Aditya,Chakor,Vivan,Imli after leap FF-Its Destiny(updated pg9) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: smiles_uk

adi chakor falling for each other ... good

abha also senses it ...

story is moving along nicely


thanks alot dear ...for ur precious feedback...😊😳
every love story is complicated😉
and the same her love triangle...😆😳vivaan is not negative he is good from heart slowly he will realise meaning of true love 😳⭐️😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Part-12 is really excellent 👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Abha and Chakor scene and her memory of Rawat house is really heart touching.
But I don't like Vuvan entrry of chatya's life.

Your story update remember me old memory of Chatya 😊😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: 34DAYA56

Part-12 is really excellent ⭐️
Abha and Chakor scene and her memory of Rawat house is really heart touching.
But I don't like Vuvan entrry of chatya's life.

Your story update remember me old memory of Chatya 😊😊😊

thanks alot dear for urs lovely feedback ...😊😳
i tried to put my best to show the cutest bond of chakor abha which i always adore...⭐️
vivaan is not bad from heart ...he will understand the meaning of true love diff btw right and wrong slowly...it will take time...😊
i am glad dear that i succeeded in refreshing chatya memories ...for all chatya fans including u ...😳⭐️❤️
Edited by creationschhavi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
I am really liking this story, Chhavi.

😳

ChaTya are very cute.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: clarity

I am really liking this story, Chhavi.

😳

ChaTya are very cute.


thank u so much dear...😊⭐️
and yup ...,chatya are reallly too cute ...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
very nice..👏
thanks for the pm 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: I...

very nice..👏
thanks for the pm 😊


thank u dear 😳

and most welcome...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

most welcome...i am happy u like ...it...😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Part-13 ⭐️😊

chakor goes in the same park adi was sitting
she sees him
chakor:bijli dabba...tum...yahaan?
aditya:hume chhodo tum batao tum yahaan kaise...?
chakor:kuch nahin...wo...
aditya:hume kuch dikhana hai tumhe ...chalo humare saath
chakor:nahin...abhi humko bas pakad ni hai
aditya:pata hai...maa ne kaha tha ki 12 baje bus ayegi
to matlab ...poore 50 mins hain abhi humare paas
chakor:nahin hume kahin nahin jaana...
tum akele hi chale jao..
aditya pats her head ...are buddhu hum akele jayenge to surprise kisko denge...
chakor..:kya kaha ...surprise...
adi:nahin kuch nahin...
chakor:par tumne to abhi...
aditya puts her hand on chakor mouth to shut her mouth ...
kitna bolti ho tum...
he makes her wear a patti on her eyes
chakor:ee...kya hai.,...tum humri ankhon par e kya bandhe ho...
humko late ho jayegi...
aditya holds her hand...and tells her to be quite
he takes her to a beautiful lawn
there he gives her surprise of their all old memories...
lawn covered with many teddy bearsof diff types ...
and below them written name of them ...mausa mausi dada dadi from rawat house with adi
vivaan adi chakor friendship their friendship club teddy bears three
chakor maai baabu imli on the other from bhuvan home...
she gets totally surprised by such a wonderful gift ...
she had never gifted by such a beautiful gift before by someone...
she was totally amazed
her eyes stuck on her bijli dabba teddy bear
she hold it and hugs it...
chakor:bijli dabba...thanks meri life ke itna khoobsurat banane ke liye ...mujhe khul ke jeena sikhane ke liye...main tumko sabse jyaada miss karungi
adi...she turns...
adi kahan hai...?
she calls him loudly ...here and there...
just then a video plays having memory of all of chakor moments with vivaan adi her family...and rawat family and all...
both have tears in their eyes now...
(cant take this part very long...as where i have written it is now...last so will continue the story main story fom next parts...hope its good...)
adi hold chakor hand and says ab late nahin ho rahi
theek das min pehle tum bus top par pahuchaana hai ...
both ran holding each other hands...and finally they reach the busstop
adi:lo agaya bus stop ...
chakor.:raises her hand for hifi...
adi and chakor hifi ...and totally lost in the time they spend with each other...from childhood to now...
just then buswala calls..
chakor leaves adi hand...adi...hume jaana hoga ..bye.,...
adi:bye...chakor...
chakor sees the bus going...
she catches the bus from back ...and goes on it roof sits there...
and keep seeing her friend...best friend...
both have tears in their eyes...
their ways seperated...but one cant forget the memories...

chakor reaches azaadganj...
she meets all there...
vivaan ,imli,her family...etc...
she sees vivaan totally changed...even more...
he now...drinks...and do not even cares for anyone...she sees him drinking and breaking the car glass...by throwing that bottle on it...
he is now...a destroyer...
he is good at heart but he think noone cares for him...
he lives life onhis own terms now...
he leaves house...for many hours...do not come back home...easily...
all kn ranjna fed up of him...

one day chakor meets adi abha again
they talkabout their motive of coming to azaadganj..


on new year chakor comes to aditya home at night...and request abha mausi to take adi with her...as its new year
there chakor and adi hides and runs...so that noone can identiy them...its 12 at night
gives him new year surprise and both enjoys fully
after 1 hour,
chakor :aditya 1 baj gaye hain ...ab hume ghar chalna chahiye
Aditya and chakor yawns
Adi:haan chalo
Adi:ek min jahaan se hum aaye hain wahaan ka gate 12:30 par band hojata hai...
Chakor:to ab kya...
Aditya:ab kya matlab .. ye sab tumhari waj se hi to ho raha hai humne pehle hi kaha tha ki humari aankhon par patti mat bandho par tum . ...
chakor:ab ye bataao ki waapas ghar jaane ka rasta kahaan se hai ...
Adi:humare ghar jaane ka rasta to band hai par haan ek tareeka hai...

Chakor:kya... ?humko bhi bataao ...
Aditya:peecche ke raaste se tumhaara ghar aa jayega. ...
Chakor:aur tum ...
?
Aditya:are humari chhodo
Abhi tumhaara ghar pohochna sabse jaroori hai ...
Chakor:par hum tumhari jaan khatre mein nahin daal sakte. .. agar bhaiyaji ne ya unke kisi bande ne dekh liya to...?
Adi:are tum humari jaan ki parva mat karo . ...agar hume tumhari khushi ke liye jaan bhi deni pade na ..
Chakor shuts his mouth but placing her hand on it
Chakor:khabardar jo aaj ke baad aisa kuch kaha to
Kuchh nahin hone denge hum tumhe...
Samjhe tum ...
Tere liye duniya chhod di hai ...tujhe pe hi saans aake ruke ...plays...
Adi:samajh gaya
Chakor smiles :good
Jab tak chakor aditya ke saath hai na...tab tak use kuchh nahin hone degi...iss baat ko apne bheje mein ghusa lo...
Adi:aur jab tak aditya chakor ke saath hai na tab tak koi uska kuchh nahin bigaad payega .. tum bhi is baat ko kabhi mat bhoolna ...samjhi
Chakor:hmm...
Both smiles and ishaqzaade song plays...

next part

At morning...
Chakor is outside the haveli with aditya in his home ...
Chakor:aditya...to bolo kaise lag rahe hain hum
Aditya:wow...patiyala suit
Chakor:kaisa laga mausi ne diya...
hai...
Aditya:achchha hai...humari manki ki pasan hai...
aditya:chalo ye sab chhodo...
Ye batao ki tum...taiyaar ho na humare plan ko execute karne ke liye...
Chakor:hmm..
Aditya:kahin tumhe dar to nahin lag raha...
Chakor:nahin ...par hume tumhari chinta ho rahi hai...hum apne matlab ke liye kahin firse tumhe use to nahin kar rahe...
Aditya:nahin...chakor yeh tumhaara matlab nahin hai balki yahi to humara maksad hai bhaiyaji se badla lena humare papa yaani tumhare mausaji ki maut ka...
Both are sad
They hold their hands
Aditya:vaada karo humse ki raaste jitne chaahe mushkil kyon naa ho..
.par bhaiyaji se badla lene mein tum humara saath dogi ...
Chakor:hum vaada karte hain aditya ki humaara saath koi nahin tod payega aur main bhaiyaji se badla lene mein tumhara poora saath doongi...
Scene shifts to haveli
Chakor and aditya dressed up as dancers in bhaiyaji sister marriage
Aditya has dressed up as sardaar and chakor as punjaab di kudi.
...
Some dancers are invited by bhaiyaji and aditya and chakor sees them from behind...and then asked permission from them to dance and they also told them that we just want to develope our dancing skills so we will not take money but try our best in the performance ...
Chakor and aditya enters in bhaiyaji haveli as dancers...
bhaiyaji identifies chakor and aditya
Vivaan and imli gets shocked to see them ...dance starts ...
Chakor and adi dances on patiyaala song hung da lashkara
All the members are shocked to see them
Then as per adi chakor plan ...
Adi and chakor changed there dress and wears the masks ...chakor in princess gown and aditya in court pant royal look
Chakor in white pinkish golden mix gown and aditya in red royal look
wearing masks ...
their play starts...
Pyaar ki ek kahaani suno plays
Village girl and rich boy love story written behind ...
A love story cant stay with diff casts
Ek ladka tha ek ladki thi...
Aditya and chakor here are at the backstage and other dancers dancing and the video of two village lovers shadow playing
...
Song cont playing...
Video plays and portrays how chakor and vivaan fall in love and how vivaan is convinced by his mother that chakor is betrayed ...and how bhaiyaji family play a role in breaking chakors heart punishing her for falling in love with a rich thakur ie none other than vivaan thakur
Its a love story which portrayed how chakor changed vivaan from a bad one to good one change of heart but destiny seperated them and it has some other plans. ...
Chakor and adi enters
on the stage and song playes in bg.
Wo mil gaye adi hold chakor hand and
Saved her from train
How chakor adi support each other in tough times
Wo khil gaye
How they lost in each other in the moments ...
They spent with each other
aur pyaar ho hi gaya...
jo khoya tha
How they seperated and then ...
Wo paaya hai ...
In the end how they dream for their udaan and ... how they joined their hands and united forever to take revenge against bhaiyaji...
Bhaiyaji...,manohar etc...
All are damn shocked and understand that adi and chakor have united to take revenge on them ...
the song gets overed and light flashes on adi chakor and their holding hands...
Kamal narayan manohar ranjna all takes out their pistol and points it towards adi and chakor ...

precap:


Chakor and aditya are in front of bhaiyaji and others holding hands as dancers
Suraj bhaiyaji others identified them
Edited by creationschhavi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Ho no vivaan destroyer .no way ..He can't hurt anyone ...I like chatya friendship ...

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