His eyes dropped towards her exposed stomach as he had her dupatta and he smirked again. Chakor having realized her current state of dress blushed and glared at him more as she walked towards him. She grabbed her dupatta and wrapped it around herself, momentarily forgetting about the visit from his two least favorite people.

"Mujhe nahi baata kai tum yeh sab kyun kar re hai ho. Lekin ek baat to sun lo." She leaned her face two inches from his own as she spoke. "Main tume zaroor hara ke rahungi. Yeh Chakor ka wadha hai Mr. Suraj Rajvanshi."

He smirked down at her as her words brushed across his face. He moved his face just close enough that there lips were micrometers from touching each other. Just like he knew she would, Chakor didn't back down from his gaze and closeness as he whispered, "Main bhi dekta hoon kai tum kaise mujhe haraogi, Mrs. Suraj Rajvanshi."
Edited by PotterHeadAMP - 9 years ago
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Chapter 2
Chakor hadn't quite woken up from the recent fiasco with her sister and Vivaan, but with Suraj's face hovering right above her, she snapped awake. She took a step back as another sly smile adorned his face.

A knock snapped them out of their stare-off and Chakor's eyes followed Suraj as he opened his room door. She watched Tejaswini come into the room holding a large platter which held what looked to be Chakor's outfit for the day. She had an arched eyebrow as she saw the state of her son and bahu. Suraj spoke then to his mother, "Maa aaj ke sab rasmo ki tayari hogayi hai?" Tejaswini who had been setting the clothes onto the dressing table turned to her son. "Tume fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai." Tejaswini then looked to Chakor and said, "Tume taayar nahi hona? Kitne rasme pure karne hai aaj. Yeh kapre aur gehne pehn layna aur jaldi neeche aana tum dono."

Chakor grabbed the clothes off the gold platter and with one last glance at the mother - son duo, walked into the bathroom to get ready.

With Chakor gone, Tejaswini turned to her son with an arched brow. "Mujhe nahi baata kai yaha kya chal raha hai. Lekin beta bhul na mat kai is ladki nai tume jail bijwaya ta. Jina haram kardiya ta usne sab ka." Suraj smiled down at his mother, "Maa aap ko kisi baat ki fiker karne ki zaroorat nahi he. Mujhe bi yaad hai ke yeh bandhwa billi nai kaise mere zindagi baarbad karne ki koshish ki tee." With this Suraj turned to his cabinet and took out his clothes for the day. Picking out a red kurta, he spun around and showed his mother, "Yeh kaisa rahega aaj kai liye?" Tejaswini sighed and nodded her head as her son put his kurta on. "Ek baat karni tee mujhe tumare saat beta." Suraj started combing his hair, "Han, bolo na maa." Tejaswini sighed again, "Mujhse toh tune kabhi jhoot nahi bola, toh mere sawal ka jawab do." Suraj's hand stilled as a thought crossed his mind. His mother didn't possibly think that he actually had any feelings for Chakor did she? He was snapped out of his thoughts as she began speaking again. "Tum sachme toh ... kaise kahen." Suraj's began to feel some sort of movement in his stomach as he watched his mother start pacing. She stopped and turned to him again. "Tum woh Imli kai bache ki pita toh nahi ho na?" The question threw him off and he felt relief that she wasn't asking him about Chakor. Then the full implication of the question hit him and he made a face. "Aapko yeh kisne..." He threw his hands up in the air exasperatedly.

Suraj faced his mother and Tejaswini was met with her son's annoyed face. "Nahi maa, woh mera bacha nahi hai. Mein kitne baar keh chuka hun, wo mera bacha nahi hai!" She still did not seem convinced. "Teek hai, toh pir mere sar par haat rak kar kaho, keh tum us bache ke baap nahi ho." Suraj's face dropped for a second before being replaced with a determined look. "Teek he, aapko yehi chahiye toh... " He placed his right hand on his mother's head and declared, "Maa, main kasam khataa hoon kai main Imli kai bache ka baap nahi hoon."

The worried look on Tejaswini's face finally dissapeared at her son's words. Suraj removed his hand and she took a deep breath of relief. She still wondered though why Imli was so certain that her son was the father of her child. "Toh phir Imli kyun..." Suraj cut her off , "Mujhe nahi bata ke woh kyun mujh per yeh bacha dalna chati hai. Yeh sab bate choro, hum aate hain jab Chakor tayar ho jaati hai."

With those words, Tejaswini remembered something else she had needed to tell her son. "Suraj tumne shaadi toh karli woh ladki ke saath. Ek baat ka toh tum faida utha sakte ho. Yeh Chakor chahe kitni bhi sar ka dard hai, woh tume paise zaroor lasak ti hai." Suraj knew what his mother was referring to. Chakor's running had attracted many sponsors and were willing to pay plenty of money to have her sponsor their products. With a curt nod at his mother signalling he knew what she was talking about, he saw her walk out of his room.

When he had decided to turn the tables on Chakor, his anger had not been the only factor to making the decision. He knew Tina would have gained him lots of money, but with Chakor he could make a lot more due to her high rates of winning races. He could kill two birds with one stone this way. Suraj also hadn't minded the devastated look that had fallen upon Vivaan's face when he had realized who he had married.

Deep in thought as he fixed up his appearance, Suraj didn't notice the bathroom door opening. He was startled out of his reverie when he felt water droplets hit his face.

Suraj turned around ready to give Chakor a piece of his mind when he felt his throat close up. She was drying her hair with a towel and the sun was shining right on her. Suraj was speechless for the first time in his life as he looked at the simple beauty that was Chakor. Suraj felt strange then as his heart took a stutter and then thump, thump, thump his heartbeat started racing.

Chakor noticed the lack of noise in the room and noticed Suraj staring at her. Thinking he was just doing that to make her feel uncomfortable Chakor continued drying her hair. She waited for a snarky remark but when none came she turned towards him again. "Itni der say tum mujhe ghur kyun rahe ho?" She demanded.

She watched him abruptly turn around and she swore she heard him mutter something. Shrugging it off, Chakor walked up to the dresser and began putting on the jewelry that her dear new mother-in-law had brought.

Ignoring Suraj who stood behind her, she finished getting ready. Her stuff had been brought in by a worker sometime yesterday when everyone had been digesting the events that occurred. She applied her make-up as Suraj watched on. Momentarily forgetting that he was even in the room due to his stillness, Chakor moved her hair that had been covering her back to her shoulder and began tying the dori that had come loose. She heard a sharp intake of breath and her eyes widened as she realized that Suraj was still in the room with her.

Chakor spun around and locked her gaze with his. She could feel herself blushing as she realized that Suraj had had a full view of her bare back. "Tume aur ku-ku-kuch kam nahi hai." The words were stuttering out of her mouth and she took a deep breath to steady her nerves. His gaze was unnerving her, and she could feel her heart beating a mile a minute.

Suraj seemed to realize he had been staring for more time then was appropriate and turned his face away. "Ja-Ja-Jaldi sai tayar ho jao, sab hamara intazaar kar rahe honge." With that Chakor watched Suraj leave the room.

She let out a breath she didn't realize she was holding when the door snapped shut.

Chakor needed to figure out what to do with this whole sham of a wedding before things got any weirder between her and Suraj.

Quickly tying her dori and fitting her dupatta over her head she looked at herself in the mirror. Her eyes were puffy from the crying she had done in the dead of the night. But she felt she was missing something as she looked at her appearance. Her eyes fell on the mangulsutra that lay on the table from when she had thrown it off during the night. Her hand reached for the simple thread that was supposed to mean so much for her. Somehow during the swap that had occurred yesterday, the mangulsutra she had chosen for herself - much simpler than the one that Tina had chosen - had still ended up around her neck.

Making a decision, Chakor put the mangulsutra on. Later on she would wonder exactly what had compelled her to do it, but for now she again stared at her reflection. Grabbing the sindhoor that had been brought with the clothes she pinched some in her finger. She stared at her forehead, because no matter how hard she had scrubbed in the shower, the colour had not come off. Shaking those thoughts from her head she applied the sindhoor and took a step back.

Taking another deep breath Chakor walked towards the door of the room. She opened the door and smacked right into a solid block of muscle. She felt herself lose her balance in the heavy red dress. She closed her eyes ready for the impact of the floor.

Suraj turned around just in time to grab a hold of Chakor's elbow and pull her into his chest. Chakor felt herself smack into someones chest while her arms were trapped between her body and his. Her eyes flew open and she looked into the eyes of her husband. She felt his arms wrapped around her waist as he held her steady against himself.

Chakor felt her heartbeat shoot-up again and was surprised to find another set matching her heart, beat for beat.

They stayed in that spot for what seemed to be hours as he gazed down at her, a new feeling sprouting within him, while she lay against him as her body unconsciously craved his warmth.

A shout from downstairs finally broke apart the pair and Suraj let go of Chakor as she too took 2 steps away from him. Suraj's eyes were drawn to her neck as he noticed her wearing her mangulsutra, something he hadn't failed to notice being on the room table. His eyes then flickered toward her maang which he found to be filled with sindhoor.

Chakor saw the questioning look in his gaze and turned her face away from him to look downstairs. "Chale ab hum niche." Suraj nodded and started walking towards the stairs. Chakor lifted up the hem of her heavy skirt as she quickly walked to catch up to his long strides. They reached the stairs and as they began their descent down, guests stopped to watch the new bride and groom make their entrance.

That was when Chakor felt her foot miss a step and she let out a squeek as she lost her balance yet again. The thought stupid lehenga passed her mind when she felt a familiar pair of arms steady her. One hand held her left and another rested on her waist holding her up.

And that was how the bride and groom made their first entrance to the waiting guests on the first day of their marriage.
Edited by PotterHeadAMP - 9 years ago

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