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Posted: 16 years ago
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cute updates hun....i loved this part but i hate the cold shoulder both edward and bella give to one another lol...continue soon!!!
as always
sukhi :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this ff is really interesting i love it!!

gr88 work!
continue soon =]
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i luv it!!!!!plzzzz continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ohh godd..
that was truly amazingg..keep it up yaa
please continue..i cant wait!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow i just read the chapters and they are absoluetly fab 👏👏👏
gd job
continue soon😳
Edited by angelic shaz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^thank you for all of the comments every one🤗

Preview: The guys are just about to play truth or dare.


Chapter 9: Truth or Dare

BPOV:

"Alright Emmet. You go first."

"Fine. Cristy, truth or dare?"

"truth."

"Fine, what was the lowest grade you ever got?"

"I once got a 58 on my music midterm'somehow'it didn't affect my average at all, and I still ended up getting a 98!"

Everyone stared at her, including myself, mouths dropped. Edward questioned her.

"How?"

"That I don't know." She said, trying to make sense out of the situation as well.

"Ok, now it is Cristy's turn."

"Alright. Alice, truth or dare?"

"Dare." I didn't expect that from Alice, for some reason.

"Umm'okay. I dare you to'get your history test signed even though your not required to." Her voice sounded uncertain. Cristy was never good at making people do unpleasant things unless she had something against them.

Everyone laughed, expect for Alice.

"Nice one Cristy. If I didn't get a good grade on that one'thanks to you'I would be pretty upset rite now."

She bounced up and got it signed.

Now it was Alice's turn'uh-oh.

"My turn! Bella, truth or dare?"

"truth." I was never bold enough to do a dare.

"Alrighty then, umm, what was the most dangerous thing you have ever done?"

Interesting question. I was glad it was nothing dirty.

"Once, I went on a really dangerous ride on the Bahamas Island'I fell out of the ride and almost drowned in the Atlantic Ocean'I was twelve."

I watched apprehensively as everyone's jaw dropped.

"Oh my God! Bella! That must have been really scary!"

"Yup." I answered simply.

"And I thought I was brave!" Emmet said humorously, of course. Only Emmet could find something funny about a twelve-year-old girl almost drowning in the Atlantic Ocean.

We all laughed slightly at that remark. I couldn't help but sneak a few looks at Edward though'he almost looked---concerned! My eyes must be deceiving me.

Now, it was my turn.

"Now, I pick'.Lauren." Hey, since we are playing this game'I might as well have as much fun as I can, right?

"Truth. Do your worst, little girl."

I smirked.

"You asked for it. How many people have you slept with?"

She gasped while in total aghast. She definitely did not see that one coming.

"Oh, that's'easy'umm'one! My one and only Edward." She wasn't the best at lying. It was very clear'I saw Edward exchange angry glances at her'but, knowing Edward, this wouldn't bother him.

She moved on, and so went the game. No one made any body do anything terrible dirty'before I knew it, I fell into a deep sleep on their floor.

And I woke up snuggled in Edward's cold, muscular arms.

Edited by ~devi~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow dat was awesum!!! 👏👏👏
loved the truth and dare game and the look dat edward gives to bella was fabb
cnt wait
continue soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!! i'm loving the FF... the updates were cool!!!

ud soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^thank you guys🤗

Chapter ten: Fracture! Wait...no..two fractures!


Recap:

Bella woke up cuddled tightly in Edward's arms.

Back to the story now:

EPOV:

I was shocked to find Bella in my arms, yet I didn't let go. The feeling was amazing, having her in my arms, her gentle and warm body softly against mine. Her hair was blocking my view of her face, so I took my hand and brushed it away, allowing me to see her beautiful face.

Snap out of it Eddie! What do you think your doing!?

Truth be told I had absolutely no ides what I was doing. To my shock, Bella's eyes were wide open starring at me in confusion.

"Edward, how did I get here?" She asked me in the sweetest way possible.

I had to smile at her innocence.

"You fell asleep last night while we were playing and I decided to carry you upstairs, I tried waking you up so that you could go to your room but you were seriously tired, so you just fell asleep here."

I felt myself grin after seeing her shocked expression. What did she think happened?

"Oh." She finally said, dazed. She turned away and stood up, leaving me confused. What was she doing? Did she realize that any other girl would have killed to be in the position she just was?

I guess she didn't.

She frowned slightly and started walking away. What was she doing?

"Bella, is something wrong?"

"No." She answered simply. Her tone seemed as if she were mad at me. But why?

"Bells, are you mad at me? Did I do something?" I asked, trying my best to dazzle her. She stuttered a bit, which popped a grin on my face.

"Of course I am! Do you not remember what happened yesterday? You still don't believe me about the door!" She sounded so childish I had to laugh.

My Bella hadn't changed one bit.

My Bella?? Edward! What's gotten into you!!?

"Bella," I stood to grab her from moving forward, "hey, listen to me," I pulled her closer to me.

"Bella, believe whatever you want, but I am not giving in that easily."

''''''..

BPOV:

I stared at him with a frown and walked away from him as quickly as I could.

The minute I leaved his huge room, a really happy Alice was starring me right in the eye.

"So, Bella, how was your night with Edward?" She asked with great excitement.

"Umm..fine, Alice, I suppose."

She led me into the kitchen and we all ate breakfast. Lauren and Jessica kept fighting with each other for a space on his lap, and I ignored them all completely.

Alice finally broke the scilence.

"Oh my god! Bella! We only have two hours to get you ready for your ice-skating show! We have to start now!!"

She screamed and then grabbed my arm and rushed me into her room.

She and Rosalie attacked me. They had several unknown products in their hands and refused to listen to any of my complaints.

Finally they were done, and I was starring at a complete stranger in the mirror. Then I realized'that was me!

"Wow! Alice! I'you'and'I"

Alice just laughed and we went downstairs.

(A/N: picture of Bella's dress for the competition on profile. There are two, pick the one you like the best)

To my great surprise, Edward Cullen was right there, standing in front of me with his three girls surrounding him. When he saw my expression, a playful smirk came upon his face.

I scowled at this and proceeded, confused as to who I was going with when I reached the driveway.

"Bella, your going with Edward, Lauren, Tanya, and Jessica. See ya there!" Chirped the sly Alice. Cristy tentatively smiled at me, and I smiled back, assuring her that she had nothing to worry about.

I got in the car and sat at the door that actually opened. Tanya, Jessica, and Lauren were fighting over who gets the passenger as usual.

Edward muttered something and we all drove to rink. I was there just in time.

Everyone else took their seats after wishing me good luck. I was only slightly nervous, that is, until the meanest girl on the entire team met up with me.

"Watch out Bella, cause there is no way your going to win!" She yelled at me. I didn't let her get to me though. I knew I was ready.

I couldn't help but look at Edward occasionally. Before I knew it, it was my turn! Oh God!

I began my routine and stunned the crowd with my triple loop turn and one foot glide. I leaned my self in with a jitter when it came it to the fun music, and did some crossovers too.

Then, just as soon as I was doing my final spin, which was supposed to end my performance, there was a black little object on the floor at the place I was supposed to land. It was too late to do anything. I tripped over it and felt straight on my left ankle.

I heard several gasps and found that I couldn't get up. The pain was simply to severe. I felt like my ankle just couldn't move, as if it had fallen off. I shrieked for help and so came several people.

They held me as I used my good leg to move over to the bench.

Alice and Cristy rushed to my side immediately, and then the others followed.

"We have to get her to the hospital immediately!"

And therefore, I was rushed to the nearest hospital. They were great people and took me in immediately.

They took my x-rays and found out that I had two fractures and would be on crutches for at least six weeks. Great! Just what I needed! A fracture! (Oh, no, I am sorry, TWO fractures!)

Now what?!


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