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friends...for all chatya and chakvaan fans i have written a ff ...hope you all will like it...😳😊
Adi chakor vivaan a journey of finding true love and friendship ff
Concept-chakor has studied really well ...against every path of bhaiyaji ...loves vivaan alot and know bhaiyaji manohar how clever they are ranjana also...she knows they all want her to leave vivaan life forever...
But somewhere she thinks vivaan will support her in tought times...
Vivaan is the character as he is now
Adi is the intelligent one ...scored very well in exams...even chakor is not so much studious as he is ...
Story starts with chakor saying good bye to her parents in train..
Maai ...babaa...bye...
Imli:di...di...bye...
Chakor:Bye imli...
Imli:apna khyaal rakhna ...
chakor:tu bhi apna aur maai baaba ka khyal rakhna
So are u liking the story
Is it good or not...
Adi is sitting on the upper of the train
And chakor inside the train
Vivaan running behind the train calling chakor name but chakor in her own world missing her maai baba and sister imli...train does not stop for vivaan and in anger he told kulli...dekha tumhari vaja se humari train miss ho gayi ... humari chakor humse door ho gayi...ab jaao yahaan se hogaya tumhaara kaam aur ab tumhe ek rupya bhi nahin milega iska...
Kulli-kaisa jamana aa gaya hai ...ek to kaam karo aur ...
Vivaan lost in his and chakor thoughts...
Kuch kaha tumne...tum abhi tak yahin khade hue ho...jao door ho jaao humari nazron se ...
He hits him
Then scene shifts to adi ...missing his dada dadi maa...and ishwar ...papa...
Papa aap kahaan ho ...hume apke saath ki zaroorat hai...
Precap-train stops at a station btw jaipur
Chakor steps out of the train humara bag kahaan gaya she stands on the platform searching for it and suddenly a man jumps on the platform from the roof of the train ...and chakor gets scared ...
Originally posted by: 34DAYA56
It is really mind blowing. Part 2 is better than 1
Great job 👏
⭐️
Loved it, Chhavi.
Waiting for the next part.
Write more, please.
😳
Chakor:mm...biscuit yummy hain
Adi:yummy to honge hi ...meri maa ne jo banaaye hain
Chakor:sachchi...?
Adi:haan meri mummy bohot achchhe biscuit banati hain...
Chakor:lo mera to pet bhar gaya...
she gives him biscuit packet ye kya humare liye sirf wrapper ufff...
adi says:bhukkhad kahin ki...kuchh humare liye bhi chhod deti
Chakor:tumne mujhe bhukkhad kaha...?
Adi:bhukkhad ko bhukkhad na boloon to aur kya bolun?
Chakor:ewww. ...
adi:bas jaipur aane hi wala hai...
chakor:shukar hai... Ab tum se peechha to chhootega
Adi:kya kaha
Wind blowing at high speed their hairs flying...
adi seeing his empty biscuit packet ...and throws it in dustbin near there
In train some new couples move towards adi and chakor and says oye adi tu yahaan...
adi:are tu...amar...kaisa hai...bhabhi bhi hain kya. .?
Chakor sees them
amar:haan hai na... Lo agai ... Adi:manya...tu college ke dino se aise gayab hui ki phir dikhi hi nahin...
Adi talks to them and chakor sees them ...and smiles a very little seeing amar and manya
Chakor feels sad as vivaan still do not trust her...he thinks she betrayed him...
But why he thinks so she even dont know...
Amar:chal ek gaana ho jaaye adi ki taraf se... Manya...:haan haan kyon nahin adi pls gao na...waise bhi hum sab jaante hain tumhe gane gana kitna achchha lagta hai
Adi:theek hai agar tum dono keh rahe ho ...to sirf tumhare liye... Par ek shart par ki uske baad amar gayega manya ke liye...bolo manzoor hai...
Amar says :manzoor hai
They give him guitar ...
Adi plays guitar .. .nahin yaar pata nahin aaj mood nahin hai... couple says:pls...yaar humare liye... Adi :ok ...ok...i try
He starts playing guitar again this time in melodious sound...
Aasmaan tera mera hua ... (Chakor gets lost in the music...and closes her eyes) Tera mera hua Adi shown singing... khwaabon ki tarah hua (chakor smiles a bit and losts in the music ...) Jaaein jahaan tu jaye ...(chakor starts remembering her moments with Vivaan)
paaye mujhe hi paaye ...(she closes her eyes and remembers how a hand is for her for help to save her from train which pull hers towards and she gets saved) suddenly she opens her eyes
and thinks this man has saved her ...she should atleast thank him...
Saiyaara tu saiyaara(adi lost in playing guitar) Saiyaara tu saiyaar(chakor confused when and how to thank him for saving her life and alao getting her inside the train ...)
Sitaaro ke jahaan mein milenge ab yaara(adi chakor shown together)
Adi chakor in train ...finally they reach jaipur station and train stops
All the people starts pushing each other in order to move out from the train
Chakor gets hurt and adi says to her :ruk jao ...araam se
Then adi says idea
Chakor:kya
Adi:ab jaisa hum kahein waisa hi karna ...nahin to is bheed se hum kabhi nahin nikal paayenge...
Chakor:theek hai...bolo kya karna hai...
Chakor acts to vomit...people around her see
Adi says:no no yahaan nahin...eww...
Achchha to mujhe jaldi se yahan le chalo varna main yahin par ulti kar dungi...
All the people are shocked seeing this scene
Chakor acts to vomit .. adi says:bas bas overacting ki dukaan ...bohot ho gaya...hum bahar aa chuke hain
Chakor finally gets a relief and takes a long breath
Then they both leave their hands...
chakor:aye mister...ruko...
Adi turns towards her and asks kuch kaha tumne...
Chakor:haan thanks...
Adi:wo kisliye...?
meri help kar ne ke liye aur meei jaan bachane ke liye...
adi:tumhe thx bolne ki zaroora nahin hai ... meri jaga koi aur bhi hota to wo bhi yahi
karta
Adi:lagta hai humara ye safar sirf yahin tak tha
Chalo chalte hain ...bye...
Chalo chalte hain ...bye...
Chakor:bye...
they both start going in different directions...
But chakor stops suddwnly and turns back and says o hello...aye mister... Adi:ab kya hua iss ladki ko...
He turns back towards her and says:kya hua...?
Chakor:maiya re...hum to tumse tumhaara naam hi poochhna bhool gaye...
He says shockedly ...
adi:aditya Chakor:kya kaha ...? She asks confusedly
Adi:aditya
He says loudly"aditya" in her ears...and she gets shocked
adi:ho gaya ab main jaaoon...
Chakor gets lost in thoughts ...
adi says hello...he moves his hand up and down infront of her face to see if she was listening or lost
he says ...ok bye...
adi moves in opposite direction happily with his bag...
Chakor remembers her friend...aditya...her best friend ever whome she used to share everything
She remembers her old moments with aditya...and tears fall from her eyes...
...she stops and turns back and runs behind adi
then she sees a vallet lying on the floor she think whose vallet is this...she must return it to his right owner...
She opens the wallet and a pic falls from it...
she picks up the pic and gets shocked...
Chakor:ye to meri bachpan ki photo hai... ye iss wallet mein kaise...
Kuch to gadbad hai...she goes to the announcer to ask by the name aditya who has left his fame. .and all here...
Chakor:iska matlab
Aadi ...kahin wo ...
itne time baad mila mujhse aur wo bhi aise...
she starts running with happiness of tears in her eyes that she wil soon meet her best friend adi...
on her way while runnning someone holds her hand
any guesses who is he...?
He pushes her to the backside of the wall...
suddenly...chakor tears of happiness turns into tears of sorrow...
and pushes her to the back Side of the wall ...
Vivaan:chakor tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakti ho...tumne ek baar nahin socha mere tumhare humare future ke baare me ...
Pehle to bohot dave kiya karti thi ki tum mujhe bohot pyaar karti ho aur mujhe kabhi chhod kar nahin...jaogi... He straights up his head...kyon ...kya hum galat bol rahe hain...
He holds her shoulder tightly pinxhing her to the wall in anger Chup kyon ho...bolti band hogayi...tumhari kya...
Humne aaj tak tumhaari madad ki jabbhi tumhein humari jaroorat padi...par aaj jab hume tumhaari zaroorat hai to tum hume yoon hi chhod kar ja rahi thi... He moves away closes his eyes in ager to control himself and then turns back to chakor...but she was nomore there...
his each and every word has hurted her to the core...
She ranned away
Chakor running aimlessly on the road. ...thinking about vivaan's behaviour towards her ...which has pinched her to the core.. .
she is crying endlessly while running...
She remwmbers how vivaan left her in chilhood called her cheater and dhokebaaz...
and then someone is there with her who supported her and helped her alot to meet vivaan in lucknow...and thats adi...who live for others only...
Chakor:adi... Kahan ho tum ... jab tumhaari best friend ko tumhaari sab se zyaada zaroorat hai to tum uske saath nahin ho...kyon...
Jahaan aaj vivaan ko meri zaroorat hai...na jane kyon mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai adi...pls friend waapis aa jao apni chakor ke pass...i am missing u alot...
Aaj mujhe tumhaare saath ki aur tumhaari advice ki bohot zaroorat...friend...pls...come back
She is feeling so sad and helpless .. ...she says to herself ...najane kyon par shayad vivaan aur meri kismat ka koi connection nahin hai...
shayad uss bhagwan ko bhi mera aur vivaan ka saath nahin manzoor isliye ye sab...
Scene shifts to vivaan on a resteraunt he was drinking and remembering what all had changed his and chakor life so much...
he remembers how...
vivaan and chakor both used to express their never ending love to each other while standing on the car top in front of the moon that chakor used to adore from childhood
Then one day their relationship breaks...ver very badly ever...
chakor told vivaan one day that his father manohar is behind all this... He remembers how chakor keep telling to him that his father is a fraud ...she requested him alot to believe her that his father is only acting to accept chakor...but he ignored her and shouted at her...
Vivaan mother makes him against chakor that she wants to destroy him...break their family...and on asking by him that why would she do that to him...
his mother replied as she loved ishwar a lot and manohar bhaiyaji are behind ishwar death ...chakor knows it...and therefore she is just playing with his feeling nothing else...and he also remembers how he slapped her in front of all for blaming his parents and going against them ...
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