Aditya,Chakor,Vivan,Imli after leap FF-Its Destiny(updated pg9)

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snehaHCAPK

@snehaHCAPK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Chavvi u r a rockstar buddy. Simply too good.

I started reading ur ff n coincidently today i ad some really urgent work bt i was so excited to read all the parts after reading the first 4 parts. U should join d creatives. Very nicely written. I m waiting like crazy for d next part plz update soon. Luved d aadi chakor separation part d most. Also their first meeting was awesome. Its so good to read a ff on hardcore friendship n love.

Also d way u av incorporated d songs is jst mind blowing.

Thank u so much for writing this ff.

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chhavi

@ishqwaalalove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: -vinitha-
Ho no vivaan destroyer .no way ..He can't hurt anyone ...I like chatya friendship ...

thanks for commenting...😊

vivaan is angry hurt to the core...as he thinks everyone betray him

he is not villain in my story atleast ⭐️

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chhavi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK
Chavvi u r a rockstar buddy. Simply too good.
I started reading ur ff n coincidently today i ad some really urgent work bt i was so excited to read all the parts after reading the first 4 parts. U should join d creatives. Very nicely written. I m waiting like crazy for d next part plz update soon. Luved d aadi chakor separation part d most. Also their first meeting was awesome. Its so good to read a ff on hardcore friendship n love.
Also d way u av incorporated d songs is jst mind blowing.

Thank u so much for writing this ff.

aww...thank u so much for such a long feedback of urs 😳

i am too happy that its my first ff and u love it ...😊😳

thanks alot for so much appreciation ...⭐️

and ur most welcome 😊

i will soon update next parts of this ff dear...keep enjoying...it...😊😳

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snehaHCAPK

@snehaHCAPK

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Chaavi not related to ff bt xan u give me the links of full episodes of this week. Youtube or dailymotion or sumwhr i can download d show. Nt colors website.

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chhavi

@ishqwaalalove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK
Chaavi not related to ff bt xan u give me the links of full episodes of this week. Youtube or dailymotion or sumwhr i can download d show. Nt colors website.

Its chhavi dear
yup ...i use boss tv show. In site
search this site on google
From here u.can download epi easily

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snehaHCAPK

@snehaHCAPK

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: creationschhavi

Its chhavi dear
yup ...i use boss tv show. In site
search this site on google
From here u.can download epi easily

Are sorry yaar. I knw its chhavi bt m operating from mobile so must be a typo sry.😭

Thanks btw. Thanks a lot

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chhavi

@ishqwaalalove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

thank u all too core...for loving my ff giving ur precious feedback

Part -14

aditya chakor in centre on stage All point their gun towards them

Including suraj bhaiyaji manohar ranjana tejaswini too

aditya tells chakor :humara haath mat chhodna chakor Ye ravan meghnath aur inke saathi hum donon ka kuch nahin bigad sakte

Chakor :par ab hum karenge kya...???

Suraj kamal narayan aur baaki saare humko mil ke maar di hain Aur humri wajah se tumri jaan bhi jaayi hai

Aditya holds chakor hand more tightly

Adi :chakor tumhe kuch nahin hoga ...

Ab jaisa hum kahein waisa hi karna chupchaap

Adi signals her something

Kn sees them with bit of smile and anger on his face

suraj :kya fusfusa rahe ho Ab jo fusfusaana hai wo marne ke baad upar jaa kar fusfusaana

Aditya :choohe ...tu hume chhoo kar to dikha ... suraj comes towards aditya to hit him Chakor sprays mirchi spray in his eyes and on kamal narayan others too leaving vivaan

Thry hold hands and run

Suraj :ye chooha choohi ki itni himmat Kn :chhodna mat inko suraj Suraj :papa hum ankhein nahin khol paa rahe hain inhone kuchh daal dia Kn :suraj humari aankhein bhi nahin khul paa rahi hain Suraj bhaiyaji order their men to catch chakor and aditya

Chakor aditya while running : Chakor :tumre plan ne bacha liya aaj

Adi:abhi khatra tala nahin hai chakor bhaago...

Suddenly then vivaan imli block their way

aditya chakor vivaan imli on road Vivaan imli with guns

chakor gets shocked

aditya too

Chakor :imli vivaan Tum hume pistol dikha rahe ho?

Vivaan :haan to

chakor :humri dosti humra pyaar sab bhool gaye ek jhatke mein tum...?

Imli :bas kar dedi ...tu kisi se pyaar nahin karat hai ...bas dhoka devat hai

aditya :chakor baat had se aage bad chuki hai Ab humaare paas sirf ek hi chaara hai Chakor heartbroken Adi :chakor chakor.. .

aditya carries her and runs backside from diff way

in diff way...

chakor shocked And irritated chakor :ye kya karat ho tum humko yahin utaaro...

aditya :nahin utaarenge Peechhe dekho imli aur vivaan bhaiyaji ki sarii team humara peechha kar rahi hai Aur tumhein yahaan utarne ki padi ..hai

Chakor :hum 501 hain Ye hume nahin pakad sakte Tum humko utaaro abhi

Aditya gets irritated :madam 501 ...agar ab ap kuch boli naa to yahin par patak denge apko

Chakor beats adi childishly in irritation

humko pata hai tum humko yahaan chhodkar akele kahin nahin jaoge bijli dabba

Tum humko utaar do hum 501 runner hain humko kuchchho nahin hui hai par tumri jaan humre kaaran khatre mein hai Tum humko yahaan utar kar bhag jao adi ... Aditya :ye hum dono ka plan tha Hum tumhe akela chhodkar kahin nahin jayenge samjhi tum...

Madam 501

He runs more fastly

kamal narayan vivaan imli gets tired of running behind them Suraj :papa wo to bhaag gaye firse kn :nahin aisa...nahin ho sakta Imli :kahaan jayenge bhaag ke Pakdo inko

Deedi ne humko dhoka diya hai ab hum uko nahin bakshenge Vivaan :dhokaa...?

Imli :hum tuko ii baad mein batavenge abhi chalo deedi ko dhoondna hai kisi bhi halat mein

Chakor aditya running Aditya takes releif Chakor :kya hua...? Ab kahe ruk gaye? Adi :madam hum azaadganj se bahar hain yaa ni ki safe safe safe ...

chakor hugs aditya She cries Aditya :chakor ...ab to hum bach gaye...ab kyon ro rahi ho ...?

Chakor keep crying

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snehaHCAPK

@snehaHCAPK

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Luved d ff. Finally chatya r safe. Bt y vivaan n imli have again started hating chatya. Waiting for d next part. Update soon.

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chhavi

@ishqwaalalove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK
Luved d ff. Finally chatya r safe. Bt y vivaan n imli have again started hating chatya. Waiting for d next part. Update soon.

thank u dear 😳

updating it now...⭐️😳

vivaan imli not negative they r just in confusion state of mind...both have suffered a lot therefore

they will reform soon...😊

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chhavi

@ishqwaalalove

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Part -15

chakor keep crying aditya caresses her hairs

to let her know that she is not alone he is will be always with her ...

chakor :humri behen humra dost vivaan ...

Sab kuch badal gaya par tum?

Adi :hum...hum kya? He looks into her eyes and she too looks into his eyes

Chakor says lovingly with care Par tum nahin badle ... Aditya adores her

chakor:hum 10 baras azaadganj se door kya rahe sab kuchh badal gaya sabse jyaada vivaan Imli ko pata nahin kya hua wo to humse bohot pyaar karti thi naa ... Chakor :par...najaane kyon 10 baras mein humri dosti kabhi nahin badli

Aditya :hmm wo to hai! par ye aansu kyon?

Chakor cries

on his shoulder

Adi :are are ...itne saare ansun hume merne ka idea hai kya She hits him Chakor :matlab? Khabardar jo age se aisa kuch bola she points finger at him angrily

aditya:wo kya hai na madam 501 He hold her finger

Tumhaare aasooon se yahaan baad aane ka khatra hai aur agar wo aagayi naa...to hum ... She puts her hand on his mouth to shut him

They get engaged in eyelock Tere bin tere bin Tere bina jeena nahin Jeena nahin tere bin...

Aditya :mmm He signals her to move her hand

from his mouth

but she keeps adoring him...and remembers all their moments together

ye din tanha kyon rahe Kyon tukdo mein jiye... Mujhe teri zaroorat hai plays

Aditya also gets lost in her eyes

Their eyes speaking volume

suddenly it starts raining...

Aditya shouts listening the sound of rain :aaa

Chakor gets shocked seeing adi shouting she moves her hand from his mouth

Aditya shouts :baarish...!!!!

Both looks upward

Chakor smiles and looks at adi Aditya:ye look kya de rahi ho mujhe Chalo yahaan se Warna poori bheeg jaogi

he holds her hand ...

chakor gets irritated

he makes her sit under a tree with him

Chakor gets sad and sees adi angrily

chakor:Boring!!!!

Adi:kya kaha tumne?

Chakor:maine kaha B for Boring

Adi:haan to ...!!mein aisa hi theek hoon

Chakor :adi gussa mat karo pls chalo naa barish ka maza lete hain ...

adi :nahin ...hume tumhari tarah bimaar padne ka shauk nahin hai! Samjhi!!

Chakor :theek hai, to tum yaahan betho hum chalat hain ...barish ka maja lene

Both gives angry look to each other

chakor starts enjoying the rain Aditya sees her adoringly

SONG PLAYS

Hmm...

After some time chakor shivers Adi makes her wear his court

chakor dances in the rain and he keeps adoring her

Chhuteya na chhute mose
Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna

Hmm... aa...

Tere liye aaya main toh
Tere sang jaana
Dholna ve tere naal
Jindri bitavaan

Kadi naiyo chhodna
Ishq di dor na
Saare chhad jaayen maahi
Tu na chhodna

Aditya mummers to himself :maybe...chakor is right...main aur boring ... He laughs at himself

And sees chakor enjoying rain...

Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna

Chakor holds adi both hands and makes him open his hands with her Both smile

Aditya sees chakor and in funny bit angry way says boring with opening hands

Chakor says :tum boring she points finger at him

Hmm..

Tere sang hasna main

he hold her finger And both laughs madly
Tere sang rona
Tujhme hi rehna main
Tujhme hi khona

Chakor adi enjoys rain with titanic pose holding their hands together

Dil mein chhupa ke tujhe
Dil naiyo kholna
Marke bhi maahi tosey
Munh na modna
Bolna mahi bolna
Bolna mahi bolna

Both enjoys the moment fully Forgetting all pains of their life A beautiful smile spread on their faces❤️

Chhuteya na chhoote mose
Rang tera dholna
Ik tere baajo dooja
Mera koi mol na
Bolna maahi bol na (bol na)
Bolna maahi bol na (mahi bol na)

Hmm... aa...

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